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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
nice ..😊. waiting for next update🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
hey its tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud.
😆👏
cant wait 4 next part pls update it soon
am waiting😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: cuteemaan

hey its tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud.

😆👏

cant wait 4 next part pls update it soon

am waiting😍



hey thank you sooooooooooo much 🤗

i will be updating soon 😳 😛

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Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Hey...😛..ek kaam karo CV's ki jagah tum chale jao....Pls..🤗....it's a request......can't wait anymore,jaldi se next part update karo....m dying to see (oopppsss - can't handle,main to dekhne hi lag jati hoon naa......)to read...😉.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
just read all da parts!!!!


luved ur ff!!!!

update sooN!!!!

add me to ur pm list!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56


PART - 7



DADI : ha geet, ab ek pal bhi mat ruklhna, .... jaldi jayiye
hum tho unke aatey hi mangni karatey hai....[said all this in one breath]


Saying the above words.... DADI left the outhouse and walked towards Khurana Mansion...
As she entered the hall, she saw Maan moving here and there franticly...
she slowly moved towards him, thinking what would be the reason for Maan to
be so lost....????? intially she was afraid to ask , but somehow she set her voice
which was not coming up... and patting Maan's shoulder she asked ....

DADI : Maan.... [caringly she called him ]
kya baat hai?
aap chakkar kyu kaat rahey hai??? [her tone increased]
aap humey.... [she was cut by Maan's response]

MAAN : DADIMA....????
Aaap kaha chale gaye the?
hum kabse aapko doondh rahe
the... aap teekh tho hai na...? [he hid his concern behind his angry looks]

Dadi thought , it was not the time to say she choosed a girl for him....
right away, without waiting for his response , she knew that he would
grow even more irritated and god knows what would make him calm
at that point..... [she slightly started sweating , bcoz of her fears].....
so she decided to make a lie.... and tried to compose herself , and
with a small smile she said....

DADI : Maan...... [ dearly she said ]
Hum aapki Dadi hai , koi bachchi nahi
jo aap itney pareshaan ho rahe hai...
hum yahi the, garden mai.....

MAAN : par daadi... humney aapko har jagey dhoondha
tha.... aap lawn mai the nahi.... [ even more worried now]

by now dadi feels she should divert the topic , else Maan would find
out she was with Geet , selecting his bride...

DADI : jaane dijiye Maan, ab aap humey bataengey bhi ....? ki
aap humey itney bechain ho kar doondh kyu rahe the???

MAAN : kuch nahi Dadi .... hum office jaane se pehle aapse milna
chahtey the, roj ki tarah....
Dadi thought .... " OH ...No... Maan ko aaj rokna hoga, woh ladki jo ayegi milne , Maan se.."

MAAN : dadi kya hua.......? aap chup kyu hai ???

DADI : chup nahi Maan ... hum soch rahey the...
kisi ne sahi kaha hai... aap dusht ho... [ maan interrupts ]

MAAN :kyaa?????
kiski himmat hui humey dhusht kehne ki????
boliye dadi... kisney kaha ???

DADI : Kisi ne bhi kaha ho sach hai... Aap khud dekhiye ...
kitnaa chillatey hai aap... aur gussa ...? ussey tho
jaise saatho janam ka bandhan hai aapka...
aapki staff na jaane aapko bardhaasht kaisey kartey hongey????

MAAN : DAAAAADI............ 😡 [ he shouts and starts to walk away ]

DADI : Haa Maan , hum sahi keh rahe hai...
aapki staff kitni bad naseeb hai ???
jinhe roj aapki yeh gussa jhelna padta hai ...,
na koi outing, na koi hasi mazaak...
kaisi office hai wo??? humey tho acha nahi lagta... [ she tries to irritate him to an extent ]

MAAN : teekh hai DADI
tho aap hi batayiye
humey apney staff ke liye ,
kya karna hoga???? [ says in anger ]
Batayiye ... hum wahi karengey...

DADI : OUTING
[ says raising her eye brows , so crisp and clear,as if she thought ... she would say all this... earlier ]

she actually planned something... 😉

MAAN : teekh hai ... jo aap kahey
ab hum chale? office ke liye???

DADI : nahi ... MAAN [says quickly as if he left and she was unable to stop]
aadi ne phone kiya tha...
wo aapke files laaney wale hai
tho aap ko rukna hoga.... [ she leaves.... ]

after some time aadi enters the Khurana Mansion
bringing with him... his own signature smile...

HA ... HA... HA... HAHA... 😆

AADI gets the files signed by Maan and starts to leave...
but after he walked a few steps to the door...

MAAN : AAADI ruko... tumse kuch kehna hai

AADI : ji... ji.. ... sir [ making his spects right ... he turns to Maan ]

MAAN : kal ke liye koi achi si resort mai
event arrange karo... office staff ke liye...
aur ha... sab ko batadena... ki kal office nahi ,
outing hogi.... samajh gaye na... [ giving his boss kind of looks ... he ordered ]

AADI : HA... HA.. HA... HAHAHA.... .
OUTING ???
Ji... JI... sir teekh hai
acha lagega sir , sab ke saath
HAHAHAH....HA....AH... [ reallising that MAAN SIR is staring at him, he stops laughing]
Sab hojayega sir... chalta hu sir... bye sir...


WELL... this is for today...
let me remind u
sabar ka phal meetha hota hai... 😉

___ have a great day 😳
do comment and lemme know
how u felt , reading this... 😛














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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arey yaar...😕..damn it,part kyun finish kar diya ?????????????????? 😕 mujhe bhi outing par jaana hai,mummyyyyyyyyyyyy.....🤣....nahi daaaadiiiiiiiiii...🤣.....girl,u r making me crazy....😉......i really hope,ki CV's iss forum par visit karein and just see ki all we wants....😛...mujhse sabra nahi ho raha hai - Yeh Dil Mange More....🤗.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58


Originally posted by: Coolsheetal

Hey.....ek kaam karo CV's ki jagah tum chale jao....Pls......it's a request......can't wait anymore,jaldi se next part update karo....m dying to see (oopppsss - can't handle,main to dekhne hi lag jati hoon naa......)to read....



WoooooW 😳 ... thank you soooo much .... im on cloud nine....
thank you sooooo much for ur lovely comments.....


Originally posted by: anufa

just read all da parts!!!!


luved ur ff!!!!

update sooN!!!!

add me to ur pm list!!!



thank u sooooooo much 🤗
and sure ur added to the pm list...
😳 😛




Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Coolsheetal

Arey yaar...😕..damn it,part kyun finish kar diya ?????????????????? 😕mujhe bhi outing par jaana hai,mummyyyyyyyyyyyy.....🤣....nahi daaaadiiiiiiiiii...🤣.....girl,u r making me crazy....😉......i really hope,ki CV's iss forum par visit karein and just see ki all we wants....😛...mujhse sabra nahi ho raha hai - Yeh Dil Mange More....🤗.....




hahahahhahahaha 🤣

lollzzzzzzzz

hahahha i will try updating in evening
if possible
two updates ... not sure but i will try 😳 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
superb!!!!

update sooN!!!

n thnx for pm!!!!!

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