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Posted: 14 years ago




PART-28



Geet laughs aloud.... as she was reffering to Maan as her precious gift
and he thought otherwise.....Maan lookes at her surprisingly,as he felt
no reason for her to laugh at ....but he was happy to see her smiling
after sooo many miserable days in the past week....


MAAN : GEET... tum hass kyu rahi ho????
maine tho koi joke nahi kaha tha...?

GEET : huh..hmm.....

tried to calm herself...and said....

GEET : kuch nahi sir... bas kuch yaad aagaya tha...


MAAN : hmm.... teekh hain...yeh lo..DADIMA ko
phone karke kehdena... ki hum aa rahey hain...

he gives her his phone and now Geet is sad.... and having a
sad smile she stay's calm again...

MAAN : GEEEEEEEET 😡 phone lo... main drive kar rahaa hoon...

Geet quickly takes the phone from his hand,and starts staring in void....
Maan is now worried and asks her...with patience..

MAAN : Geet... kya hua?? tum chup kyu hogai???
abhi tho tum itni khush thi....
tho fir yeh ...?

GEET dint respond... and he does'nt give up ... and asks another two times..
getting no response... he stops the jeep.... at a side... and holds her face...
asks her gently....

MAAN : Geet.... sab teeekh ho chuka hain na...
tho tum udaas kyu ho???

GEET : main aapke saath Delhi waapis nahi aa sakthi... 😔

Maan is confused... and looks at her questiongly..


GEET : hmm... wahaa Mere pyaarey bache nahi hongey naa... [ she makes a puppy face ]
mere saath khelne ke liye?

Maan sighs a relief , smiles at her innocence and stay's silent
listening to her childish talks...

GEET : aur... aur main kissey baatein karti?? [ she raises her head and hangs it again ]
aap tho hamesha Gussa kartey rehte hain...


Now Maan answers her... at her saying he does'nt speak....
and that he is always angry....

MAAN : GEEET ... main Gusa...

Geet interrupts....and starts her bak bak....

GEET : Dekha... DEKHA...? kaise chillatey hain aap....?
Main nahi chalungi aapke saath....

MAAN : Geet... main tumhaara boss hoon...

GEET : fir bhi nahi chalungi... kya karenge aap???
boss ho tho???

MAAN : THO.... MAI TUMHEY UTAA KAR LEJAATA....

Now Geet was about to say something but stops at the statement
Maan gave just then .........Maan looks at her having a grin on his face
and Geet shies and looks to the other side....
Both of them continue their journey to the orphanage....looking at each other,
smiling,fighting,and mostly loving in their NOKH- JHOK style....

They reach the orphanage... when they see all of them waiting for GEET...
Maan was happy to see sooo many people who care for his princess...
While Geet looks at everyone with a tensed face... Which Maan notice's
and asks her...

MAAN : GEET... ab tho khush ho... aagaye na
tumhaarey pyaarey bachonke paas....
chup kyu ho???

Geet still scanning all around.... says ina voice barely able to hear....

GEET : SONIA......

And starts running towards the terrace... calling for her one and only
best friend....

GEET : SONIAA.... SONIAA>.....

Maan follows her... as the rest do....and gets on to the terrace....

Sonia was sitting on the ground,leaning at a wall... with her head on
her knees,weeping .... and only weeping.....

Geet slowly walked towards her,sat beside her and slowly patted her on
the shoulder.... Sonia dint stop ,dint raise her head...and was still weeping...
Geet was also feeling the same,but gathered courage and patted her again
calling her in loving voice...

GEET : SONIA.... bachaa.. meri baat suno...

This time Sonia felt Geet's hands,and even she was deaf,she could
feel her caring voice and noticed she said something.....
she raised her head... looked into Geet's eyes which were showering
love... and instantly she hugged her.... Geet comforted her...and slowly
Calmed the little girl.... and in sign's she started to speak...Geet said

GEET : Mai tumse door nahi jaa rahi hoon....
Main tho har haftey chitti likhungi...
aur jab bhi waqt milega... mai tumhaare paas ajaungi...
aur yeh dekho....

She makes Sonia look at the other side,where all the kids were standing
with a chart in their hand... It was very colour full with lots of smilies....
with baloons and centrally they wrote a message....


"SORRY SONIA...... AB HUM KABHI TUMHAAREY
BINA NAHI KHELENGE... HUMEY MAAF KARDO...
AAJ SE HUM SAB DOST HAIN"


and she saw, all of them holding their ears.... this Geasture made the
little girl very happy... and she teared in happiness.... she looked at
Geet... who Gestured her to move forward and She ran towards her
friends... all of them hugged Sonia and lifted her... making her
fly in sky for a moment.... Sonia was smiling... and her happiness
echoed in skies....

GEET also rolled down few tears of Happiness and stood still looking
at Sonia in cheer's ..... Maan who observed all this... came towards
Geet, stood beside her,Geet sensed his presence and turned to him...
and was surprised to see... He was holding his ears... saying...

MAAN : hum aap pe kabhi Gussa nahi karenge...

[ winked and smiled... as he was immitating the kids ]

Geet understood his playful act in a moment... a hit his hands and they
both smiled their awesome smiles.....



Thats for now
friends,i will
come up with the
next one soon😳

__ have fun




🤗
Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey that was so nice...
i really loved it...totally rocking
and maaneet so adorable
u are too good..keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part!!!
Read 3 of them together!!!
Continue soon
Finally ma Maaneet together!!!
Cant wait for more!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Im so Happy to see Ur Update Sooooooooooooooooooooooon😊😊😊😊😊😊
Thats Lovely....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...........................
Loved it so much.....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.......
Loved Geet's Love Towards the Kids Especially Sonia..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️..............
Good to see Sonia Happy..😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃...........
Will be waiting for the next part..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg..this is so cute..thanks yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
I LOVE IT
updaet soon.. thanaks
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Posted: 14 years ago
oops i'm reading ur update aftr such a logn time ..................nd wat 😲 ......

story had changed a lot ........

OMG.i jst loved the change 👏 👏

this is so adorable nd cuter ........

thnk you🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome and emotional update.......loved it.....i felt like crying😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭...the whole sonia and geets part in this ff was just amazing😊 anyways plzzz update soon

---------vinitha
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Posted: 14 years ago
The last few parts have been written beautifully! 😃😃😃

As for the latest update, it was very touching... especially the interactions between Geet and Sonia 😊

I'm glad to see she's made friends!

Maan's gesture as the end was really sweet...

Thanks for the many PMs till date and continue asap ⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago
👏 gr8 update...............

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