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Posted: 14 years ago
soooooooooooo sweet👏& lovely👏👍🏼update,loved it a lot😊send next part soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh loved it....i hope the truth comes out tommorow and maan secretly still loves geet even after knowing her flash back...

anyways it was lovely update 👏 loved both pari and maan and also shasha fell in kichad...she deserves it

-------vinitha
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohk going to reveal da past too gud continue 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was nice
liked how much maan is concerned about her
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks u 4 lovely update...!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏
Ohh Tasha n sasha....poor soul😈....hehehe......!!!!!😆😆😆😆😆
Luv Maan😳... making Geet more J...lol!!!! 😆😆gud work......!!!!!high five!!!!! lolz...😆😆😆
Poor Maan😳 is worid 4 Geet now...I wonder when she accept her feelings 4 Maan😊....!!!!!...More MANEET Moments plzzzzzzzzzz...!!!!!!😊😉😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please add me to ur pm list!! I really like it!
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Posted: 14 years ago

HELLOOOOOOOOO DEAR ONES🤗


Originally posted by: rinky70

i guess truth will be out soon?



Yes dear... it will be out
but wait untill the story takes a
turn.....

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Thats Awesome👏

Loved it

Poor Sasha. 😒Maan too smiled at her thats so disappointing for her😉

Loved Pinky's Concern towards Geet😃

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Pls update ASAP



Hahahhahah..... update is in progress...
there's a lot to happen....

Originally posted by: ansah

hey just start reading...

it is so good...hope to finish it soon

plz add me to ur pm list

thx

keep writing 👏



AWwwwwwwwww.... 🤗

Thanks for liking it dear

And a warm welcome to 'U' 😳

Originally posted by: sona-rai

soooooooooooo sweet👏& lovely👏👍🏼update,loved it a lot😊send next part soon😊



Thank u sooooooooooo much
i will definately Pm u....
soooooooooner as possible🤗

Originally posted by: vinithaa

oh loved it....i hope the truth comes out tommorow and maan secretly still loves geet even after knowing her flash back...

anyways it was lovely update 👏 loved both pari and maan and also shasha fell in kichad...she deserves it

-------vinitha



Hey thanks for such cute comments....
and it takes a little time
but truth will be out soon😛

Originally posted by: cuteemaan

Ohk going to reveal da past too gud continue 😊



THANK UUUUU🤗

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

it was nice

liked how much maan is concerned about her



Awww... thanks da....
yes, Maan cares a lot for her.... 😳

Originally posted by: charmed ones

<font color="#000000">Thanks u 4 lovely update...!!!! 👏</font>

<font color="#000000">Ohh Tasha n sasha....poor soul😈....hehehe......!!!!!😆</font>

<font color="#000000">Luv Maan😳... making Geet more J...lol!!!! 😆😆gud work......!!!!!high five!!!!! lolz...😆😆😆</font>

<font color="#000000">Poor Maan😳 is worid 4 Geet now...I wonder when she accept her feelings 4 Maan😊....!!!!!...More MANEET Moments plzzzzzzzzzz...!!!!!!😊😉😃</font>



Hahahahha.....

soooo colorful comments dear...
made my day....
thank u....🤗
and confession is coming sooooooon 😳



thank u dear....😊

Originally posted by: vardah23

Please add me to ur pm list!! I really like it!



Hey thank u.... 🤗

and Welcome to my fiction....



Thanks dear... [:p]




Thanks all.... for the comments....
i will update sooooon
and try to give two updates today..
or tomorrow.....

___ lots of love😳

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago




Hey frn's 😛

here came three new
readers to our world

lets welcome them... 😛


1.vardah23
2. ansah
3.FIRESafiReFIRE




Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Neeru...😲...this part gave me goosebumps.....😍........literally geet's teary eyes floated in front of me....😭.....hats off 2 u for such a wonderful thought - A friend in need is a friend indeed....👏.....
BTW,i din't recd.PM...there is some problem i think - m not getting notifications from IF....😕...
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PART-16


Now he was even more worried .... he thought... what
would be the reason for Geet to have tears and make such promise????
He tried hard but failed to make out the reason...

He was sad.... Geet never let him know about her miseries,
but he again calmed himself, thinking.... sooon he will
marry Geet and then onwards.... troubles will never be able
to reach her.... as He would protect her soooo much...he would
love her, care for her soooooo very much... the only thing he
waited for... is Geet's approval....If she even approved this moment..
he would leave no single choice to make her feel a princess of his life.
he was in deep thoughts .... thinking of his love... which was eternal...
he half closed his eyes... and smiled slightly... turned to the other side..
and to his worry,Geet and pinky left the place...long back... he dint know
where they were.... he was about to search and walked a few steps...
while he found Geet playing with the Kids... who were a part of Pari's
orphanage...

One of the kids started crying... he went on crying sooo badly...
never stopped... Pari,Pinky,Rano... everyone left their trails in
making him calm... but no way he stopped....

Mean while, Sashaa observed that MK is watching the kid,... and
as she never left a chance to flatter him,tried to pacify the kid...
but the little innocent boy... started crying louder and louder when
Sasha made trials in her style... and pinky laughed again seeing
how stupid was Sasha, who dint know how to speak to a child....


and now Geet slowly came towards him, gave her hand and gestured
to the little one to come along... to this lovable gesture, the boy
dint fully stop crying but, he could manage to lower his tone,and he took
hold of geet's little finger tightly and walked along with her,others too followed them,
Geet took the little boy to the near by sanctuary......
and to their amazement they found the charismatic peacocks in their
might splendor gracefully prancing among the vibrant hued flowers...
in the lush green landscaping.... the climate turned calm..... slightly cold....
the clouds started getting a little darker,and Geet bent her head a bit to see
and to her happiness..... the boy forgot his cries, and was lost in the beaty
of peacocks..... now even she could seea sweet innocent smile spreading on his lips.....
she was touched deep in her soul to see the boy geasturing her to enjoy the view....
and it added more to her joy... when it started drizzling slightly.....and peacocks
spread their feathers.... and started to rejoice the first rain....
By now even the rest of the kids started playing in rain.....
they unknowingly surrounded Geet and started turning her
to each of them, Geet was overwhelmed.... she was soooo
happy, she herself became a child like one of them and
played with them she was smiling heartily at this moment
she was happy from her deepest souls, Maan could feel
it and even he was happy see her hearty smiles after such
a long time... a tear drop of happiness ofcourse.... stayed still
at Maan's eyes... 😛


Pari by now came to know how true and innocent and Plain hearted girl Geet was,
she felt immensely happy as she saw some one caring for her kids,[ for her they were the world ]
she turned to see maan whose eyes were expressing sooooooo much love for Geet,
and Pari felt even Geet loved him and so she made up her mind to do all that's possible
to get them together to confess....and bind them in a relation which was so pure and would last forever....


Aadi and pinky were speaking to each other and while Aadi saw Geet ,he called her
and she came over, He started asking about Geet and pinky's friendship....

AADI : GEET... PINKY.... Tum dono ki dosti ko teen saal tho
hue hongey na....???

GEET : teen saal????? Arey nai Aadi sir... hum dono tho
bachpan ke saathi hai....Pinky mere Ghar ke paas
hi rehti thi.... hai na... pinky...

PINKY : haaa... aur yaad hai Geet??? hum kaisey masti kartey the...
kabhi Kheto mai Aam churaakar Bhaag jatey,tho kabhi
Simran ki choti keench ke chup jaatey....

GEET : haaa pinky.... mujhe sab yaad hai... har wo pal
jab hum natkhat hoke bhi sab key pyaare
hua katrey the.... kitney pyaare din the wo
bhi.... jab humey ek choti si Aam ka phal bhi
itni kushi deti thi.... par ab nahi hai... kuch bhi nahi..

[ geet's eyes teared instantly but pinky stopped her from
crying anymore....by saying ]

PINKY : Geet.... tumhey tho kuch bhi yaad nahi Aam ke ilaava...

[ said teasingly , to which Geet bounced back]

GEET : Oye... tu aisey kaisey keh sakti hai....
mujhe sab yaad hai... mai kuch nahi bhooli....hu

PINKY : acha.... tho fir yeh bataa... class mai Zyaada daat
kisko padte the???? bataaa... bataanaa...


GEET : haa... haa.... bataati hu..... mai kisi se nahi darti...

PINKY : haa tho bataa... tujhey tho teacher roj kadha karti
thi.... tu so jo jati thi na har class mai...

GEET : oye.... tu koi kam nahi thi... tu tho roj hi meri
tiffin khaaleti... mere liye kuch bachtaa hi nahi

[ they fought like kids ]

PINKY : tu bhi kya kam thi...? tiffin ke badle... mujse apnaa Home work nai
karwathi thi...??? mujhe sab do baar likhnaa padta,... [ made a cry face ]

AADI : ha...ha..haahah... [ clapped his hands in amusement ]


PINKY : aur wo din kaisey bhul gayi Geet jab tu mere......

Geet closed pinky's mouth, pinky freed herself and started to run,

GEET : pinky ruk jaa... mai tujhe waisey bhi pakadlungi
har baar ki taraah....

PINKY : ajaa Geet.... teri yaad mai main tho roj khelne lagi thi,
ab haarne nai wali mai... aake pakad tho sahi....

and they played, ran after each other, none of them realised they left
AAdi alone...Maan saw Geet and thought how this naughty girl
turned sooo calm and subtle...he thought of speaking to Pari
and he walked away... Geet and pinky stopped finally ....
as Geet caught hold of pinky both of them were tierd...
they were puffing and panting... suddenly pinky realised Geet's
situation and made her sit aside on a bench... and calmed her down....

all of them were about to leave, and AADI came to call pinky and GEET
while pinky walked with AADI and GEET, Sasha came across them, and
she looked at Geet's smiling and bubly face which she could not bare
and she decided to create a trouble.... so she said...

SASHA : GEET hasna bandh karo... MK tumhey doond rahey hai...
WO us taraf hai... jao... warna tumhaari naukri...

GEET : Sasha maam... aap Hamesha mujhse itney rukhe se
Baat kyu karti hai??? kya aap yuhi nahi keh satey hai
Ki Maan sir mujhe bulaa rahey hai???

SASHA : GEEEEEET..........


GEET : chillayiye Mat... Sasha MAAM..... zubaan meri bhi hai
Par mai usey Baat karne ke liye istemaal karti hu....

SASHA : GEET...

GEET : Mujhey meri Naam yaad dilaane ki zarurat nahi hai... MAAM
Mai jaa rahi hu Maan sir ke paas....

Sasha thinks to heself...

JAO Geet.... Bahut aKHad hai na tumhey ...
Ab mai dekhti hu tum kal office kaisey aati ho...

Mean while, On DADI's force even DEV and NAINTARA....
came to the resort but Naintara was always busy in speaking to
the detective... hiding from DEV's Views....
DEV on the other hand was searching for Maan who was speaking to pari....
Geet started searching for Maan as AADI, PINKY, and DYne SASHAA left
towards the office bus.... Even after pinky and AADI's repeated trials....
SASHA managed to let the bus start off and Geet missed it....


Geet on not finding Maan .... returned to the place where bus was standing
till past hour.... she dint find anyone there .... she saw all the distance her
eyes could see..but all in vain...she dint find anyone... she was alone...
she felt panic ... ran here and there ... finally she saw Maan standing near a tree
speaking to some one... she moved forward... she saw Pari... she felt bad she
stood there like a statue... sooo still....
DEV saw Maan speaking to pari from otherside...he heard Maan saying

MAAAN : MAI ussey Pyaar kartaa hu .... Tumhey meri Madad karni
Hogi Pari....Mai usko kabhi KHona nahi chahtaa hu...

PARI : Mai jaanti hu Maan... aur aaj GEET ko dekhne ke Baad
Mujhey aisey lagaa ki wo bhi tumsey pyaar karti hai....

Dev's heart pumped out, he felt like he faced a whilpool just that moment,
he immediately started walking away... as he thought he should inform Naintara
about it.... that while he Came across GEET who was speaking to herself...

he hid behind the tree to hear what Geet was speaking...

GEET : kyu babaji.... kyu horaha hai mere saaath aisa...?
Pehle Mere pati ne mujhe dokha diya hai...
aur ab Jab mai itney mushkilonke baad
sambhal paayi hu, aap uss insaan ko
mujhse door kar rahe ho jinhey mai pyaar
karti hu???kyu??? aap MAAN SIR ko mujhse
door hi karnaa chahte the tho unhe mujhse milayaa hi kyu???

DEV got another shock.... and by now he was sweating and was frightened...
he sneakily managed to move away and get hold of naintara....
where he was again shocked to notice.... Naintara speaking to
a detective about following DEV and reporting her about every moment of DEV
he felt dejected, he dint know what to do.....he hit his fist against a tree
and hurted himself.....




I HOPE u all like this
update, and i made it long
as promised....

__ lots of love 😳
Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago

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