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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

hey dew.........m very upset and worried abt GC.......u must b knowing dat he isnt well.......aaj kuch bhi achcha nahi laga.......m so so worried.......😭

mood change ho hamara aisa update likhna yaar........and pray for GC......m waiting for it......u take ur time.......u must b busy.....its ok.........

meetu ... main bhi bahut upset hun yaar ... yesterday's episode & now GC's health ... everything is making me worried ... I 2 thought in order 2 cheer u girls will come up with an update ... hopefully will be able 2 give it 2 u before tomorrow 6th morning (US time)....
i am praying for GC ... u 2 pray 4 him ... ...
sure ... hopefully will be posting an update by tomorrow morning US time ... today evening indian time ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 123pritha


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šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼loved ur update
maan is so naughty and lovely🤣🤣🤣
had daadi not come would geet give maan his gift?šŸ˜šŸ˜
lets hope maan gets his gift in next updateā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļø
the dance part was goodā­ļø
sasha and tasha shocked haahhaašŸ˜Ž
plzzzzzzzzz continue soonšŸ‘

thnk u pritha for liking the update ...gift hopefully next update ....šŸ˜‰ ... thnks dear 4 liking the dance part .... sure soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SakshiGarg

jst completed reading ur ff............wow dew u r an outstanding writer!!!šŸ‘

i loved how maan made geet's family cum to the party............he is so cute... n caring... n loving.... awww........ cant have words to express more!!!!
btw changu mangu r too gud......wat they did to sasha tasha🤣....jst loved it!!!!n maan is so naughty...........he is asking 4 a kiss in gift......ā˜ŗļø i hope he doesnt 4get abt his gift!!!!

thnk u sakshi ... for liking the FF ...thnks 4 the compliment ... thnks 4 liking changu mangu part ... was having doubts whether u all will like that part or not ... but tht's nice u all liked it ..oh ... he will not forget abt the gift ....
guru plz get well soon ...
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thnk u dhara ... 😊
guru plz get well soon ....
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update!!!

cant wait for the next part!!!
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hi

after the heartbreaking episode of yesterday 😭i read your ff today feeling haapy that somer where the enegement party is goning onšŸ‘ ...................... thanks ...pm me also when you update. thanks in advance .😊
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heyyyyyyyyyyyyyy when r u updating next part
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Originally posted by: anufa

superb paRT!!!!


continue ASAP!!!!

thank u anu... sure ... soon ...hopefully tonight ....

Originally posted by: kooliio

awesome update!!!

cant wait for the next part!!!
pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

thank u kooliio... sure ... soon ...hopefully tonight .... u r welcome

Originally posted by: seema05

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after the heartbreaking episode of yesterday 😭i read your ff today feeling haapy that somer where the enegement party is goning onšŸ‘ ...................... thanks ...pm me also when you update. thanks in advance .😊

thank u seema ... sure ... soon ...hopefully tonight .... u r added 2 the PM list ... u r welcome

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hi... friends... sorry for the delay ... here is next update ...hope u all like it & plz leave ur reply's & plz press the like button if u like my post ...

Part 30:-

While Maan & geet are on the dance floor … dadima is introducing geet's family in her circle & to their relatives …

Maan & Geet are still on the dance floor … dancing to slow music …. Geet's arms are criss crossed around maan's shoulders & maan's hands on geet's waist … both enjoying their dance & each other's company looking into each other's eyes & lost in them selves ….

After some time Geet comes close to maan's ears – mujhae aapsae kuch kehna hain.

Maan also comes close to geet's ears – kya baath hain geet …

Geet - mujhae aap sae ek jaroori baath kehni hain …

Maan – phir keh do …

Geet – yahan … sabkae samnae …

Maan looking into geet's eyes – phir kya akele main kehna chahthi ho …

Geet also looking into his eyes now – haan … akele hi kehna chahti hun …. bahar chalae … garden main … subah hamari baath jahan hui thi wahan …

Maan still looking into geet's eyes – phir chalo … chalen ….

They both leave the dance floor …. As soon as they leave the dance floor Mr. chopra comes near them …

Mr .chopra – hello Ms.Geet handa & Mr.Khurana … my hearty congratulations to both of you ….

Geet – hello & thank you Mr.Chopra …

Maan – thank you mr. chopra …

Mr.chopra to Maan & Geet … main jantha tha aap dono ek dusrae kae liyae hi bane thae … maine aap ko pehlae hi kaha tha ki aap dono ek dusrae kae liyae perfect hain … isn't it Mr. Khurana ….

Maan – wo … haan …. Mr.chopra … aap nae kahan tha …. Muhjae hi daer lagi wo baath samajh nae main …

Maan now looking at geet while talking to Mr.Chopra - par ab yeh baath meri samajh main agayi hain … isliyae tho main aur daer nahin karna chahtha hun … koi aur meri geet ko lae jaayaae iss sae pehlae main khud usse apna bana na chahtha hun … (geet is blushing at the words what maan was saying to Mr.Chopra ….)

Mr.Chopra – yes you are right Mr.Khurana … jab life main aise koi insaan aayae tho unhae kabhie apnae sae dur nahin jaane daena chahiyae …. Aur aisae maamlae main daer karna bhi nahin chahiyae ….

As maan was busy with Mr.Chopra geet excuses her self away from them …

Sasha & tasha come near geet ….

Sasha – tho finally Ms. Hoshiarpur nae apni chaal chal di …

Geet – sasha maam … yeh aap kaisi baath kar rahin hain ….

Sasha – tum jis iraade sae idhar aayi thi tho wo irada finally pura karliya hain naa tumnae … MK sae sagai karkae …

Geet – sasha maam aap galat samajh rahin hain …

Sasha – oh really geet … is it … tho iss maamlae main tumhae kya safai deni hain …

Geet – sasha maam …. waise bhi aap ko jo sochna hain wo soch sakthae hain … aur mujhae aap ko koi safai daene ki jaroorat nahin hain … jo log galat hotae hain unka dimaag bhi hamesha galat rasthae par hi jaa kar atak tha hain … sahin baath tho unkae pallae padthi hi nahin hain ... kuch samajh main aaya sasha maaam …

Sasha rolling her stupid eyes - oh please geet … stop it …. Aur mujhae baar baar maam kyun keh rahin ho … maam tho mujhae aap ko kehni padegi … geet maam … ab tum MK ki fiancee jo ho … hain naa geet maam …

Maan now close to geet after finishing his talks with Mr.Chopra …. Adi,Pinky, rajji & tito are also coming near geet …

Maan – yes sasha you are right … ab sae tum sab ko geet ko maam keh kar pukaarna padega ….

Adi – yes sir …. U R correct ….

Maan gives adi a stern look ….

Adi – sooooo rrr rrrr yyy ….. sss iii rrr …

Maan gives a smile …- so adi agrees with me … waise meri wife … (geet looks at maan when he says that word wife & maan giving geet a sweet smile)…I mean honae wali wife …. Abi boss ki boss ko maam nahin kahengae tho kya kahengae … office main tho main aap sabka boss hu …. Magar ghar main tho geet hi meri boss hogi naa … tho iss naathe tho wo aapkae big boss hain … aur waise bhi geet aisi ladki nahin hain ki sirf ghar baitkae ghar hi sambhale …. Office bhi mere saath saath sambhalegi ….(maan looking into geet's eyes)hain na geet … mujhae aur hamare office ko sambhalo gi naa ….

Geet looking into maan's eyes – jee haan jaroor sambhalungi …. aur yeh bhi koi punchnae ki baat hain … aur raha sawal saath dene ka main tho pehlae bhi aap kae saath thi … abhi bhi hun …. aur aagae bhi aapkae saath rahungi .

(mahi in the back ground…)geet & maan both looking into each other's eyes … forgetting that they are surrounded by every one …

pinky having Phirni not looking at geet – ab tho hamein geet ko geet maam bolna padega … hain naa geet ….

Geet & maan still lost in each other's eyes … & Everyone is staring at them …. Except pinky as she is busy in her self …

Pinky busy in eating her phirni – geet …. Oye geet …

geet startled & then coming back to her senses - haaan pinky …. tunae Kuch kahan kya …

pinky – maine kahan tha ki ab tho hamein geet ko geet maam bolna padega.

Geet - nahin pinky …. tu tho meri dost hain na … tu aisi baath kyun keh rahin hain … aur tu mujhae maam kyun bolegi …

just then dadima enters over there with geet's family & Mr.Manchanda …

dadima – kya baathein chal rahin hain …

pinky while finishing her last spoon of phirni – kuch nahin … dadima …

dadima – teek hain … ab mujhae ek announcement karni hain …

dadima announcing to the guests – May I have ur attention please …. Aap sab ko mujhae ek aur important baat bathani hain … I think this is even more big & better surprise for all of you … jaise aap janthae hain ki abhi abhi maan aur geet ki sagai hui hain … yeh celebrations abhi aaj hi katam nahin honae waalae hain … yeh continue hongae aage aur 3 din kae liyae … kyunki aaj sae teek 3 din baad maan aur geet ki shaadi hain … on this Monday at 8:40 P.M.

Every body is congratulating maan & geet now …

sasha face is looking white as though she saw a ghost …. & her mouth open. – shaadi …

Adi is next to sasha – sasha … apna yeh muh band karo … warna makki chali jaayegi … ha ha ha ha ha ….(sasha gives him a look asking him to get lost ) waise idhar makki tho nahin hain ….. phir bhi … muh band karo … acha nahin lagtha hain …

Tasha – sahsa …

sasha giving her a look … don't irritate me I am done for the day …

Tasha - I mean maam … shadi … 3 din main …

Sasha jealous – yeh Ms.Hoshiarpur kuch jyada hi hoshiar nikli … 3 din kae andhae sagai aur shadi dono karr rahin hain … wo bhi MK sae …

Sasha could not bear what ever was happening so she leaves the hall…

Tasha – ab isse kya hua hain …

Tasha following sasha ….

Tasha – sasha … I mean maam …. dinner … Silly me … kahan jaa rahin ho …

They both are out of the mansion ….

Every body is congratulating maan & geet one by one ….

Adi, pinky, rajji , tito & geet's family every one is hugging geet & maan turn by turn.

Dadima then informs everyone that the dinner is ready … All the guests are moving towards the dining area …

Geet thinking to herself – "kya karun babaji …. Maan sir sae apni dill ki baath bolna chahthi thi aur abhi dadima nae khanae kae liyae bulaya hain …"

Maan – geet bahar chalae …

Geet – haan …

Rajji – jiju kahan jaanae ki baath ho rahin hain ….

Maan closes his eyes as soon as he sees rajji….

maan didn't expect rajji to be over there he thought that every one left .

Geet – kahin nahin rajji … khana khane kae liyae …

Rajji – par di … jiju tho bahar bol rahae thae … khana tho andhar hain …

Geet to rajji - wo … tum nae teek sae suna nahin hoga rajji …

Geet showing her big eyes to maan & scolding him inside –" ek chota sa kaam bhi dang sae nahin kar sakhthae hain … aap …"

Rajji - oh … tho hum sab sae chup kar milnae ki soch rahen thae aap dono …

Maan is looking at rajji as though she cought him ….

Geet – rajji … chup kar … kuch bhi bolti rehti hain …

Rano – geet aur maan puttarji … sab chale gaye khana khane … aap dono bhi aa jayiyae … aur rajji tu udhar un dono kae saath kya kar rahin hain … idhar aa …

Rajji – jee chachi …

Geet & maan following rajji towards the dining area … softly talking to each other so that rajji cannot hear …

Maan – apna cell phone paas main rakhna …

Geet – kyun …

Maan – jo bola hain wo karo … baad main bataungaa … bas phone ko apnae paas main rakhna … dyan sae …

Geet – teek hain baba phone mere paas hi rakhungi …

Every body finish their dinner & guests start leaving ….

Adi & Maan are bidding good bye to all of their clients or guests ….

Maan – adi … kal sae shaadi hone tak saari tayyariyan tum manage kar lena … event managers tho hongae … but I want u to supervise them like u did today …

Adi – ok sir … & then adi leaves …

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In the mean while …. pinky & pinky's dad say gud bye to geet's family & inform them that they will meet tomorrow.

Geet – pinky … aaj tho tu jaa rahin hain … par kal sae lekar shadi tak tumhae mere paas hi rehna padega … samjhi …

Pinky – teek hain …. Geet … yeh bhi koi bolnae waali baath hain … teri shaadi ho aur main tere paas nahin hu … yeh kaise ho sakhtha hain … main kal subah hi aa jaungi ….

Dadima – geet … aap aur aapkae family members bhi bahut takh gaye hongae naa … ab aap jaayiyae aur aaram kariyae … kal sae saare shadi kae kaam shuru ho jaayengae tho aap aur thak jaayengi …

Geet – jee dadima …

Dadima 2 geet's family members – hamein acha laga aap sae milkae … ithni short notice pae aap aa gaye yeh acha hua … ab geet ko bhi aap ki kami mehsoos nahin hogi …

Mohinder – shaadi ki tayyari karnae kae liyae tho hamein samay hi nahin mila …. Maaf kardijiyae … yeh sab tayyariyan tho hamein karni thi …

Dadima - maafi tho hamein aap sae maangni thi … ki 3 din kae andhar shaadi kar wa rahen hain … humnae aapko samay hi nahin diya hain saari tayyariyan karnae kae liyae …

Mohinder – nahin nahin … yeh aap kaisi baath kar rahin hain … aap humsae maafi kyun maang rahin hain ….

Dadima – chaliyae jaane dijiyae … abhi aap sabhi jaa kar aaram kariyae … main changu mangu ko baej thi hun aap logon ki help karnae … out house main aapki madad kar dengae …

Geet – nahin dadima … abhi uski koi jaroorat nahin hain … hum dekh lengae.

Dadima – nahin geet … main aapki yeh baath nahin manne waali hun …

Dadima calls changu & mangu and asks them to arrange everything for geet's family in the outhouse …

Changu – humnae sab …

Mangu – intezaam kar diya hain ….

Dadima is like watching a tennis game her face turns towards changu for a second & in the next second towards mangu … changu mangu changu mangu.

Changu – dadima …

Mangu – maan baba nae …

Changu – hamein pehlae hi …

Mangu – bata diya tha …

Changu – tho out house main …

Mangu – humnae saari

Changu - tayyariyan poori karli hain ….

Dadima – oh god … aap dono … mujhae pagal kar dogae … kabhie tho apmae sae ek … baath ko poori karo … hamesha baath ko bant the kyun ho … teek hain agar sab kaam ho gaya tho jao …

Maan comes over there …. & Every body is leaving the mansion … after bidding gud bye to maan & dadima …

Maan & Dadima – kal milengae …

Maan wants to talk to geet ….

Maan & geet look in to each other's eyes while geet is going away to the out house …

Dadima smiling at maan & geet – maan aap ko agar geet ko out house tak chodnae jaana hain tho … jaa sakhthae hain …. Mujhae koi problem nahin hain …

Maan – nahin dadima … geet ko apnae family members kae saath jaane dijiyae aur time spend karnae dijiyae … waise thodi daer kae baad tho main usse milnae hi waala hun …

Dadima – aapka kya matlab hain maan …

Maan closing his eyes – mera matlab hain dadima anyhow shadi kae baad tho wo mere paas hi rahegi naa …

Dadima – acha … koi shaitaani tho nahin kar rahen hain naa aap …

Maan – nahin dadima … shaitaani aur main … ab meri umar thodi naa hain shaitani karnae ki ….(but maan has his own plans …)

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Geet & her family on their way towards out house …

Mohinder - geet puttarji aaj hum sab tere vasthae bahut kush hain …

Geet looking at her father …

Rano – haan geet puttar … humnae kabhie nahin socha tha ki tumharae zindagi main wapas kushiyaan aayengi …. Yeh din dekh kar aaj hum sab ko bahut kushi hui hain …

Rajji & Tito – haan geet di … tere liyae hum sab bahut bahut kush hain …

Geet – darji … taiji … tayaji ….

Rano – sab changae hain … puttar …

Rano with tears in her eyes – geet puttar … ithna sab kuch hone kae baad humnae kabhie yeh nahin socha tha ki hum tumko dubara dekh bhi paayengae ….

Geet also has tears in her eyes – main bhi maa … mujhae bhi aisae hi lagtha tha ki main aap sab logon ko wapas kabhie iss zindagi main mil bhi pavungi ki nahin …

They all enter the out house … and they sit in the hall ….

Geet - par aap sab ko sagai kae baaren main kab aur kaise pata chala …

Mohinder - agar hum sab aaj mil paaye tho wo sirf maan ki wajah sae … unhone yeh sab kiya hain ….

Rajji – geet di … maan jiju ko dekh kar aisa lagtha hain ki wo aapsae bahut pyar karthae hain … hain naa …

The simple word maan & his thoughts bought a smile on geet's face … every one noticed her smile & her way to hapinness …

Geet – rajji … tu bahut bolnae lagi hain …

Geet – haan paapaji … aap bol rahe thae ki aap ko kab pata chala aur aap sab yahan kaise pahunche …

Mohinder – mujhae do pahar ko Manchanda ka phone aaya tha … usinae mujhae bataya ki tumhari shaadi pakki hogayi hain … tumhari saari sachayi jannae kae baad bhi wo ladka tumsae bahut pyar kartha hain aur tumsae shaadi karna chahtha hain ….

Geet – par uncleji nae aap ko kyun phone kiya tha …

Mohinder – wo maan nae hi unsae phone kar waya tha …

Geet – darji … nae mana nahin kiya aapko … yahan aanae kae liyae …

Mohinder – uss ka bhi humnae soch liya tha … maine darji ko yehin bol diya ki manchanda koi mushkil main hain aur usse meri jaroorat hain … aur yeh bhi kahan tha ki rano aur bachon ko thodi dinon kae liyae baahar le jaana chatha hun … isi bahanae unko delhi dikha dhungaa … mujhae tho darr bhi lag rahan tha ki wo mana naa karde par acha hua ki wo maaan gaye … aur gadi kaa bandobast bhi maan nae hi karwaya … aur hum yahan aa gaye … aanae kae baad dekha tho pata chala ki ladka koi aur nahin maan hi hain … main tho hairan ho gaya tha ki … maan tumsae shadi karna chahtha hain … par manchanda ki baath yaad agayi thi … jo bhi ho geet puttar ji … hum bahut kush hain … tere liyae …

Rano – ab sab chalo sonae … bahut raat hogayi hain … kal subah sae shadi ki tayyariyan bhi karni hongi saare rasmain …. bahut kaam hoga … chalo sab log …

Geet then shows them the outhouse & their rooms …

Rajji – di main aap kae saath rahungi …

Geet – teek hain chalo …

Every one is in their rooms & Geet changed to her regular night dress & is with rajji in her room …

Geet is near the closet & rajji on the bed …

Geet gets an SMS on her mobile … "beep"

Message from maan : "mujhae abhi isi waqt bahar garden main milo "

Geet 2 messages : "abhi …"

Maan's message: "haan abhi isi waqt"

Geet : "abhi main nahin aa sakthi "

Maan : "agar tum nahin aayi … tho main udhar aa jaungaa"

Geet :"nahin…"

Maan:"haan …"

Geet :"aap yahan math aayiyae …. "

Maan :"tho phir chup chap aa jao… neechae garden main… main intezaar kar rahan hoon…"

Geet : "main nahin aa sakhthi …"

Maan : "teek hain tho phir main udar hi aa rahan hun … "

Geet : "darwaza band hain…"

Maan :"tumhare kamrae main aane kae liyae mujhae darwaze ki jaroorat nahin hain … khidki bhi chalega …"

Geet :"khidki …"

Maan :"haan khidki … kyun kabhi khidki sae ghar kae andhar aayi nahin kya … yaad tho karo …"

Rajji - Geet di kya kar rahin ho …

Geet 2 rajji – kuch nahin rajji … tu soja main aa rahin hun …(hiding her cell from rajji …while texting)

Geet :"rajji …mere saath hain …"

Maan :"rajji hain tho kya … tum aarahi ho ki nahin …"

Geet :"nahin…"

Maan :"teek hain … tho main aa rahan hun…"

Geet :"nahin … aap math aayiyae … main dekhungi …"

Maan :"dekhungi nahin … chup chap aao … wohi jagah par jahan subah hamari baath hui hain … main wahan hi hun … jaldi sae aa jao …"

geet :" thodi daer lagegi …"

maan :" teek hain … jaldi … I m waiting sweet heart …."

Geet blushes & says:" thodi daer main …" (texting stops…)

Rajji – di … mujhae ae tho bata ki aap ki story kab aur kaise aur kahan sae shuru hui …

Geet comes near rajji switches the lights off – aaj nahin … baad main baath karengae tu soja … thak gayin hogi naa ... lamba safar kar kae aayi hain … phir sagai attend kiya …

Rajji – nahin di … mujae neend nahin aa rahin hain …. Mujhae tho tujsae baath karni hain …

Geet – muhae aa rahin hain … ( geet yawns & says gud night 2 rajji …)

Rajji – par di …

Geet – rajji so jaa … main bahut thak gayin hun …

Rajji – teek hain di …. Gud night …

Geet to herself – "yeh maan bhi naa kuch samajh thae nahin hain … abhi iss waqt aisi konsi baath karna chahthae hain … aur ab main yahan sae nikalnae kae liyae konsaa bahana banavu …yeh maan tho kuch samajh thae hi nahin… bas bol diya ki aajaao bas aajao … "

Geet now checks on rajji … thinking that she is sleeping she slowly sneaks out of the room with the water jar in her hand & keeps it in the kitchen … & then goes to the garden …

Geet is surprised to see that the whole spot has been beautifully decorated with candles & in the candle lights the roses in the garden were looking even more beautiful than they were looking in the morning …

Geet is looking for maan … maan comes from behind slides both his hands around her waist & hugs her in his arms with geet's back to his chest … geet's heart just skipped a beat … she was feeling the love & warmth in his hug …but she moves away from him ….

Maan catches her duppatta & then pulls her real close towards him …

Maan again has her in his arms now very tight … with his arms over her arms – tumnae sari badal diya ….

Geet – haan … nahin badal thi tho kya unhi kapdon par so jaathi …

Maan – par mujhsae milnae kae baad tho badal sakhthi thi …

Geet – mujhae kya maalum aapko mujhae sari main milna tha … waise aap nae bhi tho aapkae kapdae badal liyae hain … hain na …

Maan – main meri baath nahin tumhari baath kar raha hoon … tum janthi ho na ki mujhae tum sari main bahut achi lagthi ho … phir bhi …

Geet - tho main ghar walon ko kya batathi … ki jab wo muhae punchae ki maine kapdae kyun nahin badlae ab tak … aap ka kya hain … aap ko tho bolna bahut aasaan hain naa …

Maan – teek hain … waise bhi tum idhar aayi wohi bahut hain mere liyae …

Geet – agar main nahin aathi tho …

Maan - main jantha hun tumhae … tum mere saath aise kabhi kar hi nahin sakhti …

Geet – agar main nahin aa pathi tho …

Maan - agar tum nahin aayi tho main main bhi raat bar yahan garden main hi tumhara intezaar kartha rehtha …

Geet – main janthi hun … aap bahut ziddi hain … parr apnae mujhae idhar kyun bulaya iss waqt …

Maan – kal sae hum ek doosrae sae mil nahin sakhthae naa shaadi tak … aur ithnae din … tumsae bina dekhae mujhsae rahan nahin jaayegaa isliyae maine socha tha ki main tumsae milluu bas …

Geet – sirf 2 din hi tho hain …

Maan – tum do din keh rahi ho … main tho ek din bhi tumhare bina reh hi nahin sakhtha …

Geet blushing now ….

Maan now coming closer to her ears & using his sensous voice – tum thodi daer pehlae mujhsae kuch baath kehna chahthi thi naa… kya baath hain …

Geet – haan … mujhae aap sae kuch kehna hain …. wohi baath jo aap kabsae sunnae kae liyae bekaraar thae ….

Maan now loosens his grip over her & comes in front of her holds her chin with his right hand – acha tho abhi tumhae sharm nahin aa rahin hain … wo baath kehnae main …

Geet – nahin … par mujhae ehsaas ho gaya hain ki yeh baat mujhae aap sae keh deni chahiyae … aur mujhe koi sharam nahin aa rahin hain … balki mujhae garv hain ki mujhae aap sae pyar hain … haan … mujhae aap sae pyar hain ...(Maan's face is glowing like a 1000 watt bulb uss ki chehrae ki roshni kae samnae tho wo candle lights bhi pheeki padd rahin thi ….) jo insaan hamesha dusro kae kushi kae baaren main pehlae sochtha ho mujhae aisae insaan sae pyar hogaya hain … mere liyae iss sae jyada kushi ki baath aur kya ho sakhti hain ki mujhae aap sae pyaar hain … aur yehi baath main aap sae ek baar nahin baar baar kahungi … ki mujhae aap sae pyar hain …

Maan hugs geet now …. They both have a very passionate hug …

Maan & geet still continuing their hug – waise geet … tumhae ithni raat ko mujhae milnae main koi darr nahin laga …

Geet – darr … kis baath ka …. Hum pehli baar thodi raat ko mil rahen hain … mujhae aap sae koi darr nahin lagtha hain …

Maan – par uss waqt main aur ab main faraq hain geet ….

Geet – kya faraq hain … kuch faraq nahin hain … mujhae aisa nahin lagtha …

Maan now loosens his control over her & goes behind her back with his mischievous smile – acha …. Tho tumhae aisa nahin lagtha aur Tumhae mujhsae darr bhi nahin lagtha hain …

Geet – nahin ….

Maan moves her hair to the front & again slides his hands around her waist & then bends on her shoulder – abhi … abhi bhi darr nahin lag rahan hain …. Tumhae …

Geet – naa hiii nnn ….

Maan has his lips on the left side of her neck & gently kisses her neck … geet & maan both are lost in that moment … geet din't expect tht from maan she is frozen ….)maan with his lips still on her neck & his warm breath which was now falling on her shoulder making her kness go real weak & she was trembling … she wanted to turn & hug him …. But instead she decided to move away from him … she loosens his control over her & moves away from him …. Maan is looking at geet & is in disbelief for what he did … he was just trying to tease her but lost himself at that moment …

Geet trying to change the scene - Aap thake nahin subah sae ithnae baag daud kar kae …. phir bhi aapnae yeh garden ko aise sajaya ….

Maan – jab baath tumhari aathi hai tho mujhae thakaan mehssos nahin hothi hain geet … tumharae liyae tho main kuch bhi kar sakhtha hun …. Kisi bhi hadh tak jaa sakhtha hun …

Geet – main janthi hoon ki aap mujhsae bahut pyar karthae hain aur mere liyae kuch bhi kar sakthae hain … par ab bahut raat ho gayi hain aur hamein chalna chahiyae … aap bhi jaa kar so jaayiyae … subah sae bahut kaam kar rahen thae … main bhi jaa rahin hun …

Geet is trying to leave from there …. but Maan holds her right hand & pulls her close towards him self …

Maan – mujhsae naaraz ho …

Geet – nahin tho …

Maan – phir aisae kyun jaa rahin ho …

Geet – bahut raat ho gayi hain … paani kae bahane kamrae sae nikal tho aayi thi … agar rajji uth gayi tho … pure outhouse main doondhaegi aur agar bahar aagayi tho mujhae dhund thae dhundthae hua idhar aagayi tho acha nahin lagega …

Maan – yehin baath hain ya phir … tum mujhsae naaraz ho ….

Maan now keeping a sad puppy face & turning away from her… leaving her hand … now geet holds maan's hand & goes near him …

Geet – aisi baath nahin hain … main sach bol rahin hun … main aap sae naaraz nahin hun …

she holds maan's head & brings it down towards her lips & then finally kisses maan's forehead …

geet blushing – ab aap samajh gaye ki main aap sae naaraz nahin hoon … ab main jaathi hun … baad main baath karengae …. Phone par …

shy geet blusing & running away from there ….

Maan – geet sambhalkae ….

maan is unable to believe what just happened …. Geet just kissed him on his forehead … not only kiss but she finally expressed her love for him today without feeling shy … today is the best day of his life till date … he too leaves to the mansion …

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plz let me know if u like this update or not ...

get well soon guru & drashti ... plz have a speedy recovery both of u ....

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey drewdoped u r awesomešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘.............cannt express in my word how ur update is😃😃😃.................it made my weekend beautiful😳😳...............i was just surfing in IF and as soon as u posted i was like wowwwwwww i got something really to look into itšŸ˜›šŸ˜›................i read n trullyyyyyy right now i m in MANEET woorld.............ur words n situations r so real i feel like all this happening in front of my eyes............gr8 update and whatever we wanted to see in the serial n didnt happen due to MANEET health prb.....u have fulfill all the wishes more den what we have expected..............wow maneet confession n their hug was so passionate😳😳😳😳................i loved geet's parents part also very much...................u always make me eager to whats gonna happen now next...................i know its take a much more time to write next part n hats off to ur efforts and hardwork for the same............truly i have never been attached to any FF before like urssssssssšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘...................

will wait more for ur dreammyyyyyyyyy updates dear😊😊
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gr8 efforts n pls carry on so dedicately.šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘.....................lots of luv n hugs for lovely FFšŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›

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