U R MINE! ( mayur ff)upd part 26 on pg 112 6/ 2 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesum part Komal
n precap sounds so interesting
plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys! h r u all haan? ek dum mast na, well thanx alot once again guyz for all ur appreciation and love.

PART# 4

as nupur went to her house she quickly closed the door and breath heavily, but she feel so much relaxed as she enter her home, home wht a secure place, walkinh slowly she went to her room and laydown on her bad and thought about the person whom she met in collage parking, shakal say kitna shareef lagraha tha, per ek number flirty tha by god kya samjha usnay mujhay us ki car ya personality dekh ker main us k sath cheee never ever she noded her head and said bhar main jaye main itna kyun such rahi hoon is baray main in lerkon ka tu kaam hi yehi hay" as nupur is lost in her thoght her mother came in room and saw nupur lying on the bed she said
NM: array nupur tum kab aaen? she sit beside her hand on head of nupur nupur saw her maa and said
N: abhi aae maa, kya kal birthday ki saree prepration hogae?
NM: haan beta bus khuch kaam baqi hay tum fresh ho jao phir mil ker kerlaingay ok!
N: ok maa main bus abhi aaeeshe said and rush towards bathroom.

NEXT DAY IN COLLAGE:
NUPUR take her last class and move towards corridoor today samraat not attend the collage bcoz he is busy with some work, nupur want to go home as soon as possible bcoz today is suhani's birthday and adhirajj and all his family is invited today, she walks bit fastly but suddenly he listen someone taking her name
nupur nupur she turned back and get frozen that guy OMG how he know my name she thought, as he coming near to her she turned and start walking fastly as fast as she can she can listen that guy called her name again and again but she cant turn she move towards exit, she stop for a while and grab the piller she breath heavily she turned back and saw he is not there
N: thankk god! but how did he know my name? she take a deep breath and start walking, as she pass throgh old class room someone grab her hand so much fastly she cannot stop herself and went to fall but their is two strong arms who grabbed her she turn her face and saw her throat become dry stammeringly she said
N: tu tu tum choo roo mujhay, leave me! she struggling to get out his arms, he back frm his thoughts as before he is busy on stairing her he left her, nupur want to ran towards the door but he hold his hand tightly and said
N: nupur listen to me i want to talk u realy important nupur tring to get her hand back frm his tight grip she said gringly
N: leave me ! i dont want to talk guyz like u! he pull her on the wall clutches both her arms he is very near to her , she can feel his warm breath on his face, she saw first time any man so much closed to her she saw so much anger in his choclate brown eyes he start saying wisperingly
wht u thought about me haan m i guy hangingout with girls listen carefully i m "MAYANK SHARMA" he want to say soo much thing but he stop he saw tears in her eyes and so much pain on her face , he saw his hands grabbed her arms so tightly suddenly he left his grip he can saw blue patches on her arms as he left her arms she rushly run frm there, mayank give tight hard punch on a wall how can i give her pain OMG their is tears in her eyes, noooo i cant see her like that neverrrr he fell to sit on a bench and put his both hand on his head.
nupur dont know how she reached her home as she enter the house she fell on her knees, suhani who is coming 4rm the kitchen saw her and move fastly toward her
S: nupur kya huwa? tu theek tu hay na? kya huwa tujhay bol na?
N: main theek hon dee bus chakker agay thay she trying to smile suhani help her to stand and sit her on chair , give glass of water which nupur did finished in one breath.
S: tu bhi na , ager tabiyat theek nahi thi tu kya zarrorat thi ajj collage janay ki dekh abhi adi or sab log atay hi hongay tu change ker k sirf araam kerna ok!
N: nahi dee main theek hoon bus abhi change ker kay aae she said and run towards her bedroom.
at evening all guests are sitting in drawing room adi's parents busying in serious condition with nupur;s parents suhani saw her each n every gift with adi, nupur is in kitchen and offcourse samraat is with her.
S: sweet heart! kitna kaam kerti ho yaar thora araam bhi kiya kero!
N: samraat dont call me sweet heart, koi sunlay ga tu kyaa suchay ga? she said irritately
S: yehi kahega kitna perfect naam rakha hay samraat nay said smilingly nupur want to say some thing but her maa came in kitchen and asked her for coming in room and want to talk her, nupur went to her room her maa is sitting on nupur's bed she came near to her and sit beside her,
NM: i want to talk u about ur life, samraat parents give proposal for u, so wht u say? maa asked her questiongly nupur was in schooked after bit she said hesitantly
N: wht can i say maa? do as u and papa felt right! nupur's maa hug her she smile and went to gave this good news to all, after some momment suhani enter her room and take her to drawingroom and sit her beside samraat, nupur is feeling so mucch shyy she looked down not dare once to look up, samraat mom gave him ring and he slip it on her finger, then nupur slip ring on samraat's finger suhani wass extremly happ that her sister will be her devrani
S: mujhay tu pata hi nahi tha mere birthday pay mujhay itna acha gift milay ga, kyun dever gee?
S: bus bhabi kya kerain main tu bhaiya ko company dena cha raha tha woh kya hay na ajj hi keh rahay thay ek mussibat gher la raha hain humlog tu mainay kaha k jab laa hi rahay hain tu dono ko hi lay atay hain said teasingly adi who is drinking water splash throgh his mouth and saw suhani with dam fear
S: kyaaaa? musibat or main adii main tumhain chorongee nahi she ran after him and adi run for his life.
S: sweet heart tum khush tu ho na?samraat said to nupur with concern
N: dont call me sweetheart samraat! said shyingly
S: array ab tu license hay meray pass sweetheart kehnay ka ahowing his ring which make nupur blushh.

there is 8pm; mayank was sitting in his room he constintly thinking about nupur he feel so much lost when she was in her arms in her eyes so much innoscene she was soo much near to him but he cant say say wht he want to say she assuming him wrong i want to talk to her right now! he said and pick the keys and move.
at bhushan house suhani went to dinner wth adi and nupurs parents went to go on a family function nupur was all alone in house she was lying on the bed and saw her ring with she thinking about samraat his concern about her but suddenly someone distract her thought by knocking the door she thought how dee come back so fast? she opened the door and the sight make her frozen
N: tum???? she hardly speak? mayank enter her home nupur move backward as he coming near to him bupur hardly speak
N: GET OUT FRM HERE!! she stop as she collide with wall, mayank hold his hand and said with all his love,
N:" nupur u have to marry me" nupur was schoked then coming back to her sense she push him hard and said angrily
N: listen mister i dont want to marry u i m already engaged now u get out frm here or i call the police? nupur show him her ring mayank got mad all the anger is blast on his head how? how can be she engaged how can be she someone else no no she is mine only mine, mayank saw her hand he grab her hand her grip was so tight that nupur cannot moved it. she saw his eyes getting red with anger and passionhe said scarsticallly
M: "U R MINE!!!!!!" only mine! and u have to marry me. he said and put out the ring for her finger which she wear and throw it so much hard nupur screamed with fear, pain tears rolling her face, mayank put out ring frm his pocket and slip in to her finger. and said M: "be ready for the wedding" and move out frm the house nupur fall on floor she cry loudly with so much fear and pain.



PRECAP:nupur bhushan become mrs nupur mayank sharma, searching of samraat




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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwesome prt
update soooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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what an update yaar..i love this possessive mayu.......the precap was good....pls continue soon..................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wat an update yaar
awesome
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesoem awesome update dear thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great update Komal. Want to know what happens next.
Please continue soon and thanks for pm.
Alisha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG waht an update dear
totally rocking
mayank a crazy lover
he totally mad for nupr
poor nupur-feel sad for her

very interesting ff
loved it lot

fantstic job
plz update next aprt soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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forfot to tell abt precap

amazing precap
eagerly waiting 4 ur update
plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowow tht was awesome all 4 part mayank is crazy in love with nupur plzz add me to your pm list

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