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Posted: 14 years ago
great part as always. But it made me sad. I hope nothing happens to krish, I really like his character. Now Maan will blame Geet for the accident. I hope Geet doesn't loose her baby in the process. Can't wait to read more, update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanxs guys all ur support
part 70 page 1
hope u like this part ...new thread...
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update!!!! i like the twist but i hope he doesn't blame geet totally!
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Posted: 14 years ago
the more read the i love to read again &again thanks keep doing it .
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Posted: 14 years ago
you are talented for beautiful writting keep doing it please it take my breath away .
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

the more read the i love to read again &again thanks keep doing it .

susana..hope u caught up with all the upates..thanxs for the appriciation
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello sweet friend muskan.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Hi dear friends this is the new thread of my FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet
this is the link of the last update..part 48
this is the link to first page
part 49 page 1 part 57 page 59 part 65 page 126
part 50 page 8 part 58 page 69 part 66 page 131
part 51 page 15 part 59 page 75 part 67 page 137
part 52 page 21 part 60 page 84 part 68 page 143
part 53 page 29 part 61 page 92 part 69 page 148
part 54 page 37 part 62 page 98
part 55 page 46 part 63 page 108
part 56 page 50 part 64 page 117
part 70 - thread three
thanxs for all ur love & support
maan - me & geet???
priya - heavnly..
part 49
after priya left maan went lookin for geet..he was not sure which was her room
he looked around the whole outhouse..& thought may be she lives with daadi..
it was too late to disturb any one in the mansion..he was very restless..
desperately wanted to talk to her tell her how he felt for her all this while..
there was so much within him ...exploding.. emotions..
he almost gave up..wanted this night to end fast so that he can spend the
whole day with her tomorrow..just him & his love.. his wife...
he went into krish's room to say goodnight..
there his eyes saw the peacefull sight of his life...his most possesed two souls
calmly sleeping all cuddled up..he kissed krishna & slowly moved his lips to
touch her forehead..he moved the curls which were sliding & hidding his view
his lips feathered a kiss...he had never felt anything like this before..
his heart filled up with love & wamrth..just wanted to hug her with all his love...
just slipped into the spread next to krish..
this was first time ever krish was sleeping with/between his parents..
maan rested his hand over geet which was resting on krish..
maan could'nt belive his eyes..he wanted to capture ever moment of his togatherness
maan had a real peacefull sleep after so many days, years actually..
he got up looking for geet..she was not around..
maan - geet khana ho tum,,mumered in sleep...
krish - dad mom is gone to meet daadi..daadi had called her..
maan walks upto krish & kisses him..what r u doing
krish - just sending some mails dad..
maan gets ready & rushes to daadi's room
daadi & geet were having a hot argument..maan stopped at the door step
geet - daadi aise koi baat nahin hai
daadi - phir priya kyu aai thi yanha
geet - maine unko bulaya tha
daadi - i am sure there is something wrong between u & maan
geet - nahin daadi..please stop worrying..ur just spoiling ur health
daadi - if every thing is fine between u both then..did he give u any gift
yesteday??
geet - (she paused for a while & said)wat this daadi..diya na..he gave me a..a
lovely kundhan set..(daadi looked happy..so geet cont.)
u know wat it matches with ur saree u gave me...rani color..
daadi - show me now
geet - ji woh! I am planning to wear that tonight at the party with ur saree
after I dress up I will come & show it to u..
daadi - I will be waiting
geet walked out..mumering..kundhan bolene ki kya zarurath thi..woh bhi rani colour
geet wah!! kya imagination hain..
maan follows her listening to all her blabereing & smiling
geet - krish ..move I need to check some thing
krish stands behind her..& maan stands behind him..(both curiously wondering wat geet is upto)
geet checks her account balance..Rs 55,000/-(yeh la..ise me tho kuch nahi hoga)
she hits her head & starts walking up & down...
krish - kya huwa mom
geet - nothing baby...wat is ur plan krish untill evening
krish - mom i need to meet up with few old friends..we are going for a movie
geet - ok
krish gets ready & leaves..maan was still pretending to be working..hanged around her
geet calls her father..they have little talk... hi & hellow then..
geet - papaji..woh!!
papaji- wat beta
geet - mujhe kuch paise chahiya(maan heard that & felt really hurt)
papaji - how much do u need
geet - i need it now..could u plz deposit 3lks in my account..
papaji - is every thing fine beta..
geet - haan papaji..plz jaldi se deposit kardo na..
she cuts the call & turns to see maan standing infront of her
she trembled & smiled at maan..
she picks her purse & walks out
maan - khani jaa rahi ho?
geet - ji..jewelry shopping
maan - challo main tumhe drop kardeth hoon.
geet - kyu aap ko bhi jewelry lani hain?
maan glared at her..she knew ..that was not wat he expected
geet - its ok..my driver is there..
maan starts the car & waits outside..geet joins him
she looked tensed & worried..maan was hurt ..this was Mrs Maan Singh Khurana
worrying for pitty money ..his whole empire belonged to her & only her...
& she is so tensed & stressed she just needed to tell him & he would bring
the moon to her doorsteps...he suddenly felt like a poor & helpless man..
as they reach the jeweller..maan walks in with her..she started looking for the set..
she looked for kundan sets
they were all very highly prised..she looked at the one which suited he budget
& selected few..maan rejected all of them..maan picked a set..and slowly
kept it on her neck..nahin phika hain...
he picked another one & again slowly came behind her & slided this one..geet was getting tickled
every time maan touched her neck & how he looked at her in the mirror..
every time he looked at her..she shied like a new bride..
geet - maan yeh kya kar rehan hain aap..
maan - I did'nt like any of them..they all looking dull infront of u..
geet was not expecting any thing like that from maan...her heart nearly missed a beat
but she preffered thinking it as an out come of his meeting with priya last night...
geet settles on one of the set & tells the shopkeeper to bill it
maan gives his purse to her & says
maan - card se pay kar loo..i will be waiting out
geet was shocked at how maan handed over his purse to her...(she loved it but was not sure!!)
geet - nahin main aap se ..pasie kaise le sakthi hoon?
that won't be right..
maan(yelling) - don't create a scene here now
geet - scene aap create kar rahe ho..u don't have to do all this
I can manage..please leave..
maan - damit tum mari koi baat kyu nahin sunthi hoo
geet - pays for the set .. & walks into another shop
maan - where are u going now..?
geet - I have an order to pick up..
she comes back & sits in the car..
maan - hogaya challen
geet - this is why I did'nt want to come with u...
maan - nahin I am sorry..I just got a call from office..need to rush
have a small metting with a client..
geet - ok u carry on..I will call the driver..
maan - nahin ..u don't have to leave..if u can wait..in the office for few mins
we could go togather..plz
geet - ok..I don't mind waiting...
maan - geet next time if u need any thing like..like anything at all..u can ask me
geet - how can I ask u?
maan - why? why can't u ask me..
geet - nahin actually I feel it won't be right..
maan - stops the car.. & glares at her..are'nt we supposed to be married?
geet - mana ki we are married..but we don't share the relation of husband & wife..
I feel i should'nt be even living in ur house..but..
probably have to wait untill things sought out between u both..see I picked
this ring for di...
maan - why did u do this
geet - how can u propose di with out a ring?
maan - who told u that I am going to propose her?
geet - maan mujhe aap ki baathe na aaj kal bilkul samjh nahin aathi..
maan starts the car..& wonders how is going to tell her that he loves her..
the more he tries to get close to her ..the more she talks about moving away..
precap
office staff mocking geet
i hope u all loved this part
please post ur replies here...
love
muskan
Where the part 50 is?

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Posted: 14 years ago
Reading it all over lol xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

its amazing actually i had read it first time and i liked it sooooooooooooooo much loved it yaar

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