U R MINE! ( mayur ff)upd part 26 on pg 112 6/ 2 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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This seems awesome Komal!
Will read it tomorrow..
have to go to sleep in a while so I won't be done!
Looking forward to reading it :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
hey komal, lovely update
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Hey awesum part dear....add me in ur list n pls pm me nxt time...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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komal...............it ws really fantabulous.................mindblowing.................loved it..................cant wait for mayur suspns.

continue soon.
thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guyz thanks alot for ur appreciation the next part here u go!


PART #5

nupur was lying on a floor, when she back to her senses, she quickly run to found her enagagment ring she saw here and there then suddenly she found her ring lying next to the dustbin,tears runnig through her eyes continousely, she quickly hold it and try to wear but she found mayank 's ring in her finger she saw it with full of anger and hateness and try to remove it but the ring was so fixed on her finger but ring not comes out easily she pull all the force then ring comes out but her finger is coverd with blood bcoz rings gave deep cut around her finger, she want to wear her engagment ring but she cant she run towards her bed room she fall on her bad and start crying loudly....
mayank was sitting in his room he consistantly thought about nupur wht she said that she is enagaged "how can be she engaged and who the hell one who dare to thought of her, she is mine and will mine forever no body can snatch her frm me" mayank was in his thoughts, bengi saw him sitting in the dark he came in to his room and asked
B: chotay sahab wht happend? u seems to be in any tension, is everything is alright?
M: ya.....yess every thing is fine....... hmm bengi i slip the ring in her finger, and said all wht i want tto say! bengi looked surprise but he is very happy for mayank and said excitedly..
B: wht..? realy .. congrats chotay shahab! i m reallyyyy happy for u!! mayank gave him a smile and said
M:" thanks bengi but u have to do one thing tomorrow morning"

NEXT DAY....
suhani try to wake up nupur for collage but she was not in mood to go, she was still on her bad, she did not want to go collage bcoz of crazy sharma if he will come there noo.. i dont want to see him again, she pulled the blanket over her face. suudenly she listen samrat 's bike horon after little bit samraat was in her room he saw her that she is not ready for collage he said
S: ooy u r not ready yet? want to collage bunk today haan my sweet heart? he said and sit beside her he saw her with all his affection nupur dont want to see in her gaze so she standup and said
N: noo i m not feeling well. as samraat listen he jump to satand and ask concernly
S: wht? r u alright? wht happend have u a fever? he touch his forhead with his hand, nupur saw her with smile and remove his hand frm his forhead and said
N: i m fineee.. just feeling lowww so i thought i will take some rest. samraat look relief nupur again sit on her bad and said
N: samraat can i ask u something?samraat is also sit beside her and looked her
S: y u said that? ask me wht u can? nupur saw on the floor and hesitantly asked
N: aaa samraaat who is "MAYANK SHARMA"? samraat looked hr with amaze and said
S: r u talking about "THE MAYANK SHARMA" nupur gave him confused look samraat start again
S: "mayank sharma is a billionier his father was in politics, after his father death he is the onlyy owner of entire emperror, if i say that mayank sharma is the most powerfull man in the city would not be wrong" there is a shadow of a fear on nupur 's face samraat asked her
S: but suddenly why u asked about him? nupur saw him and hesitantly said
N: noo nothing important . i asked just like that.... hey r u not getting late for collage? samraat looked at watch and said
S: okk i m going but take care of ur self and i will meet u later in the evening soo by my sweet heart!! ran towards the door, nupur said by to him but he thought about crazy sharma she thought no i cant tell samraat about mayank, as he said he soo powerfull so he will be dangerous for him, noo i faced him alone whtever happened ,, happend to me but i cant afford any dangerness to my love once" she was lost in hier thoughts suddenly she listend suhani screemed for her name NUPURR NUPURR.....
suhani was in lounch she heard the door bell she opened the door she saw a middle height average looking guy stand there and have an envelop in his hand he said
B: is this nupur bhushan house? suhani saw her and said yess he took one step backward and orderd the 3 man who were standing behind him with thallss said
B: "take that in" suhani was shocked quickly she came back to senses and said
S: aay helloo whts all that? i think u were on wrong address. bengi looked at her and said
B: noo mam this is right address, can i meet madam nupur? nupurs mom was also went in louch she was also shocked to see all stuff suhani screamed NUPURR NUPRR as nupur listen suhani voice she ran towards lounch the sight was make her stunt for a second
N: wht the hell is all that? who send these stuff she asked angrily to the man, bengi gave her a letter and turn back to the door nupur suhani and their mom want to stop him but he moved quickly nupur open the letter she read

nupur jaan,
this is a tiny SHAGUN for u! i have only bengi in my family so i sent him, hope u like all the stuff.


only urs
MAYANK SHARMA

nupur head was brust with anger, she told about mayank sharma porposal to suhani and her mon but she skipped last night incident, suhani and her mom was worried, nupur saw address of sharma mension on the envelop, she quickly reached to the desicion and asked her mom for the keys of her carnupur maa refused to give her the keys
NM: noo nupur its not safe if u go alone there, wait when will ur pappa come he will go there. nupur looked her mon and said
N: noo maa pappa is a heart patient dont tell him any thing about it, and i will finished all this matter today trust me! suhani and her mom help her to put all stuff in her car three big thaalss of clothes, jewellery , sweets and fruit.first she move to her bedroom she opened her cupboard she find that ring she grabbed in her handand walk out to her room, she ran her car towards sharma mension.....

as she enter in sharma mension she saw a castle she parked her car and saw three servants stand their with folded hands they greet her she was amazed she said to them
N: will u plz help me to put out all the stuff frm the car they do as she saidthen follow her to the mension, as she enter in the lounch she saw mayank was sitting on a sofa, he was lost in his thought, nupur feeel shivered first but she control herself and make her voice as hard as she can
N: mr mayank sharma,wht the crap all is that? mayank saw her and quickly stand he saw so much happy and said..
M: nupur u r here my godness!! i was thoughting about u i.. nupur stop him by put her hand infront of her and said gringly
N: listen mr sharma, i told u that i m engaged, and i will marry soon to my fiancy so stop thinking about me, i will never be urs..i will bring back all ur stuff and by the last first and last time i came here and hope will u see never again." she put the ring on the table and turning to leave but mayank stop her by blocking her way he stand infront of her he saw her with all his passion in his eyes nupur feel shiverd across her spine wht was in his eyes she cant understand he took steps toward her and said
M: keh diyaa!! now listen mine, nupur take step backward as he coming near to her he looked in her eyes and said..
M: yesss my jaan u will marry soon with me, i stop thinking of u is like stop taking breath to me so forget it! u r mine and will be mine forever thats nobody could change, and yess u will come here again u will spent all ur life here with me, and in last i will slip this ring in ur finger on our wedding day" nupurs back is with a wall she feel so weak on her knees with fear tears roling down her face, she put all his power and said loudlyyy
N: that day will never happend mr sharma remember it! she said and run towards the door mayank look at her she was running towards the door he hold the ring in his hand, he saw it with affection and said
M: that day will very very near my jaan! and u will remember it forever!!!.......


sorry guyz part 4 precap u will find in part 6 actually my lonnggg post was deleted by mistake so plz bear it, and plzz leave ur precious comments its like strenghth 4 me.. hope u like that part.



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komal ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwesome prt
update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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niceeeeee part mayank is going crazyy about nupur
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Posted: 15 years ago
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fantstic updte komal loved it thanks 4 d pm try 2 udpate sooooooooon insha-allah
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank god u updated i was thinking about this only...

I m feeling bad for Nupur..
Lovely update!

Continue soon
Nd thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bechari Nupur 😭

Edited by Nirvrithi - 15 years ago

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