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Posted: 14 years ago



HEY ALL.............. !!! 🤗




Originally posted by: Coolsheetal

OMG Neeru..😲....i love u darling for barging Sasha into the Kicchad...🤗..Wow,maza aa gaya & u won't believe,i was laughing like anything while reading this post with the live telecast in front of my eyes 🤣& my collegues were - Sheetal,u have gone mad....😳..tu laptop ko dekh dekh ke hans rahi hai....😆.Babaji ki kasam - mere xpressions bhi Geet jaise ho gaye thee yeh sun kar.....bus,yeh dialogue Maan Sir ne nahi bola......🤣🤣


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& The 14th part is just .....😍.......khush kitta si 👏,tussi gr888888888 ho.👍🏼..........




THANKS A LOTTTT..... 🤗
HHAHAH ... sheetal tu toh laptop dekh dekh ke has rahi hai... 😆
good one... hahah happy that u liked the update...
and abt sashaa... i hate that women...
so she had to face kichchad... atleast in
my imagination... ohhh ... i cant stop
thinking of her face with kichchad...😳

Originally posted by: vinithaa

Nice update👏👏👏...wow loved pari and maan...both helping each other😊 anyways i think geet would get jealous😉 and shasha fell in the kichad😆😆 haha plz update soon.
😆😆😆



HHHHAhhaha ... yup... i told already
Pari is for good...
Thanks a lott for lovely comments


Originally posted by: anu_luv_maan

😆 very nice update dear especially loved the spoiler 😆


plz continues soon .....




Thank u sooooooo much dear... 🤗

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

OMG thats so funny


🤣

🤣

🤣


<div>Loved Geet's reaction when she saw Pari's wallpaper in Maan's mobile.
Thats really funny

The game is really awesome

The precap is too good

Thanq so much for the PM

Can't wait

Pls update soon



OHHH.... thanks a bunch dear...
ur comments r always colorful🤗

Originally posted by: whitepearl

Very Nice Winnie...Your have a command over comedy.👏

👏👏👏

had a riot while reading....🤣

Please Continue...

and Thank you so much for PM.



hey thanks a ton darling...
this is what i was waiting to read
and i was working for...
jab saarey FF's romance dikhaaye
tho i wanted my FF to be different
so i thought of comic sense,
bcoz i crack a lot in my class... 😉

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

ust read the remaining parts!....

superb parts!....

good to see that maan and pari are now together and that they are planning someting!...

continue soon!

thnx 4 the pm!



THANK U 🤗


Originally posted by: sravani899

hey neeru

wow omg so awsome update dear😊

and long update silly me😆

well dear its nice and wonderful

so pari and maan are friends so good😃

and love to read the game honey😆

and also maan mood swinging really nice and the dialogue was nice😆😆😆

and yes pinky and chocolate

spoiler is really too goood dear</a>

loved it neeru good and lovely update dear<img src="http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_55.gif" alt="Clapping Hands" />

update soon

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Thanks soooooooooooooo much
i love ur smilies a lotttttttttttt🤗

Originally posted by: geet.a

aww..NEERu!!

meri jaan..exams khatam?

Awesome awesome!!

I LOVE IT!!!

Sasha in keechhad..plzz make it followed by Tasha na!!

bohot mazaa aayega

lovely update darling!
lots of love



Thank u sooooooooooo much dear....🤗

Originally posted by: shonasukirti

verryyy nice update 👍🏼 😆



Thank u🤗

Originally posted by: charmed ones

<p align="center"><font color="#ff00ff">Yeah.... great update👏...luv ur Comedy🤣...hehehe...Shash is halat🤣....show mian na sahi....FF mein h sahii...lol🤣</font></p>



Thank u soooooooo much .... hahahah i too look
forward for sashaa in kichchad actually in the show😛



Thank u soooo much... 😊

Originally posted by: anufa

want to see more of jealous geet....

lolzzzz at sasha!!!

update sooN!!!



sure sure.... Tabhi tho mazaaa ayega...
jab Geet jealous hokey confess karegi.... 😉

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

hey i jst read ur ff

nd it was awesome

cant wait till u nxt updarte

can u add me to ur pm list



hey dear, thanks for taking time to read my FF
and ur added to pm list
Thanks for ur lovely comments 😉



Thanks all ..... for ur awesome comments and support.......
love u all soooo much for liking my FF....
i will be updating soon.... 🤗





Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome awesome update👏waiting for next part👏😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow, gr8 update👏

Edited by ät_skit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update pls add me to ur pm least xx
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Posted: 14 years ago



HELLOOOOOOOOOO


MY FAV FRIENDS.......

My dear people.... 🤗

Im back.... to IF....after three long days...

i finished my exams... and now as
i have time till monday, i mean.... free time...
full time.... 😉

I promise to give more updates, and i am also
planning to update faster as possible....

one update is in progress....
i will PM u all... as once i fiinish writing the
update...

___ lots of love 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz pm me...i sent buddy request.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago





PART- 15



PINKY : GEET ... woh Dyane teraa itnaaa
buraaa karti hai... aur tu hai....
BABA RAAMDEV BANNAA HAI KYA???
Jaane de naa... ek baar giregi tho sambhal jaayegi
tu phone kar.... phone.... [ she diverted ]


Geet dint dare to really save SASHA from disaster after what
all pinky told her... so she started to call DADI....she slightly
turned around,but turned back to her position quickly... as she heard
Sasha MAM fall in the puddle.....Pinky playfully laughed and started
singing like a school child..." HUMPTY DUMPTY HAD A GREAT FALL "
while Geet was stepping to help Sasha... Sasha in her attitude denied
to take help from her.... and pinky gestured Geet ... Thats what is sashaa..
its waste offering a help to that dyne....

Mean while Maan was busy watching Geet's rapid reactions,
and changing expressions,While PARI laughed aloud.....
seeing SASHA Fall down like that....Sasha wished MK not to see her
that moment... but her wishes dint work.... Pari's laughter Bought Maan
back to the world and even he could not resist laughing at Sasha...
but somehow managed to end up with small smiles... and moved towards
GEET without even looking at SASHAA for another time....




SASHAA could not digest this and she got up herself.... ,
it was quite difficult but she deserved it... everyone felt so...
and as AADI arrived... the place was even more colorful
with his smiles... HA >>... HA.... HAHAHA...😆

PINKY and AADI were laughing, Pari accompained them,
but poor girl TASHA dint know how to react... as she was
meant to be with Sasha all the time....so she started
meddling with her pony TAIL😆... and made wierd faces...

Sasha's face was muddy now... she looked like her name..." DYNE "
she quickly walked towards Tasha....

TASHA : Aaaahhhhhh....

SASHA : TASHAAAAAA .... mai hu..... SASHA.....
now shut up and direct me to the
washroom..... 😡

TASHA : yes MAAM.... uhh .. silly me...


they walked away right at that moment and Maan
called out for Pari... coming very near to Geet's ears...
it seemed as if he shouted for Geet in her ears...

MAAN : PARI....

GEET shook in shivers... and said....slowly

GEET : sir... Pari maam wahaa hai... aap kahe tho mai buladeti hu...

Maan felt bad ... that Geet is not reacting the way he expected....
but he dint let his feelings out... as he always did....he hid them
deep in his heart.....

MAAN : Geet... tumhey jo kaha jaye ... wo karo...
Pari ke paas mai khud jaunga....

saying this Maan was moving towards Pari but he was even
looking Back at Geet... so he dint observe that Pari was walking
towards him and bumped into Pari...
and now the arrow hit Geet ..... She started muttering...

GEET : yeh LADKI phir aa gayi???
Wo bhi Maan sir ko takraane??
Paagal hai yeh ladki... yeh tho
MAAN SIR KE LIYE BILKUL TEEK NAHI....
aur Maan sir ....??? Wo bhi uss Paagal
ladki ke saath haste, muskuraatey hai...
inhe mujhse tho Sirf gussa aata hai...
par wo Pari ke saath..? uske saath
tho badey mazaak kartey hai....
Ab kya kahu??? inkaa koi barosa nahi,
kab kaisey hojaatey hai... aur Ladki par....
uspar tho bilkul yakeen nahi... ab kya karu???

she quikly walks towards Maan, who was making fake smiles
for what Pari was speaking to him....

GEET : sir.... aapka phone....

Maan does'nt pay attention and is still busy speaking to pari
Geet holds Maan's hand, turns slightly away... and
placing the phone in his hand,leaves walking slowly....
Maan noticed the change, and was happy it worked...
even Pari smiled and they highfived and felt happy...



Now all moved to have lunch... and Geet was about to
take Papaya while Pinky stopped her...

PINKY : Geet...... tu yeh kya kar rahi hai???
yeh PAPITA ... hai yaar... tu...

GEET : arey tho kya hua agar yeh Papita hai???
Mujhe achaa lagtaa hai, meri Maan tu bhi le...
yeh sehat ke liye achaa hai...

PINKY : haaa... GEET mai jaanti hu...
YEH SEHAT KE LIYE ACHAA HAI...
PAR TERE LIYE NAHI.....

GEET is shocked to hear this... and asks...in worry

GEET : mere liye teekh nahi...? par kyu???

pinky takes the plate from Geet's hands...places it away..
and looking around she drags Geet to a lonely place....
in this process pinky hits Maan and without noticing she leaves
Maan dont understand..... but lets it go...

PINKY : Geet.... tu apna khayaal bilkul nahi rakhti hai...
tu iss haal mai yeh khaane wali thi????

GEET : pinky tu kya keh rahi hai??? mujhe kuch nahi pata...
saaf saaf bolna....mujhe bhook lagi hai...

PINKY holds Geet's hands and whispers slowly

PINKY : Geet.... MAI JAANTI HU... TU GHAR KYU CHOD KE
AAGAYI.... DAD NE MUJHE SAB BATAADIYA....

Geet's heart sinks for a moment.... her eyes teared...
and her breath rate turn uneven....
pinky held out her arms and Geet fell into them,sobbing
and sniffing.... Mujhe maaf karna pinky , main tujhe bataana chahti thi
lekin... mai... uhh...wo...she cried... pinky made her caring talks
which made Geet calm at a point of time...

PINKY : Geet... tu ab mujhse waada kar...ke tu
apnaa puraa khayaal rakhegi...

GEET : Haa .. pinky Mai waada karti hu... mai apnaa
puraa khayaal rakhungi... aur mai aindaa..
tujhey koi shikaayat ka maukaa nahi dungi...

Maan who was worried after noticing the time
as Geet and pinky dint return, went to search them
and at this moment he reached a tree hid himself behind
it and heard Geet's promise of taking care of herself....
Now he was even more worried .... he thought... what
would be the reason for Geet to have tears and make such promise????
He tried hard but failed to make out the reason...


please comment and let me
know if u liked it or not,....
dont forget the like button
it encourages me to write more... 😳


Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i guess truth will be out soon?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats Awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it
Poor Sasha. 😒Maan too smiled at her thats so disappointing for her😉
Loved Pinky's Concern towards Geet😃
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey just start reading...
it is so good...hope to finish it soon
plz add me to ur pm list
thx
keep writing 👏👏👏👏

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