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Posted: 14 years ago



Originally posted by: Coolsheetal

Wow Neeru......🤗............Awesum update.....👏👍🏼........Hope,CV's real mein bhi Maaneet ka b'day dikhaye...........😕..........Truly, u r amazing.......⭐️.........main thodi si smily emotions dalne mein kacchi hoon,but,it seems tumhare liye main woh bhi sikhungi......😃.............Desperately waiting for next part......😉...




Originally posted by: Coolsheetal

Neeeeeeeeeeruuuuuuuuuuu..........😲..............M dead.........🤢........m reporting from the other world.......😉😆.........Jaan,where r ur fingers,wanted to hold & gonna give a kissi wissi to ur fingers..🤗....tu jaldi se teri fingers ka insurance karwa le........🤣........they r going to kill all of us..😍.....

Awesume,freakin,Fantabulous update....👏👍🏼.................Mind blowing...⭐️..



Wooooooooow jaan thank u sooooo much...

and truely saying this...

Agar tum mere FF ko like kartey ho

tho main tho tumhaari comments dene
ke andaaz pe fidaaa hoon,

i keep waiting... KAB SHEETAL comment karegi???

LOVE YAAA 🤗

aur rahi baat mere fingers ki?

tho i must say... they pain a lot

after Updating and specially

after sending PM's to all

kyuki sab mere buddy list main nahi hain

and for that,i always need to press the back button,

then enter the username and PM to all 😔

its really time taking...

But then, mere pyaare MANEETIANS ke liye

tho JAAN KURBAAN 😛 😳 😊

i am ready to give a biiiiiiiiiiiiiig update today...

GOOD DAY dear.... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago



Originally posted by: Coolsheetal

Wow Neeru......🤗............Awesum update.....👏👍🏼........Hope,CV's real mein bhi Maaneet ka b'day dikhaye...........😕..........Truly, u r amazing.......⭐️.........main thodi si smily emotions dalne mein kacchi hoon,but,it seems tumhare liye main woh bhi sikhungi......😃.............Desperately waiting for next part......😉...




Originally posted by: Coolsheetal

Neeeeeeeeeeruuuuuuuuuuu..........😲..............M dead.........🤢........m reporting from the other world.......😉😆.........Jaan,where r ur fingers,wanted to hold & gonna give a kissi wissi to ur fingers..🤗....tu jaldi se teri fingers ka insurance karwa le........🤣........they r going to kill all of us..😍.....

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<div>Awesume,freakin,Fantabulous update....👏👍🏼.................Mind blowing...⭐️..



Wooooooooow jaan thank u sooooo much...

and truely saying this...

Agar tum mere FF ko like kartey ho

tho main tho tumhaari comments dene
ke andaaz pe fidaaa hoon,

i keep waiting... KAB SHEETAL comment karegi???

LOVE YAAA 🤗

aur rahi baat mere fingers ki?

tho i must say... they pain a lot

after Updating and specially

after sending PM's to all

kyuki sab mere buddy list main nahi hain

and for that,i always need to press the back button,

then enter the username and PM to all 😔

its really time taking...

But then, mere pyaare MANEETIANS ke liye

tho JAAN KURBAAN 😛 😳 😊

i am ready to give a biiiiiiiiiiiiiig update today...

GOOD DAY dear.... 😳




Originally posted by: whitepearl

Lovely....dreamy..you hit the board......this confession was very profound and impactfull...I wish CV had used it.








Thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 🤗

but 😡

i am angry...

tum apne FF ko continue karne waali thi...

as u promised to both ZOYA and ME....

but i dint see any progress...

so ab sazaa suno....

" I wont PM u next update " 😳

bye.... 😡


Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wiinie_pooh









Wooooooooow jaan thank u sooooo much...

and truely saying this...

Agar tum mere FF ko like kartey ho

tho main tho tumhaari comments dene
ke andaaz pe fidaaa hoon,

i keep waiting... KAB SHEETAL comment karegi???

LOVE YAAA 🤗

aur rahi baat mere fingers ki?

tho i must say... they pain a lot

after Updating and specially

after sending PM's to all

kyuki sab mere buddy list main nahi hain

and for that,i always need to press the back button,

then enter the username and PM to all 😔

its really time taking...

But then, mere pyaare MANEETIANS ke liye

tho JAAN KURBAAN 😛 😳 😊

i am ready to give a biiiiiiiiiiiiiig update today...

GOOD DAY dear.... 😳[/QUOTE

Awwwwwwwwwww.........so sweet of u......🤗Tongue.........but,do take care of urself....😊......waiting for ur next update.....Day Dreaming....

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Posted: 14 years ago
love thier innocent love for each other..love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Im extremely Sorry Dear for not commneting for the Previous Update😔
Im such a Dumbo I thought I commented already..............and now I came to know that I did'nt Comment..............Pls Forgive me Dear😔...........
Part 25
Thats Fabulous Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved the wonderful Surprise.....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️............
Loved the song U Chose.............
How could U get such beautiful thoughts dear?
Ur OutStanding⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Part 26
Thats Fantastic👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Thats Lovely❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved these lines sooooooooooooo much
MAAN : shhh... Geet... main yahi hoon... tumhaarey paas...
aur mein tumhey kaisey chod saktaa hoon???
meri saansein jo chalti hain ab tumse....
tumhaarey bina tho mein mar jaaunga...

GEET : khabardaar... agar dobaara marne ki baat ki tho...
aap kyu hameshaa mujhe sataatey rehte ho???
kya mein khaak jee paaungi aapke bina??
Thats a very heart touching part
Pls Update Sooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago

@ .sireesha.


Thank u soooooooooooo much....


i love ur bunch of smilies u post

everytime............

thank u thank u..... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
for such a lovlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy update
finally
dukh bhare din bete re bhaiya ab sukh ayo reeeeeee



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly

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finally


<font color="#990033" size="5">dukh bhare din bete re bhaiya ab sukh ayo reeeeeee</font>

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aaawwwwww 🤗 😳

sooooo cute smilies....

thank u soooooo much dear....

and really " AB SUKH AAYOO RE " 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
really awesome....so loved it.
u r really good and so r maaneet...
the confession was so nice
i must say u rock and keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago




PART-27




They stood like that in each others arms for a while...and Geet slowly
broke the hug... and looked at him ... with love.....

Geet slowly hanged her head down as she thought of her words just a
few minutes ago...and Maan make her look at him, holding her chin...
and says..

MAAN : Geet... tumhey mujhse... ya kisi se... Apni NAZREIN churane
ki zarurat nahi hain....

She does'nt react to his words when he waves his hands in front of her
eye's and holding her hand say's

MAAN : GEET .....? Ab chalein ya saari zindagi bas yahi rahey,aise
ek doosrey ko dekhtey hue ....???

Geet returns to her usual state and says slowly....

GEET : ji sir....

MAAN now tries to play....

MAAN : kya? ji sir??? yahee rahne kaa irada hain kya???

Geet says in a hurry...

GEET : nahin...nahin... mera matlab...

MAAN starts laughing and Geet gets embarrassed and starts to walk
towards MAAN's Jeep ......which carried many of their memories...

MAAN : Ruk jao GEET .... ek minute....

He gets back to the door,and move towards Geet,holding the roses he brought
to gift her on this special moment....
Geet was waiting.... looking at the jeep,when Maan comes to her....
holds her hand,Takes her to the middle of the Farm, bends on his knees
and express his love by giving her flowers....

MAAN : I LOVE U GEET.... kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi???

GEET smiles giving a nod....

Maan stands up slowly and ask her....

MAAN : GEET...... yu sir hilaane ka kya matlab hain???
kuch tho kaho apni mu se ...😔

Geet just takes the flowers ,runs and seats herself in the jeep....
followed by Maan... Maan gets into the jeep,and looks at her ,
saying...

MAAN : Geet ab jawaab do.... warnaa main Gaadi start nahi karne walaa...

GEET : Haan....

Says slowly to herself,which Maan hear's and smiles,unnotices by Geet...
makes a stern face and asks...

MAAN : tumney kuch kahaa??? Geet???

GEET : haan ... sir ... humey ab chalna chahiye, warnaa der hojaegi...

Saying this she give a winner look to Maan...
and he starts the jeep smiling heartily....says
to himself...

MAAN : tumney keh tho diya Geet ... jo tumhaarey dil mein hain...
par main tumhey bahut tang karne waala hoon...

He said holding a grin on his face....

GEET : sir... kya aap mujhe gurudware le jaenge???

Made a pleasing face... and waited for response which came instantly....

MAAN : Haan Geet... ismai poochne ki kya baat hain???
Par tumhey abhi kyu jaana hain???
kal chale tho araam se???

GEET : wo.. sir... mai....

MAAN : haan Geet bolo... kya kehnaa hain???
dar kyu rahi ho???

GEET : nahi sir.. kuch nahi...
wo mai har saal apne janam din pe
BABAJI ke darshan karti hoon...
aur aaj jab mere liye itnaa acha taufa
diya unho ne tho mai unhe bhool kaise sakti hoon???

MAAN : Taufa??? tho tumhey un sab ne taufa bhi diya hain???
maine tho sirf cake tak ki planning ki thi....
par wo sab pata nahi... mujse chupaake kab
tumhey taufaa de diya hain...

Geet laughs aloud.... as she was reffering to Maan as her precious gift
and he thought otherwise.....Maan lookes at her surprisingly,as he felt
no reason for her to laugh at ....


Sorry yaar
aaj jab bhi update karne
wali thi current is playing
with me...
dont want to take a risk...
so i will update in the morning...
do comment...😭

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago

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