Life in Prison (AK) - Pa.4 Pg 17 - Nov. 15-10 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
congo 4 new ff n loved it
do continue soon
n thx 4 pm
n sry 4 late reply
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
cooooooool
awesome intro
loved it
do start soon
n congrats for the new one

love
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

congo 4 new ff n loved it
do continue soon
n thx 4 pm
n sry 4 late reply



Thank you... And no sorry... I was just missing them so I couldn't help myself from starting this one...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

cooooooool
awesome intro
loved it
do start soon
n congrats for the new one

love
pooja



Thank you... Pooja.... Yep, I am so happy for the result I've gotten for this fan fiction... It means a-lot.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I would like to thank everyone for supporting me and showering me with love. Before I begun I would like to introduce three characters...

Miss. Aha:
She is Kripa's teacher



Araina Rai:
Diva of Excel College who keeps Kripa entertain at college by her diva acting.



Soni: Kripa's best friend... They share a sisterly type relationship and they understand each other without speaking anything.




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Posted: 15 years ago
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Here is the awaited part...

Enjoy it!

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Part I

Kripa hardly slept after knowing about Angad's return after four years because his arrival means prison for her. She isn't allowed to hang out with her friends or isn't allowed to go anywhere without his accompany.

Kripa deeply, breathe in before getting out of bed afterwards heads straight into her bathroom. Quickly brush her teeth... takes a nice warm shower.... wipes her wet body with her towel... wraps her towel around her body before getting out of her bathroom... walks toward her wardrobe... opens it.

Looks inside her wardrobe... can't find her fade jeans and her white-blueish tank top... she look inside her laundry basket, but couldn't find it show she had no choice but to wear a churidar.

Frowns but quickly wears her churidar and apply light makeup... check her belonging before running out of her room... take blessing from Dadi (Dadi is Angad's grandmother who knows why Angad is over-protective of her and she stays with them. Loves Kripa a-lot and tries to support her in-front of Angad but nothing comes out of her mouth).

Dadi: Kripa beta... god bless you and give you strength to handle the storm coming into your life.

Kripa looked confused but didn't ask any question (regarding the storm coming in her life) because she's getting late.

Dadi notice Kripa running toward the door...

Dadi: Beta... eat something

Kripa almost outside the door...

Kripa: Nahiin Dadi! I'll eat something from college cuz I am late. Bye Dadi and please take care of the Hitler if he arrives earlier than me. And don't allow him to pick me up cuz I am not a kid anymore. I can take care of myself now. Bye

Dadi smiles par also frowns remembering why his grandson doing strict behaviour with Kripa. Only time will show Kripa the reality of Angad and his behaviour towards her.

Dadi silently prays to her god before going into her room.

- Excel College -

Kripa quickly made it to her first lecture before the bell rang. Her friends were happy to see her on time. She quickly sat beside Soni (Soni is her best friend... in fact they treat each other like sisters)

Soni whisper: Mahi... what took you so long? You could have been late today? Thank god you made it before the second bell.

(Everyone in Excel know Kripa as Mahi Sharma not by her real name. Only her close friends and her friend's family member know her real name is Kripa not Mahi but Soni's parents always calls her Mahi because she reminds them of their dead daughter Mahi who died in terrible accident. Even Kripa doesn't mind them calling her Mahi because she gets the love of a parent she never got in her life).

Kripa/Mahi: What can I do after hearing the news of Hitler's return? Last night I hardly slept. And now I am dying with dark circle around my eyes. By god! Why can't he just stay there and never come back to make my life a living hell.

Soni: Mahi... relax. Maybe he's changed from these four years so he might not be the same Hitler you hate. Maybe he might be the first you have waited for your entire life.
Kripa makes funny faces before saying "you wish... Hitler aur my prince charming... kabhi nahiin"

Miss. Aha comes and her student stand up to greet her...

Kripa/Mahi whisper into Soni's ear "now the fun is gonna start" she winked at Soni before settling down on her seat.

Two girls enter their class together....

Miss. Aha: Finally you got time to arrive class? Miss. Araina Rai

(Araina Rai know as the diva of Excel.... Everyone are smitten by her beauty but she's fida over Shashank... Who's Shashank? You'll know)

Araina looks straight into Miss. Aha's eyes...

Araina: You know Miss. Aha

Miss. Aha looks at Araina with a smile...

Araina: That my father is the trustee of this college and if you love your job than don't cross my path again in lecturing me about my late.

Miss. Aha: Please take your seat.... And flip to pg. 93 of your text book.

Kripa and Soni are controlling their laughter.... in fact the entire class.

- Canteen -

Soni: Suriji one milk shake for me with dash of strawberry....

Suriji: Ji putar... Aur Mahi Beti tum

Kripa/Mahi: The usual

Suriji: Alright

Kripa settle down with Soni on a table....

Soni: So how was your weekend other than the news of Hitler's arrival?

Kripa/Mahi: Everything was awesome until the news of his arrival anyways why is it so quiet today.

Soni: Because the chatter box....

Kripa/Mahi & Soni: Oh shit! Aren't we suppose to pick him up right now. He's gonna kill us.

Both girls rush out of Excel after completing their lectures for the day...

- Airport -

Many people are departing and arriving by there time at the airport....

Kripa and Soni are waiting patiently for their friend to arrive....

Soni: I thought he's suppose to be here by now. What's taking so long? Mahi
Kripa/Mahi: I don't know! Maybe his flight is delayed.

Soni: I think you are right... Mahi

Kripa/Mahi: Soni... wait here.... I'll be back in awhile.

Soni: Where are you...

Before Soni could complete what she wanted to say... Kripa left.

Kripa isn't looking where she is walking and bump into someone. She looked terrified by the thought of hitting the ground but she's caught by two strong arms. She lift up her head slowly to see who's those arms belong too.... Strange feeling crawling up her spine while she looked at his eyes.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
awesome dear..........loved every bit.......update soon.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
awesome one ...........loved it.................cont soon.........thnx for the pm..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

wooowww simply amazing....

loved it...

thnx for the pm.............

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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
vry nice part do cont soon.......

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