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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART-4




So He reached Khurana mansion and went to meet dadima....


MAAN : Dadima ab aapki tabyat kaisi hai?

DADIMA : arey ... Maan bete aap wapis kab aye? Hum teek hai

MAAN : mai tho abhi aya hu Dadima...

DADIMA : acha tho aap khana khalijiye, hum aapse kal baat karenge,aur ha wo...
[she tries to say but maan has a phone call to attend so he attends the call and
after finishing it he turns to dadima and says]

MAAN : Teek hai Dadima ab aap araam kijiye.... GOODNIGHT 🤗

he leaves from her room and walks towards outhouse to take some files
which he had to work with.... When he saw no one there,He calls for geet
and as there comes no anwer for his call he wonders....😕 😲

MAAN : yeh ladki ke hotey hue ... ghar pe itni shaanti kaisi ????
aur wo??? Wo tho kahi nazar nahi aa rahi...
lagta hai uske dimaag ke saath saath uske kaan bhi
karaab ho gaye hai....

saying this he walks to geet's room upstairs,and just before
entering the room he steps back .....
[as it reminds him of the day when geet comes out wearing his boxers]

MAAN : nahi mai tho andar bhi nahi jaa sakta,aur ye sar phiri ladki
ko kuch sunai bhi nahi de raha hai... ab kya karooon????
[starts walking to and fro]

mean while he hears a slight noise and following the sound he
looks downstairs,where Geet entered holding many bags in her hand.....
[she was in a position where either she or her bags would give a fall]
she tried to balance but failed and fell on the ground.....

GEET : UFF............. maine tho pehle hi kahaa tha,nahi sambaal
paungi mai yeh sab... par wo...? usey tho jaise,kuch samajhna
hi nahi tha... aur ab dekho mera kya haal hua hai...???
[she reffered to pinky who gave her extra bags to carry]


saying this she settles down all bags a side and unable to carry herself
rests on sofa... having a tierd face almost pale

Maan was watching all this and when he saw her sleep like a baby
he remained in trance thinking about her and he was unable to figure out
to whom did Geet reffer to in her self conversation ....

He ran down,turning to the other side and fighting himself in taking off
his eyes from Geets innocent face and tried doing it in a slow but
angry voice, he yelled.........

MAAN : GEEEEEEEEEEEEET

she shook in fear and got up

MAAN : Geet tum kaha thi? mai kabse tumhe bula rahaa hoon aur tum tum yahaa....

[he dint complete yet,but it was Geet on the otherside and
she cud never stayed in silence for a long time,so started speaking]

GEET : sir aap mujhe doondh rahe the?
par kyu? aapko kuch chahiye tha tho aap
mujhe batadete... aur mai leke aati na aapke liye
par ab nahi.... fir kabhi bahar jaaungi na tab batana
[she says as if mother is explaining to her kid]

MAAN : GEEEEET... tum kabhi puri baat kyu nahi sunti ho?
jab mann kiya apni bakbak leke shuru hojaati ho bas......
mai tumhe file lene ke liye doondh raha thaaa .......

while Maan was saying all this Geet kept a sad and tired face with
one hand on her stomach,Maan as was facing to the otherside
dint notice the way she reacted to his words...

MAAN : Geet mujhe file do jo sasha ne tumhe kal diya tha....

giving a deaf ear Geet walks to the kitchen and starts searching
for something to eat as she was very very hungry.....

just then Maan turns back as he dint recieve any response
and he was Furious to see Geet no where near him
when his eyes kept searching randomly he found her
messing in kitchen... By now he lost his patience and yelled

MAAN : GEEEEEEEEEEEEEET

MAAN : tumhe apne dimaag ko doondhne mai time waste nahi karni chahiye...
wo kisi ped pe chod diya hoga tumne, waapis laane mai time lagega
Tho filhaal ke liye tum file ko dhoond ne pe concentrate karo,
jo tumhare rahe sahe dimaag ke hisaab se table par hoga kitchen mai nahi

GEET : [still searching ]
sir please mai mazaak ke mood mai bilkul nahi hu
Ek tho mujhe kuch khaane ko nahi mil rahaa hai
aur aap ko apni file ki padi hai.... [saying this annoyed geet settles in the chair
loosing hope]
Meanwhile Maan noticing her hunger and tierdness
opens the fridge and takes two apples so that they
both can have them but on offering them Geet
snatched both the apples,at this sight Maan grew more impatient and
took more apples and placed in front of her.....

MAAN: lo YE bhi lelo, ye bhi lo,sab khaalo... aur jaldi jaakey sojao
shaayad subey tak tumhara dimaag wapis aajey tumhe doondte dhoondte 😡

and starts walking away... when he reaches to the door he turns back
to his surprise Geet crossed her legs and was eating happily
as she never bothered about what he said ... he thought did
she even listen to what all he said,but again smiled a little and said to himself
" GEET maine aajtak tumhari jaisi ladki nahi dekhi hai"
and leaves........

Thats all for today guys
hope u all like it
do tell me if u dint like also
GOODNIGHT 😛


Edited by pooh_raj - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
heyy..omg please continue..its soo xciting..!!!lalso can u add me to ur pm list?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
i think this update was a bit long enough for u all
hope u all like it
and plzzzzz do comment
that makes me write more
and bring more updates...
if u have any ideas how
to take it forward they are always welcome 😛 🤗
and all who want a pm please send a buddy request😳

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Edited by pooh_raj - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
hey neeraja
its awsome yaar
so cute dear
maneet fight is worth watching/reading
please continue dear
with lots of
sravs



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Posted: 14 years ago
#35


hahha yaaaa
he is a sweetheart
the most lovable one 😍
new name for him in the
show is funny rt??
DREAMY 😉 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

well im unable think anything after watching the coming up
promo.... my senses have gone numb.... so i dont know
if this update goes well... forgive me if it does'nt go well
im still in trance....

im writing the update now



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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
hahhahahahhahah.😆... now it's getting realllllyyyy funnny 👍🏼hahahha..... waiting for more... hurry 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
PART- 5




Maan thinks "Geet ... maine aajtak tumhari jaisi ladki nahi dekhi hai"
and leaves to Khurana mansion... back to his room, his thoughts still
with Geet and her innocence ..... slowly he turns his eyes and finds
Geet on the couch sleeping .... He slowly walks towards her and
touches her forehead .....and then starts walking away thinking
" Chalo Maan ab sojao, yaha rahoge tho isey dekhte hi rahoge "
and just then he listens to a voice saying ......

Maan aap agaye...? kaha chale gaye the aap?
maine tho socha tha aap khana Khane gaye the
aur achanak yaad aya ke nakul aur chandu tho ghar par hai nahi,
tho mai aa hi rahi thi khana parosne ke liye,aur dekha ki
aap fir gayab hogaye....

he cant believe he heard this,he takes a minute and says Geet
tum sojao mai khaalunga,and slowly turns back to see her....

He couldn't believe his eyes .... He stood there Dumb struck and
absolutely unable to speak... he thought "Maan aaj tho tu gaya
kaam se .... Yeh tho Dadi hai ... ab kya karega????"

On other hand,Dadi felt soooooooooo happy after listening to what Maan said,
and she thought " Waah Kya baat hai, maan ne geet ka naam liya...
aur wo bhi itne pyaar se??? chalo.... ab inhe khud par kaabu bhi nahi raha"

both of them tried to be normal after what they thought
and Dadi had decided to play now.....Playful dadi said

DADI : Maan aap ne kya kaha? humne teek se suna nahi [acting confused,hiding her smile]

MAAN : Wo ... Dadima ... Hum... Woh keh rahe the ki...
[he was never so tensed,the very thought of getting caught by Dadi made him nervous]


DADI : Haa maan kahiye aapne kya kaha tha? Humne tho Geet ka naam suna tha
lagta hai.... 😉 kya aapne Geet ka naam liya tha abhi???

MAAN: nahi dadi...humey kuch kaam tha...wo hum tho sirf file lene gaye the,aur kuch nahi.....
[says like child making excuse]
DADI : Kya??? Maan yeh aap kya keh rahe ho? humne tho aapse kuch nahi pucha hai...
[turned other side and smiled]

MAAN : kya......???? [confused]
teek hai Dadi aap jakar sojaiye
hum kal baat kartey hai...
aur haa hum khana khud khaalenge
GOODNIGHT...
Aur ha Koi zarurat ho tho
bula digiyega, hum yahi hai .....

DADI : teek hai bete jaisey aap chahe...
par aap teek se so paengey na...???
kyu ki....? humey laga ki aap kahi
khoye hue hai....Chalo ab mai chalti hu
[before Maan could answer her she went away smiling to herself]

MAAN to himself says... AAJ THO TUM MARTEY MARTEY BACH GAYE....

YEH LADKI SACH MAI .... SACH MAI, MUJHE PAAGAL KAR DEGI.... 😡




Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
wow neeraja
dear really lovely update dear
so maan thought daadi as geet so cute and funny
tho maan ki bura haal hone waala hai pyaar mein ha ha
lovely and really nice update dear
do continue yaar
with lots of love
sravs



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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
hahahha😊... you allways make me smile with ur updates. 👏... xclintttt❤️

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