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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

great

superb
update soon

Originally posted by: pickachu

Soooo cuteeee update.

Loveee maneet scenes.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima

Thank u .. Ritu .& Fatima ...sure ... working on it very soon ...
Fatima ... U R most welcome ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

nice..lv it...eagerly waiting for the next part..add me 2 ur pm list....

Thank U ash ...U R added to the Pm list .... very soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kooliio

amazing update!!

it was really cute!! loved it!!
haha they totally forgot that dadi was also in the roomšŸ˜†šŸ˜†
cant wit for the next part!!!
pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

Thnak U ... dadi part was funny ...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† ... sure ... very soon & U R most welcome ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anufa

lovely update!!!


continue soON!!!

thank u anu ... working on it ... will b update .... soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 25 –

Geet & Maan take leave of dadima & are now walking out of the mansion …

Maan – Geet tum yeh baagna daudna … aur yeh sab aisi harkatein karna band kardo …

Geet – yeh lo … ab aap ko meri baagnae sae daudnae sae bhi problem hain.

Maan angrily holding Geet - tumhae har kaam meri marzi kae against karnae ki aadat kyun hain … kabhi tho baath ko samajh nae ki koshish karo … jab dekho tab mujhsae ladnae kae liyae tayyar rehti ho …

geet - ladnae kae liya main tayyar rehthi hun ... ki aap ...
Maan realises that he is yelling at geet … now tries to calm down & talks cooly with geet – Geet yeh samajh nae ki koshish tho karo ki main yeh baath tumhein kyun bol raha hun ….

Geet's naaraz with maan as he yelled at her – kyun bol rahae hain … aur kya matlab hain aapka …

Maan – Geet tum abhi maa bannae waali ho aur tumhe apna khayal rakhna bahut jaroori hain … aur aisae haalat main tum daudogi, bhaagogi … tho socho … issae agar bache ko kuch ho jaaye tho …

Geet now thinking to herself – "Maan tho teek hi bol rahen hain …. Yeh baath tho mujhae dyan main rakhni chahiyae thi naa … parr yeh baath kabhie mere dhyaan main kyun nahin aayaa … maan mere kitna khayal rakhthae hain … agar meri maa mere saath hothi to mujhae yeh sab samjha thi … "

Geet apnae dono haathon sae kaan pakadthae hua – Sorry maan … aindaa sae aisae nahin karungi …

Maan now hugs Geet (Mahi in the Back Ground )they both are lost in the moment for some time …. They both come back to normal & then Maan kisses geet on her forehead – geet … apna khayal rakhna … mere liyae … rakhogi naa …

Geet – nodding her head in a yes … rakhungi …

Maan – teek hain ab main office jaa rahan hun … main tumhae baad main milungaa … thodi daer main ghar aa jaungaa … teek hain …

Geet – teek hain …

Maan starts towards his car …

Geet realises that she needs to talk to maan about her family members - mujhae aapsae kuch baath karni hain …

Maan – Geet main tumsae thodi daer kae baad milungaa … aaj mujhae already bahut daer ho gayi hain … abhi nahin … main tumhae phone kar dungaa office pahunch nae kae baad main tab baath karna … teek hain ….

Geet to herself – "koi baath nahin … baad main baath kar lungi …"

Geet – teek hain …

Maan is now near his car

Geet – kya main bhi aapkae saath office chal sakhthi hun ….

Maan smiling while opening his car door – nahin geet … tum ghar main hi raho … main bas yuh gaya aur yuh aaya … teek hain … aur apna khayal rakhna … teek hain …

Geet – hmm … teek hain … rakhungi …

Maan sat in his car & Geet waving bye to him & Maan signalling to Geet in their sign language with his right hand near his ear … that he will call her later on …

Geet's blushing & saying bye to maan ….

Geet walks in to the out house … In the mean while Nakul, Changu & Mangu keep all the jewelry & sarees in the out house in her room …

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Maan's entering office … the siren is on & every body gets back to their seats … Maan comes out of the lift … enter's reception area …

Maan - Pinky & Adi come into my room immediately …

Adi – Pinky patha nahin aaj kiski shamath aayi hain … Maan sir aathae hi hum dono ko andhar bhulaya hain …

Pinky is also puzzled & helping herself with a sandwich & going behind Maan & Adi thinking in her mind – "aaj tho Maan sir ka aur geet ka sagai hain aur sir aaj office aaae hain …. Aathae hi sir hum dono ko andhar kyun bhulaya hain … mujhae tho sir ko dekh thae hi darr lagtha hain … "

Maan – Adi aur Pinky baitho …

Pinky & Adi in their minds simultaneously –"bitha kae gala katengae shayad "

Maan – Adi & Pinky … main tum dono sae Geet kae baaren main kuch baath karna chahtha hun …

Adi – haan sir geet abhi tak office nahin aayi hain …

Maan – geet abhi office nahin aayegi …

Adi – matlab kya hain sirrrr aappp kaa …

Maan – matlab kuch nahin hain Adi … geet tum dono ki bahut achi dost hain na …

Pinky nodding her head …

Adi – haan sir …

Maan – is liyae … mujhae tum dono sae yeh baath kehni hain ki aaj mera aur Geet ka sagai hain …

Pinky – yeh baath tho mujhae kal raat ko hi patha chala hain Geet nae mujhae aur mere paapaji ko bol diyaa hain aur hamein invite …

Maan looking at Pinky …

Pinky – bhi karrr … diya hain …

Adi – aap dono kaa sagai …. Congratulations sir …

Maan – thank you adi … waise geet ka yahan tum dono kae alaava koi aur nahin hain …. Wo tum logon ko hi apna parivaar manthi hain … isliyae tum dono aaj sagai main geet ki taraf aanaa padegaa …

Adi & Pinky – ok … sir … aap kae bina bathaye hum aajayengae sir …

Maan - aur main yeh chahtha hun ki tum dono abhi mere ghar chale jao … Adi tum udhar saare sagai kae preparations dekh lena … event managers apna kaam tho kar rahen hain par main chahtha hun ki tum unko supervise kar lo … Aur Pinky tum geet kae saath rehna … who apnae aap ko akeli samajh rahin hain … uskae ghar waale bhi idhar nahin hain …

Pinky – haan sir … wo apna ghar chod kae aa gayi hain naa …(Pinky bites her tongue … because she slipped geet's family matter in front of Adi & Maan …)

Maan notices this & thinking to himself that pinky must know something about geet's family otherwise how come she said that Geet left her home … need to question pinky about it – Adi … tum jao … pinky abhi aa jayegi mujhae pinky sae kuch kaam hain … tum dono saath main ghar chale jaanaa …

Adi – ok sir …

Maan – pinky … tum geet kae baaren main ya Geet kae ghae waalon kae baaren aur kya janthi ho …

Pinky – sir … main aur geet bachpan ki saheliyan hain … aur jab geet hoshiarpur chod kae aayi thi … tho geet kae paapaji nae mere paapaaji ko kahan tha ki geet akeli delhi aagayi hain … aur hamein uss ki madad karnae kae liyae kahan tha …

Maan – iss kaa matlab hain tumhare paapaa ji geet kae family ko janthe hain …

Pinky – haan … so tho hain …

Maan – pinky … mujhe tumhare paapaji ka cell # chahiye … mujhe unsae baath karni hain …

Pinky – teek hain …. & she gives her dad's # to Maan …

Maan – pinky … yeh baath tum geet ko math batana ki tumnae mujhe yeh sab bataya hain … teek hain …

Pinky – parr kyun sir …

Maan – main jo keh raha hun wo karo … geet kae liyae …

Pinky – teek hain sir …

Pinky leaves from maan's cabin …

Adi & Pinky leave for Khurana mansion …

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anufa

superb!!!!

loved maneet!!!

update soON!!

sure ... hope fully very soon ... thnk u 4 liking it ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
so cute
Maan is soooo caring towards Geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update.. maan trying to reach geet's fmly.. thts cool... do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc update!
so now maan to find out about geet's past.......hmm...interesting...
update soon

luv
Navpreet

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update Dewdropred dear, post soon ur next partšŸ˜

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