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Morning Star thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
oye muskaan jee
now that fall of maan was out of expectation
he fall n along with him did geet. but a romantic one 😳like many other times she did fall but this was what gravit of maan made her fall and he 🤪
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muski as always it was a wonderful updt
so finally maan told that he love her
but she pagaal doesnt understand
n what?prya is moving in maan's room???
shoking yaar!!
maybe its all maan's plan 2 make geet jealous
n prya is helping him...
i hope so!!
keep rocking
love yaaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Morning Star

oye muskaan jee

now that fall of maan was out of expectation
he fall n along with him did geet. but a romantic one 😳like many other times she did fall but this was what gravit of maan made her fall and he 🤪
update soon

glad u liked it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan.... no update yet!!! 😭😭😭 plz post soon as we all cant wait....😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dhrashtee

hey muskan.... no update yet!!! 😭😭😭 plz post soon as we all cant wait....😉

working on it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg..............I did stick my eyes while reading eyes..i didnt even blink my eyes...it was breath taking....................cant comment more than this its time to maneet landddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd..LOvely Muskaan...I really liked tMaan's Wild Romance................
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Posted: 14 years ago

great update dear...........

brillaint and this update left me breathless..............amazing dear
waiting for the next update
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

maan - geeeet just shut up...tumhe jo sochna hain soch loo...
I love u....damit..

Part 53

geet - u don't love me...u can't love me..
maan lifts geet & puts her in the car...geet looks away from maan..
after reaching home..maan lifts & takes her to his room
geet - mujhe mera room main jana hain
maan just takes her to his bed & slowly puts her down..
the bed was still flavouring the emotions they shared little while ago

maan - chup ek dam chup..ek aur labz nahin..(he tucks the spread around her..& kisses
her forehead she turns away)
maan changed into his shorts & vest..geet was restless & turning & jolting
thinking about the night in her sleep ..maan came close to her & lied down..
she cuddled into his chest & hugged him tight...
maan got up early ..& just lied next to her watching her..
he wondered how innocent she was, how beautiful, cute,yet so passionate..deep within...
geet opens her eyes to meet his...
she saw him & cuddled upto him again & said I had a bad dream..
maan - how are u feeling now..(he slowly moved her curls..& kissed
her forehead) geet was not sure wat exactly was going on..she was cuddled up next to maan
& he is kissing her ..reminded her of last night..
before she could react maan was all over her..his legs had crossed over ..
he was on top of her..he pulled out his vest & kissed her paasionately
on her neck, making his way to lower..
geet - maan stop it..
maan - umm! (continued kissing along the jaw line)
geet - please maan stop it..she was breathing harder ...harder
maan looked at her lips..they looked so demanding after the long gap of the
night..he took them into his..while his hand freely discovered the scerets..
geet snapped & tried to push him away ..with her palms touching his bare chest
which slowly embraced him...geet wisphered maan mujhe choddo na please
maan lied on top of her..still inhaling her exotic scent from her neck
line..he played along her curls & said..
maan - aacha suno..(he wanted geet to move into his room & wondered how to
convince her)
geet - mujhe jana hain
maan - I was thinking..krishna is 12..now..so don't u think he needs a
separate room..
geet - (immdiately looks intrested)haan main bhi notice kiya hain..he needs some space
phir main khana jaavoo ghi..?
maan - mansion main..
geet - nahin daadi ko aacha nahin laaghe ga
maan - u can share this room(he looks at her for her reaction)
geet - nahin nahin..how can I do that..
maan - then where will u go?
geet -(looked confused) haan..main guest room main shift kar lathi hoon
maan hits head & lies on the bed..ise pagal ladki ka main kya karoon
geet gets up & rushes out..maan pulls her back
geet - maan bahut ho gaya chodoo mujhe
maan - nahin chodonga..kaun rokhga mujhe..(he mockigly stirns his voice)
geet - main..& snapps out her hand..
geet goes to krish's room & starts packing...
calls the maid & tells them to shift her luggage to the guest room
geet goes for shower..& thinks about the night before..& feels..odd that was not at all supposed to happen...she thinks that she really
needs to stay away from maan...she feels she is coming between priya & him

geet goes to priya's hotel room & packs her bag & drags her to the outhouse
she tells the maid to set her luggage in maan's room..
maan had gone to office..he comes back & notices priya sleeping on his bed
maan - geeeeeeeeeet..geeet...(he comes out shouting to her room)
geet - (she drops the glass in hand starts to tremble)..ji
maan - priya mera room kya kar rahin hain?
geet - woh!... kyu..maine kaha unko waha rahe na ka liya..
main nahin keh sakthi kya?
maan - tum kuch bhi kar sakthi ho..tumhara hi ghar hain..lakin why room,,
geet - stop being so tuff maan...now she is here...let me see how will u hide ur love for her..
maan - tumarhe samne kisi ki chalthi hain kya...
maan stiffs his jaws & turns his fist & walks out of her room

precap
geet & krish..doing homework

hope this update was cool...plz let me know ur views
love
muskan


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Posted: 14 years ago
ek dum :) .. loved it... when will geet realize maan's love for her??.. feeling bad thinking of maan!!!..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome awesome awesome muskan..... keep on goin!

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