U R MINE! ( mayur ff)upd part 26 on pg 112 6/ 2 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey komal, nice start. i hope d gal is nups...continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderful part
n thank u so much for pm
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Wow
good start
loved mayank and gangs convo
so maynk is waiitng for his dream girl
hmm now waiting 4 nups entry
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wen u update plz pm me
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thanks alot guyz!!! i m extremly overhelmed with ur response.


PART# 2
suhani nupurs (elder sister of nupur) was siiting in her bedroom and watching fashion magzines for her wedding costumes, bcoz her wedding date has been finalised and held after 3 months, she is recently engaged with adhiraj who is samrats elder brother. so now adays its her routine to watch fashion magzines and discuss with her beloved younger sister nupur, suhani watch something and screamed with excitement.
S: nupppuuurrr come here! see wht i found, nupur who is getting ready for her collage see her sister and slowly node her head and see back to the mirror and trying to adjust her loonng dupatta on her shoulder, when suhani get no answer frm nupur and see her busying in adjusting her dupatta she screamed with anger,
S: oo chlopatraa, bus kerday nahi tu ajj mirror hi toot jayga, idher ana dekh mainay kitna zaberdast lehnga dhonda hay apni wedding day pay main yehi pehnoo gee, see na. nupur saw her and give beautifull smile and reached behind her and saw wht she found and said
N: hmmmmm not bad deee buhat khubsurat hay bilkul tunhare terrhanshe said and put her hands around suhani shoulder and said teasingly
N: waisey dee yeh apka 7 pasand kiya huwa ghagra hay ab yeh bato k shadi tu ek din main hogi tu yeh 7 ghaagray kaisey pehnoo gee, kahin aisa tu nahi her pehraay k baad pandit gee say kahoo gee "twotime pandit gee abhi ghagraa change ker k aaee." suhani who is listening to nupur seriously give a petty slap to her on shoulder and said smilingly,
S: chal un 7 main say jo sab say best hoga wohi banaongee aur tu us main mere help keray gee hay na?
N: ofcourse dee yeh bhi koi kehnay ki baat hay. suddely she saw clock which showing 7: 55 am she screamed,
N: OMG! 8 bajnay main sirf 5 min reh gay hay main collage kaisey pohnchoogee. she grab her bag and ran to the door and said to herself ajj tu main gae shukla gee mujhay choraingay nahi main kya keron? suddenly a motorcycle stopped beside her, a very charming hunk sitting on it he remove his helmet and saw nupur with his bright smilee and said,
no fear when samraat is here!
N: samraat acha huwa tum agay jaldee chalo sirf 5 min hain humaray pass, she sit with him on his bike and samraat drive towards colllage.
N: array jaldee chalo na tumhare phatphatee. she said with gr8 annoyance. samraat look back to her and said warningly
S: look mere mehboba ( his bike) ko phatphatee mat bolana, hum bus pohanchnay walay hain. they reached the collage and run to the class and sit on back nupur take a releave breath as shukla sir enter in class and start his PAKKANA ( as samrat said)
S: nupurr wht r u doing at evening? coffe chalain, he said wisperingly in her ears nupur gave her a tight look and said gringly
N: samraat mujhay lecture sunnay do, plzzz aur apni bakwass band kero! and move her haed towards shukla sir and listening again carefully, samraat saw her and said annoyangly
S: us sukla ki kerway keraylay jaise baatain itnay man say sun rahi ho aur mere honey jaise baatain tumhain bakwass lag rahi hain theek hay yaar theek hay dekh lee tere dosti, said dramatically, nupur just give him a look but remain silent rest of the lecture, as class overed all students run toward the door, nupur stand and grab her bag and move but suddenly she stop and saw samraat is still sitting on her desk with baloon face, nupur saw her with smile and said
N: chalo ab kis ka intezaar hay?
S: mujhay tumsay koi bakwass nahi kerni, and move her face towards boad
N: sorryy babba i m realy sorry mujhay tumhain aisay nahi kehna chaiye tha kya tum mujhay maaf nahi kerogay. she said appoligitaclly. samraat saw her and said seriously,
S: aisey kahoo gee tu jaan bhi day doonga maafi kya cheez hay sweet heart! and give wink to nupur, she stand like she has 1000 walt current touch her and said furiously
N: dont call me sweet heart samraat kitne baar mana kiya hay, she said and bind her both hand around her chest, samraat saw her with mischevously smile and want to said something but suudenly his mobile start ringing he pick up his mob the call is frm his brother adhiraj,
A: where r u? have u forget we are going to buy birthday gift for suhani and u r going to help me in it. samraat put his hand on his head and said,
S: ya ya i m coming! wait 4 me i m just coming ok bro! he said and diconnect the phone and move towards nupur and told her about his going and said
S: chalo main tumhain drop kerdeta hoon gher.
N; no thanks samraat i want to issue some books frm library and i go my self. dont worry but u go fast ok.
S: r u sure!
N: ya offcourse!
S: ok bye tc said and rush towards the door, nupur saw him frm back she smiled and wisperingly said "PAGAL", she move to library, passing the coridoor she thought " life is so perfect now my every loveonce so happy every thing seems to be perfect i m so much thankfull to my god who make my family so much satisfied". she enter in library but she dont know two choclate brown eyes following her continously, and frm now her life will be totally changed.


PRECAP: mayank nupur first meeting...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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komal lovely part dear can't wait mayur meeting n plzzz make it long next update thanks 4 d pm
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nice part yaar. just fab...............cant wait 4 Mayur meeting............those chocolate brown eyes blongs to mayank na?
bt next time ek lamba sa update karna. i love to read ur ff.
thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Awwwwwwwwww wonderful part
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

sanur were too good
loved their convo

Wah 2 chocolate brown eyes following her.
Hmm very interesting-kahi ye maynk tou nehi

now i m waiting for mayurs meeting.
plz update next part soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely update
waiting fr mayur meeting
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1 and 2 were gr8

cont soon

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