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Part 24:

Geet is on her way to meet dadima wondering what dadima wanted to speak to her & also thinking that … -" babaji … Yeh sab chakkar main … maan sae main jo poonchnaa chahthi thi mere ghar walon kae baare main wo baath tho main poonch hi nahin payi … Maan nae dadima sae kahan tha ki unhonae mere ghar walon sae baath ki … mujhae unsae baath karna padega …. oh babaji … ab main kya karun … pehlae tho main dadima sae millungi … phir maan ko phone kar lungi …. Patha nahin wo kaise hongae … mujhsae kitnae naaraz hongae … dekhna padega … agar naaraz hogaye hain tho unko manana padega … "

Geet now 2 herself loudly - oye geet … tu hamesha aisi harkatein kyun karthi rehti hain jiski wajah sae wo tujhsae naaraz ho jaye … ab jao manao unko … aur wo baath bhi kehdo wo jo sunna chahthae hae tumjhsae …. Yeh socho ki janab ko kaise manaya jaayae ….

Geet enters the mansion & sees that … Event planners have started their job of decorating the mansion for the engagement ceremony as planned … with Peach color orchids , Lilies (Rajni gandha) & Roses which go with the Peach Orchids , Lt. Peach & white curtains …. & Nakul is bossing Changu & Mangu who are helping the event managers … Changu & Mangu are brothers who work in khurana mansion as nakul's assistants ….

Geet talking to Nakul – Dadima kahan hain …. (even before geet finishes her sentence that she wanted to ask Nakul ….)

Changu – dadima apnae ….

Mangu – kamrae main hain ….

Geet – teek hain … then she walks towards dadima's room ….

Geet – dadima …. Kya main andhar aa jaou ….

Dadima sitting on the sofa & working on her laptop – geet aap ko kabsae permission ki jaroorat padi hain … aayiyae aur idhar baithiyae hamarae paas.

Geet entering dadima's room – aap mujhae kis liyae bulayae thae …

Dadima – haan …. Chaliyae kam sae kam ab tho aap ko meri yaad aayi ….

Geet comes & sits next to dadima – nahin dadima aisi baath nahin hain … wo dadima aap mujsae naaraz hain … abhi thodi daer pehlae main yahan sae aisae aap ko bina batayae chali gayi thi … isi liyae ….

Dadima – isliyae aap mujhsae andhar aanae kae liyae permission lae rahen hain …. geet main aapsae naaraz kaise ho sakhthi hun … main mazak kar rahin thi aap sae ….

Geet – dadima … wo aap mujhae maaf kar dijiyae …

Dadima – geet aap ko maafi mangnae ki koi jaroorat nahin hain … main yeh janthi hun ki maan nae apka hath pakadh kar aapko yahan sae lae gaye thae…

Geet – dadima aap janthae hain …. Aap nae hamein jathae hua dekha tha …

Dadima – haan aapki dadima kae ankhen abhi ithni bhi kamzor nahin hain ki mujhae kuch dikhayi hi na dae …

Geet – haan unko mujhsae kuch jaroori kaam tha …

Dadima smiling mischievously – unko jo kaam tha aapsae kya wo kaam katam hua … ki nahin ….

Geet – haan katam tho hua … parr …

Dadima – parr … kya hua geet ….

Geet – kuch nahin dadima … aap boliyae aap mujhsae kya baat karna chahthae hain …

Dadima – aap mujhsae kuch chupa tho nahin rahen hain ….

Geet – nahin dadima … aisae koi baath nahin hain … (geet a bit tensed … tinking about maan …. Main unko kaise mana ungi …)

Dadima – sach main …. Sab teek hain …

Geet – haan dadima ….

Dadima – teek hain … phir …

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Maan wanted to leave to office … sits in his car but changes his mind thinks that geet's health comes first & need to talk to her first about her health & to tell her that she needs to take care of her & their baby … so goes to meet geet before he leaves to office … therefore walks back towards the mansion.

Maan to himself – geet kae paas tho cell phone bhi nahin hain … aaj hi ek cell phone ka order kar detha hun … engagement sae pehlae usse gift karungaa …. Bol rahin thi ki dadima sae milnae jaaungi …shayad dadima kae paas hongi … abhi jatha hun udhar …

Maan enters the mansion & checks out that the preparations for party have already started … He spots Nakul working along with changu & mangu …

Maan to Nakul – Tumnae Geet ko dekha hain … janthae ho ki wo kahan gayi hain …

Changu – Haan Maan baba … geet bhabhi ji …

Mangu – dadima kae kamrae main hain …

Maan – tum dono bhi … hamesha baath ko adha kar kae kyun baath karthae ho …(saying this he walks towards dadima's room)

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Dadima gets up from there …. & walks to her closet … Dadima then neatly places all the jewelry & sarees … (that she had separated earlier which she previously took out of the closet …. to give to Geet )… in silver plates which were on the table …

Dadima – geet yeh sab aap kae liyae hain …

Geet – mere liyae … par dadima … apnae tho mujhae pehlae hi shagun kae tor par duppatta aur gehnae di thi naa … tho phir wapas yeh kyun dae rahen hain …. Aur subah bhi tho humnae shaadi kae liyae daer saare gehnae aur kapdae lae liyae hain …

Dadima – Geet … wo alag hain aur yeh alag hain …

Geet – dadima …. Main yeh sab nahin lae sakthi hun …

Dadima – kyun nahin lae sakhthi ho … geet …

Maan is about to enter dadima's room …. But stops outside the room as he hears geet talking

Geet – dadima … mujhae yeh sab nahin chahiyae dadima … aaj tak jo mila wohi bahut hain mere liyae … main tho wo bhi nahin lena chahthi thi par aapnae zabardasthi mujhae de diyaa … aur abhi aur dae rahen hain …

Dadima – geet aap mujhae mana math kariyen …. Aur naahin aap mujhae mana kar sakhthae hain ….

Geet – waise bhi dadima main yeh sab cheezen pehanthi bhi nahin hun … mujhae in sab cheezon ki koi moh nahin hain … mujhae jinka pyar milna tha unka pyaar milgaya hain iss sae jyada mujhae aur kya chahiyae …

(saying this geet get's up from the sofa & maan hides behind the curtains which were in the coridoor outside dadima's room so that geet does not spot him … geet is walking to & fro in the room while talking to dadima …)

Geet - yeh sab cheezen (looking at the jewelry & expensive sarees )mere liyae maynae nahin rakhthae hain dadima … maynae rakhtha hain tho wo hain unka atoot pyaar , vishwaas , bharosa , hamesha mere saath harr ek modh par , harr ek musibhat main khadae rahnae ki unki chahat , bina kuch sochae samjhae hameshsa meri madad karnae kae liyae unka aagae aana … yeh sab mujhae maynae rakhthae hain … dadima … jithna pyaar wo mujhsae kathae hain … main bhi unsae uthnaa hi pyaar karthi hun dadima aur karthi rahungi …. Janthae hain dadima jithna pyar wo mujhsae karthae hain … shayad uthna pyar kisinae mujhsae nahin kiya … mere ghar waale bhi nahin.

Maan to himself – "Geet jaise tumnae aaj abhi dadima sae bina jhijak kae tumhari dil ki baath kehdiya hain jo main sunna chahtha hun …. Bohut jaldhi tum wo baath mujhsae kahogi … aur mujhae tum parr wo vishwaas hain ki tum yeh baath mujhsae jaroor kahogi …meri geet … main tumsae bahut pyar kartha hun … tumhara viswaas main kabhi nahin todungaa geet …"

Dadima – main yeh janthi hun ki aap dono ek dusrae sae kithna pyar kathae hain uss main koi shakh nahin hain … parr tumhein yeh sab tho lena hi padega … janthae hain …. yeh saari gehnae maan kae maa yaani Sumitra kae hain … aur unki ichha thi ki yeh saari gehnae unkae bahu ko deejaaye shaadi main shagun kae tor par … wo ab iss duniya main tho nahin hain …. Tho unka kaam mujhae hi karna padd rahan hain … aur yeh sab saadiyan tho maine mere maan kae bahu kae liyae kab sae ikkatta kar kae rakhha hain … tumhein yeh sab lena tho padega ….

Geet – dadima … main …

Maan entering the room – geet …. Dadima jo keh rahin hain … wo baath mano geet …

Dadima – aap tho office jaane wale thae naa … gayae nahin abhi tak Maan …

Maan looking at geet while answering dadima - main jaane waala tha … bass aapsae milnae aaya tha jaane sae pehlae …

Geet's eyes & Maan's eyes meet each other … Geet sharam sae paani paani ho rahin hain maan ko dekh karr …. Maan ki ankhen geet sae hatt hi nahin reh rahin hain … geet apna duppatta ko ithna marod rahin hain ki aisa lagg raha hain ki wo any minute phat hi jaayegaa …

Dadima - kab jayengae aur kab wapas ayengae … phir aapko tayyar bhi hona padega … meri maniyen tho aaj aap office math jaayiyae …

Maan – bass thodi daer kae liyae hi jaaungaa … jaldi hi aa jaa ungaa …

Maan comes near the table on which all the stuff is kept … Takes out a pair of bangles (kadaa) & comes near Geet …

(maahi starts in the BG imagine mahi till dadima coughs ...) Maan takes Geet's hand in to his hand & makes her wear the kadaa on both her hands – geet … jo tumhara hain wo mera hain … hain ki nahin …

Geet – haan … so tho hain ….

Maan – agar jo tumhara hain wo mera hain … tho jo mera hain wo tumhara bhi hain … hain ki nahin

Maan still has geet's hands in his hands & is looking into her eyes …

Geet mesmerised by maan's stare – haan … so tho hain …

Maan - so … dadima ka kehna maano … aur yeh sab lelo … dekha jaayae tho yeh sab tumhara hi tho hain … aur main bhi chatha hun ki tum mere maa ki gehnae pehno …

Maan still has geet's hands in his hands & is looking into her eyes …

Geet – jee …

They both are still holding hands & looking into each other's eyes …. Forgetting that dadima is still there in the room …

Dadima faking cough – uhhu uhhu …

Geet & Maan come back to their senses …

Dadima – helloo … main abhi yahan hi hun … aap dono abhi iss duniya main wapas aa jao …

Maan & geet come out of their ghooring session ….

Dadima – bhai waah geet … ab tak maine kahan ki yeh sab lelo tho nahin liyaa … par maan nae ek baar kehdiyaa tho haan … maanna padega tum dono kae pyaar ko …

Geet & Maan together – dadima …

They both take dadima's blessings …

Dadima – jeethe raho … bacho … hamesha aisae hi rehna ….

Geet – dadima … ab main jathi hoon …

Maan – Geet rukho … dadima … main bhi jatha hoon … main Nakul …changu … mangu ko baech dungaa … yeh sab out house main rakhwa dee jiyae …

Dadima – teek hain … geet main aap ko baad main phone kar dungi … aap idhar aa kar tayyar ho jaayiyae … out house main tayyar math hona …

Geet – jee dadima …

Maan – Geet yeh sab cheezon ko sambhal kae rakhwa denaa … maa ki nishaniyan hain … samjhi ….

Geet – samjhi baba … samjhi … sasu maa ki nishaniyan hain … sambhal kae rakhungi …

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will be posting next update soon ... tired right now ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
so cuteeeee.......
i hope this happens in the show as well
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update............geet said everything to dadima which she has to say to maan🤣.....anyways maan heard her so he knows what she feels.....cute update.........plzzzzzzz update soon
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Originally posted by: queen_ali

so cuteeeee.......

i hope this happens in the show as well

thank u .... ali ... me 2 hope it happens .... saw todays episode & was really happy ...
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Originally posted by: vinithaa

awesome update............geet said everything to dadima which she has to say to maan🤣.....anyways maan heard her so he knows what she feels.....cute update.........plzzzzzzz update soon

thank u ...
haan vinitha ...ROFL she confessed 2 dadi ... sure ...very soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww.....amazing update!
luved d whole part in dadimaa's room
maan making her wear d bangles
hehe sooo sweet they forgot tat dadimaa wz dr...lol...how sweet1
update soon

luv
Navpreet
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Originally posted by: dimpzz

awww.....amazing update!
luved d whole part in dadimaa's room
maan making her wear d bangles
hehe sooo sweet they forgot tat dadimaa wz dr...lol...how sweet1
update soon

luv
Navpreet

thank u navpreet ....
thy indeed forgot her ....😆
jab pyar hota hain ...tab aisa hi hota hain ...
sure very soon ...
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Heyy thanks for the PM and the update. What a cute update too :-) Yay
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wow cute update... luved it.. do continue soon

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