FF-Maan's confession&Geet's revelation-53last part

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#671

Wonderful update......cant wait for geet's reaction on knwing ......please cont soon.....
thanx 4 pm....

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Neha

@cherieLover

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#672

greatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt partttttttttttttttttt

after such longggggggggggggggggggggggggg time yaarrrrrrrrrrrrr

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#673

Very very very nicely written. The reader can catch the subtle undercurrents of fear and anxiety from Maan's monologues. Superb!

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Sakshi

@SakshiGarg

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#674

awwwww...............jst loved the update!!! maan n geet both r sooo caring...... i loved how they think 4 each other😍

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Nazurha

@Nazara

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#675

Very nice please update soon

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Soni

@soni-zee

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#676

Nice update dear🤗, wonderful, luv all the expressions😳

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@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#677

so next part i'll the show down between Maaneet & DevNT i cant wait to read that awesome how Maaneet care for each other pls cont soon thanks pm

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#678

Loved the Update dear!!
Awesome
OMG...is something bad gonna happen??
Hope not..
LOve it ..
Continue soon
Thanks for the Pm!:)

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#679

loved it .
luved d update maan is so caring
update soon

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ttt0011

@ttt0011

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#680

wow dew awesome update n thanks alot it was really a hard work from u to provide such a detail information............loved maneet Darga scene n now waiting for the time when maan will punch dev n throw Nt out......................eagerly waiting for next timeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u soooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh for making my day happyyyyyyyyy

lots of hug n kissessssssssss