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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART - 8


AADI : HA... HA.. HA... HAHAHA.... .
OUTING ???
Ji... JI... sir teekh hai
acha lagega sir , sab ke saath
HAHAHAH....HA....AH... [ reallising that MAAN SIR is staring at him, he stops laughing]
Sab hojayega sir... chalta hu sir... bye sir...

saying all this Aadi leaves Khurana Mansion... It seemed a bit unusual to him.....
but otherwise, he felt happy that the staff.....😛 The staff of Khurana Constructions
would be out to have fun, all the day long .... ONLY FUN 😍 ....
Work would be far away from them.... this very thought, made him happy...



As soon as he reached the office, the news spread like a fire in the forest.....
all faces cheered with joy....with a hope of having fun, and with the big smiles ever 😃
leaving alone two of them.....
Sasha , who was holding a sick expression in her biwilderment
and Tasha ... who was trying to read her mind...😕

TASHA : Sashaaa.....?
[placing her finger on her face,sideways,with a question mark]

Saashaaa....?
hmmm... [fumbled]
Mera matlab hai Maam....??
aap soch kya rahe ho?

SASHA : Shutup Taasha [said huffily]
chup raho....
yeh nahi ho sakta .....[now she's even more confused]
MK aise kaise????
mera matlab ... yeh MK ne pehle kabhi yeh sab.....?
[now her tone raised in rage]
USSSS Behenji ke aane se MK itney badal gaye hai
EK tho wo MK ke ghar par rehti hai
aur ab yeh outing....?
ZAROOR KUCH GADBAD HAI....
MUJHE JALDI SE KUCH KARNAA HOGA....

TAASHA : KARNAAA HOGAA [tries to follow sasha and repeats her words]

SASHA : [ returns to reals.. faces taasha and says irritably ]
AB JAAAO YAHAAAA SE

Taasha in tensed looks bumps into sashaa. for which she was again given a blow...


pinky and aadi are making plans, about how to have an awesome day ahead
and spend time with Geet after soooooooooo many day's...

On otherhand , everyone are informed ... but Geet was left alone without any hint
of what was going to happen the next day...?
Aadi expected Maan sir to inform, and Maan dint give a thought about it...

But ..., all thanks to DADI, who had a called up to GEET and AADI

[ her two most trusted team members,
who were helping her in finding a "bahu",
for her fav grand son... ]

to discuss the trap and plan
for the mission " MAAN KI MANGETAR " 😆 😉

consequently, the day ended while all
1. DADI,AADI and GEET, were planning to convince MAAN with their plans....
2. SASHA and TAASHA planning to Make GEET'S life miserable, for changing MK.
3. MAAN who is firm that tomorrow would be the day for GEET to confess,come what may 😳 ....

SO its tommorow to decide, who's favoured by fortune,
who's missions are successful and who's love is blessed
to blossom and move forward.... 🥱

So, till then keep wondering... 😲 😕 😍

love u all for wonderful comments
and support, plzzz excuse me
for such a small update,
kal pakka ek baaadiii si update deti hu
__ true 😛 😊 😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
hey gal thsi was nice update u carry on with ur studies we dnt have any problem ..........

this was so nice than you 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73

so nice.... waiting fr tomorow😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Cool...waiting for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow....😛....the part was really sweet...😍..but pls.apne update mein iss Sasha ki bacchi ko zaroor maza chakhana.....😡.....really wants that..🤬...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow !!! Maan and outing for staff ...... tht's cool
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Posted: 14 years ago
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neeru

wow nice and wonderful update
maan and outing with staff ha ha ha nice yaar
continue
loved it alot
with
sravs






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Posted: 14 years ago
#78




PART - 9



consequently, the day ended while all

1. DADI,AADI and GEET, were planning to convince MAAN with their plans....

2. SASHA and TAASHA planning to Make GEET'S life miserable, for changing MK.

3. MAAN who is firm that tomorrow would be the day for GEET to confess,come what may ......


So with everyone planning for a good day and expected
results... the day started with a new hope 😛


GEET was ready to face her fears

[ MAAN with another girl,and herself finding the girl ]

Meanwhile , DADIMA entered into Maan's room
and asked him to take Geet along with him....
for an instance Maan felt like his heart plopped out
as it seemed he was caught by DADI for what he
was thinking the previous night.....he was blushing,
but he tried to compose himself and with a stiff
voice he said...

MAAN : Geet????
kyu Dadima?
aap har baar mujhey
us sir phiri ladki ke paas
kyu bejte ho?
Mujhey nahi jaana hai uske saath [ his voiced tuned as a small childs refusal ]

DADIMA : Maan .....
[ she thought aap ke mann mai laddu phoot rahe hongey
aur aap humse kuch nahi chupa sakenge,and tried to act upset ]

DADIMA : Maan..... humey aapse
yeh umeed nahi thi,
aapne socha bhi kaisey
ki wo pyaari si bachi
iss anjaan sheher mai
ek anjaan jagey par sahi salaamat
pahunch sakti hai.....??? [ she tried to push him to thoughts of concern for geet ]

[ and she was right, Maan had actually started thinking about his love interest...
his eyes expressed thousand thoughts ]

MAAN : hmm.... teek [ he was about to say... but dadi never left a chance to tease him now a days ]

DADIMA : teekh hai , agar aap nahi lejaenge tho
humey tho Geet ki fikar hai , hum unhe Dev
ke saath Bejh detey hai....
[ she smiled and winked, turning aside,actually to see
see , how Maan's tone raised the very instance she took Dev's
Name.... ]


MAAN : Nahi... [ in his usual rough tone said ]
Nahi... ab uski koi zarurat nahi...
hum geet ko apney saath le jaenge
aap bas apna khayaal rakhiye ga...

At this moment Dev entered the room, to see MAAN and DADI
together, and asked if they were not going to join him for
breakfast....

seeing Dev.... DADI said

DADIMA : aap fikar mat kijiye maan
dev hai na humari
khayaal rakhne ke liye.... [ she lovingly said ]
Humaarey dono potey
humaari bahut khayaal rakhtey hai
mere pyaarey bachey...

saying this the trio reached the breakfast table,
Maan was about to have his breakfast,
when it reminded him of geet...,
he thought if Geet had even
heard the news about the resort
or not...? and got up from the table.
He said mujhe jaana hoga dadima
samay bahut kam hai....
Dev was confused wit his actions but,
it was only DADIMA who could really understand
the thoughts running in his mind right that moment.
and she let him go....

He then quickly reached the outhouse, and gave a glance
in random to search for Geet , from the hall,to the stairs
to the kitchen and found her standing near the stove
with her hand resting on the platform and her eyes
drown in thoughts..... in her thinking she forgot
that she was boiling milk to make tea.... and milk spilled out
and the vessel was about to catch fire,thats when Maan rushed
to turn off the stove and was surprised to see Geet was still not aware...
He shook her and said...

MAAN : GEEEEEEEEET..........
tumhara Dhyaan kaha hai?
Kabhi tho apni khayaal karo,
tumhey kuch hojaata tho?????
[ thought : Mai sahi tha... ,
yeh ladki kabhi bhi apnaa Khayaal nahi rakhti hai
pata nahi museebat hamesha isika peecha kyu karta hai...?
Kyaa karoon mai iss ladki kaa? ]
MAAN : aisa kya soch rahi thi ?
ki tumhey apni aas paas ke cheesonka hosh bhi nahi...????????

he was irritated,he could no more bear her silence, it was killing him...
but he just felt the pain, when he saw her eyes filled with tears... 😭





Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
waah waah meri jaan.!!!

Loved it!!

I love ur way of narration..it helps me visualize ur scenes!!

Awesome!!

Ur meethi ff princi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80


Originally posted by: geet.a

waah waah meri jaan.!!!

Loved it!!

I love ur way of narration..it helps me visualize ur scenes!!

Awesome!!

Ur meethi ff princi





aaww 🤗

ohhh... love u geet
glad to see ur comments... 😛
u dint comment on my last update 😔
but its ok.... princy will usually b busy 😉
i understand... lolllzzzzz
Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago

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