U R MINE! ( mayur ff)upd part 26 on pg 112 6/ 2 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

819

Views

82.7k

Users

61

Likes

1.6k

Frequent Posters

maloo19 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#11
wonderful concept
plz add me to pm list
Faria. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#12
amazing concept
plz count me in ur pm list
komal991 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#13

hello every one!!! thank u soooo much for ur respones i never thought of it, i will try my best to write best as me can. hope u like it.


PART#1[/B]
"AT SHARMA MENSION"
benjiman is a servant, bodygaurd,frd, elderbrother like shadow of MAYANK SHARMA, he is the only man whom mayank sharama trust in whole world he is with mayank since he was 10 yr. his mother aana also work in sharma mension, they both love mayank more than any else, same as mayank he love benjiman and call him benji.
BENGI knock the door twice but no one answer it, slowly he open the door and enter in a most beautyfull room of SHARAMA MENSION, he reached to the window and grab the curtains suddenly sunlight came in and room become lighten, he saw his master, brother,frd who is sleeping peacefully, he move to him and try to wake up sleepy mayank.
B: CHOTAY SAHAB , its 10 am morning wake up! ur frds waiting in drawingroom have u forget u want to go on haunting with them.
M: OOO i forgot ok i will be ready in two min,said them wait for me. he said and rush to the bathroom. and benji move to downstairs.

mayank went to his parking and sit in his pijaro with his frds and their journey begins. in this journey his frds uday, ranvijay, rahul, and vinay with him.
RV: its a bright sunny day today aaahhh wish my gf sheena is with me today. mayank saw him with confusionand said.
M: sheena but kal tak tu taniya thi na teri gf?
RV: ooh plz mayank yaar woh kal ki baat thi ajj ka din naya tu gf bhi nae, kyun? he asked him, mayank stair him with disgusting look which rv can observe.
RV: yaar hum teri terhan nahi hain bhai k lerkyun ko ghass bhi na dalin samjha ker yaar bara nazuk dil hota hay un ka. hesaid and laugh with his gang but mayank remain silent.
U: ab tu bhi khuch bol ya aisey hi ghurta rahay ga?
M: mera dil ya pyaar ko khairaat nahi hay jo sab ko batta phiroon, said with anger
V: array yaar we all know k tujhay lerkyun main koi intrest nahi hay but why, every girl in our collage and after in our circle are crazy about u, but u remain single up till now why? he asked weirdly.
M: bcoz i m waiting for someone.
U: dont say that u r waiting for ur dreamgirl. mayank look at him and smile and move his head to say yesss.
V: unbelievable man, he said with smile and saw uday how is in shock position, vinay shook his shoulder and said
V: wapis aja meray bhai maloom hay zor ka jhatka hay per mayank nay dheray say diya hay. uday grind his throat and look mayank with surprise and asked'
U: jahan pana app ki dream girl kaise hay or kahan paee jati hay?
M: hmmmmm wooh asmaan ka noor hogi, chamaktay taroon jaise ankhein, behte aabshaar (waterfall) jaisey baal khanakte huwi hansee aur phoolon see muskaan. mayank said in deeep thought.
V: woooww yaar gr8 choice kon hay kahan hay? asked excitedly
M: array yaar abhi dream main hi hay woh girl abhi tak mile nahi, jaisey hi milayge na tu ussay apna banay main ek pal nahi lagoonga. said with gr8 smile
U: janah panah apki dreamgirl apki dream main hi rahay gee, kyun ajj kal aise lerkiyan hosakta hay mars pay milan per earth per tu namumkin hay. he said with confidence.
rv who sitting quitely and listen to all finally said
RV: but i know a girl who is exactlylike wht mayank said.
mayank put the break and car stop suddenly he saw rv with his full of passion eyes and said grindly
M: where is she????


[/I][B]
[I]hey guyzz this is my first ff so plz bear with me, i m trying to write something new with hope that u all like it. 😳 😳 😳
komal991 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#14
thanx alot 4 appreciation.
Edited by komal991 - 15 years ago
sreevijayan thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#15
yupie...1st to comment....nice part dear...hope the girl is nupur...........
komal991 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#16
.hello every one!!! thank u soooo much for ur respones i never thought of it, i will try my best to write best as me can. hope u like it.


PART#1[/B]
"AT SHARMA MENSION"
benjiman is a servant, bodygaurd,frd, elderbrother like shadow of MAYANK SHARMA, he is the only man whom mayank sharama trust in whole world he is with mayank since he was 10 yr. his mother aana also work in sharma mension, they both love mayank more than any else, same as mayank he love benjiman and call him benji.
BENGI knock the door twice but no one answer it, slowly he open the door and enter in a most beautyfull room of SHARAMA MENSION, he reached to the window and grab the curtains suddenly sunlight came in and room become lighten, he saw his master, brother,frd who is sleeping peacefully, he move to him and try to wake up sleepy mayank.
B: CHOTAY SAHAB , its 10 am morning wake up! ur frds waiting in drawingroom have u forget u want to go on haunting with them.
M: OOO i forgot ok i will be ready in two min,said them wait for me. he said and rush to the bathroom. and benji move to downstairs.

mayank went to his parking and sit in his pijaro with his frds and their journey begins. in this journey his frds uday, ranvijay, rahul, and vinay with him.
RV: its a bright sunny day today aaahhh wish my gf sheena is with me today. mayank saw him with confusionand said.
M: sheena but kal tak tu taniya thi na teri gf?
RV: ooh plz mayank yaar woh kal ki baat thi ajj ka din naya tu gf bhi nae, kyun? he asked him, mayank stair him with disgusting look which rv can observe.
RV: yaar hum teri terhan nahi hain bhai k lerkyun ko ghass bhi na dalin samjha ker yaar bara nazuk dil hota hay un ka. hesaid and laugh with his gang but mayank remain silent.
U: ab tu bhi khuch bol ya aisey hi ghurta rahay ga?
M: mera dil ya pyaar ko khairaat nahi hay jo sab ko batta phiroon, said with anger
V: array yaar we all know k tujhay lerkyun main koi intrest nahi hay but why, every girl in our collage and after in our circle are crazy about u, but u remain single up till now why? he asked weirdly.
M: bcoz i m waiting for someone.
U: dont say that u r waiting for ur dreamgirl. mayank look at him and smile and move his head to say yesss.
V: unbelievable man, he said with smile and saw uday how is in shock position, vinay shook his shoulder and said
V: wapis aja meray bhai maloom hay zor ka jhatka hay per mayank nay dheray say diya hay. uday grind his throat and look mayank with surprise and asked'
U: jahan pana app ki dream girl kaise hay or kahan paee jati hay?
M: hmmmmm wooh asmaan ka noor hogi, chamaktay taroon jaise ankhein, behte aabshaar (waterfall) jaisey baal khanakte huwi hansee aur phoolon see muskaan. mayank said in deeep thought.
V: woooww yaar gr8 choice kon hay kahan hay? asked excitedly
M: array yaar abhi dream main hi hay woh girl abhi tak mile nahi, jaisey hi milayge na tu ussay apna banay main ek pal nahi lagoonga. said with gr8 smile
U: janah panah apki dreamgirl apki dream main hi rahay gee, kyun ajj kal aise lerkiyan hosakta hay mars pay milan per earth per tu namumkin hay. he said with confidence.
rv who sitting quitely and listen to all finally said
RV: but i know a girl who is exactlylike wht mayank said.
mayank put the break and car stop suddenly he saw rv with his full of passion eyes and said grindly
M: where is she????


[/I]hey guyzz this is my first ff so plz bear with me, i m trying to write something new with hope that u all like it.
[B]
[I]
komal991 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#17
sorrry guyzz excitement 2 baar post hogaya, aur mujhay delete kerna bhi nahi arha plz someone help me!
griffy.fz thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: komal991

sorrry guyzz excitement 2 baar post hogaya, aur mujhay delete kerna bhi nahi arha plz someone help me!

u can edit it and reserve it for replying to comments
u cant delte it...
or edit and reserve it for next part
btw great start
looking 4ward to next part !
tc
rock on
griffy
komal991 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: griffy.fz


<div align="center"><font color="#3366cc">u can edit it and reserve it for replying to comments</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#3366cc">u cant delte it...</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#3366cc">or edit and reserve it for next part</font></div>
<div align="center"></strong></div>
<div align="center"><strong><font color="#3366cc">btw great start</font>
</div>
<div align="center"><font color="#3366cc">looking 4ward to next part !</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#3366cc">tc</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#3366cc">rock on</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#3366cc">griffy</font></div>




thank u soo much yaaar!!!
-Samira- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#20

komal awesome n wonderful start thanks 4 d pm

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 8 months ago

SuVeer/RUhaani TS ~ Happily Ever After (Chapter 4 upd)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to ExoticDisaster C H A P T E R 1 After the completion of the final year exams, Mamta insisted Ranveer to come home from...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington · 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish · 6 years ago

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".