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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anu_luv_maan

Oh wow so touchy part, this was so nice ….thnk you 🤗



Thank u soooo much for liking the update
im happy that u all are liking the story




Originally posted by: desigurl953

Thanks a lot for this awesome update....the part where Geet said haan wahi ajeeb naam wale made me laugh for 5 whole mins......Lolz....thanks a lot.....please update soon




Haahahahahahah

thanks dear...



Originally posted by: -honeydew-

nice ..... 😊

res for more



Thank uuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet is such a sweetheart, making such a great effort just to unite Maan and Pari!
Does the girl not feel jealous? Even slightly?

Great part..

Thanks for the P.M. and keep writing ⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice update... 😉

ps. wellcome back🤗
Edited by ät_skit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks alot 4 great n awesome updates⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️...i read all iin 1 go😆...well i hav read more longer than this...i was so easy 4 me😃😳😆...i must say u got very creative mind😃...changing 4 concept of story very differently here😊....hmmm i read u got exams well concentrate on that😊...n afterwards keep entertains us⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: charmed ones

<p align="center">Thanks alot 4 great n awesome updates⭐️...i read all iin 1 go😆...well i hav read more longer than this...i was so easy 4 me😃😳😆...i must sayu got very creative mind😃...changing 4 concept of story very differently here😊....hmmm i read u got exams well concentrate on that😊...n afterwards keep entertains us⭐️...</p>



Thank u sooooooo much
and woooow u read all in one go???
and im happy u said it seemed interesting
i will be updating on saturday
probably,and from monday i have exams
so three days i will be absent...
ooops sorry clg mai aadat hogai...
three days chutti... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago



PART- 14


Rano as was in same situation with pari... she makes friends with geet
and make a plan to let Pari and Maan meet each other...



Geet manages to find Aadi and shares the plan with him....
Aadi listens carefully and steps forward to execute...
Meanwhile, Maan who is back and is searching for Geet,
comes across Aadi...

MAAN : Aadi......???? tho finally tum logonko time mil gaya aane ka??? [ said in anger,being a boss ]

AADI : woh... woo....ji... sir....
me..mera matlab hai...
sab aa rahey hai sir...

MAAN : KYAAAAAAA???? abhi bhi
KISIKO AANA BAAKI HAI???

AADI : nahi ... sir... wo.. sirf mai ayaa hu..
sab bus mai aa rahey hai...
bus ka break down hua tho ...
tho... time lag gayaa....bas...

MAAN : oohh.... hmmm... teekh hai....
Waisey...? tumne Geet ko kahi dekha hai kya???

AADI : haa .... sir,... wo ... us taraf gayi hai....
wahaa jahaa... wo shed jaisaaa hai na...
pedh paudhe sab... usney kaha... ki wo jagay
usey bahut pasand aayi...s..sir

MAAN : teekh hai tum jaao... baaki ke arrangements dekho mai aata hu...

and he thinks :

MAAN : yeh ladki bhi na.... bilkul paagal hai
yaha mai usey puri jungle... mera matlab....
puri resort mai dhoond rahaa hu aur wo,
un khetoo mai....??? nai nai... shed...ped paudhey...
UFFF... yeh kya hogaya mujhe??? mai bhi uski tarah bak bak
kar rahaaa hoon???

[ his expressions change like colors from anger,confusion and wat not.. ]


he starts walking towards the place shown by Aadi and on his way....
his eyes catch up with Geet who sneakily watching around her, moves
to a lady and says.... Maine sir ke aane ke arrangements kar diye hai,
abhi wo aatey hi hongey.... aur aaapka kaam hua???? Pari aayegi na???
and Rano says Pari is already waiting .... for Maan...
By now Maan gets the picture, about Dadi's plans... and now he is even
more determined to fail all their plans... so he quickly moved to the place
where pari was standing opposite to Maan ... facing the other side...
pari on sensing someone nearing her said aloud....
Maan and Pari at same time said aloud....


MAAN : Mujhe tumse shaadi nahi karni hai....


PARI : Mujhe kisi sey Shaadi nahi karni hai....


Both looked at each other ..... firstly confused and then smiled
that their problem is no more existing to trouble them....


Maan quickly said...

MAAN : suno... Geet ko mat bataana...

PARI : aur tum... DI se mat kehna....

Maan asked pari...

MAAN : hmm.... teekh hai... tumaara naam........?????

Pari was now confused, how this person dint know her name..
and she said making faces

PARI : " PARI "
tumey mera naam nahi pataaa???

Maan now explained his situation,and formed alliance
and they both made challenging look like this...👍🏼


NOW STARTS THE GAME




Staff reached the resort....
everyone were happy, women busy in gossip, men busy in comments
and Masti.... the place more colorful now........While sashaa moved quickly
towards aadi and asked him ..........

SAASHA : AADI ..... MK kahaa hai???

AADI : WO... MK SIR.... mujhey pata nai sashaa...

[ he knowinly said, he dint want to disclose... ]

Then he turned to pinky, who was searching for Geet,and directed her towards Geet,
for which pinky thanked him and left....
Geet on otherhand, was franticly moving from one side to the other,
as she had two fears, one was that The staff arrived before hand,and other
was, she dint have even pinch of confidence that Maan would speak well
with Pari..... ooh she was sooooooooo much worried to be aware that pinky
called her five times.....already and now pinky eating a choclate moved around
Geet,and waved her hands to which finally Geet responded but was still in thoughts.....
so, this time pinky gave a jerk and geet almost lost her balance,and said....

GEET : oye.. yahaa kaun hai???? Bandar???

PINKY : Bandar nai yaaar mai...... pinky.....

GEET : pinky???? tu ...? sab aagaye????

[ holding a question mark she said in worried tone ]

PINKY : haa ... mai... aur haa... sab aagaye...
Geet...???? tu khush hai yaa udaas??? [ asked innocently ]

geet dint respond to pinky's question,instead she started her self conversation...

GEET : HAAY.... HAAY... BABAJI... Ab kya hoga???
mera dimaag bhi chalnaa bandh hogayaaa...

she turned around and she got a blow out of the water..... Maan and Pari
coming along.... smiling and speaking to each other... as if they were friends
from childhood....Geet could not come over the situation,and over that pinky
was calling her and trying to speak, so geet gave pinky a choclate and asked
her to wait and have fun with it till she came back...

PINKY : oye...???

[ raised her hand to stop geet,saw the choclate and said... ]

PINKY : no waiting for choclating.... 😳 [ lollllllzzzzz] 😆

Geet soon went towards Maan,and asked

GEET : sir ... aap kahaa chalegaye the??? mai aapko...

MAAN : hmmm... MISS GEET HANDA... Dadima ko phone karke
kehnaa ... ki mai..... [ he waited to see how geet reacts ]

GEET closed her eyes thinking he would say... MAI SHAADI KE LIYE TAYAAR HU...
but Maan wanted fun so.... he said...


MAAN : Daadimaa se kehnaa ki mai DHUsht nahi hu....
aaj meraa staff khush hai... aur unhe yeh tum bataaogi
kyuki tum bhi meri employee ho.........

Geet was looking at him,totally confused....
she was not able to read him or his mind
and she thought to herself...

GEET : inhe daadimaa ki padi hai???>...... aur yahaa meri
jaan chut rahi hai... yeh is ladkey ke dress wali
ladki ko sach mai pari tho nai banaaliyaaa na apne dil kaaa????

MAAN : ab khadey khadey mera mooo kya dekh rahi ho???
Dadi ko phone karo...... yeh lo....phone [ he gave his phone ]

and Geet was again shocked to see ... pari's smiling face
was the wall paper...... Geet lost her balance but managed
not to show her thoughts... which Maan was already reading
and having fun......

She turned around and walked a few steps near pinky,
and saw sashaa fuming in confusion cum anger...
coming towards her.....

GEET : MaaaM..... woh... p......

PINKY stopped Geet from saying anymore....
Geet was about to alarm Sashaa, about the
puddle on her way... which, she otherwise
would step into.....

PINKY : GEET ... woh Dyane teraa itnaaa
buraaa karti hai... aur tu hai....
BABA RAAMDEV BANNAA HAI KYA???
Jaane de naa... ek baar giregi tho sambhal jaayegi
tu phone kar.... phone.... [ she diverted ]




Spoiler :

SAASHA falls into kichchad.....
while Maan was about to speak to her 😆



HOPE u all like it
plzzzz leave ur comments/views
and let me know how was
the update....

__ have a great time........ 🤗 😳





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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG Neeru..😲....i love u darling for barging Sasha into the Kicchad...🤗..Wow,maza aa gaya & u won't believe,i was laughing like anything while reading this post with the live telecast in front of my eyes 🤣 & my collegues were - Sheetal,u have gone mad....😳..tu laptop ko dekh dekh ke hans rahi hai....😆.Babaji ki kasam - mere xpressions bhi Geet jaise ho gaye thee yeh sun kar.....bus,yeh dialogue Maan Sir ne nahi bola......🤣🤣

& The 14th part is just .....😉😛😳🤣😆😍.......khush kitta si 👏 ,tussi gr888888888 ho.👍🏼..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update👏👏👏...wow loved pari and maan...both helping each other😊 anyways i think geet would get jealous😉 and shasha fell in the kichad😆😆 haha plz update soon.
😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
😆 very nice update dear especially loved the spoiler 😆


plz continues soon .....
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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG thats so funny

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Loved Geet's reaction when she saw Pari's wallpaper in Maan's mobile.
Thats really funny
The game is really awesome
The precap is too good
Thanq so much for the PM
Can't wait
Pls update soon

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