(MaanEet) Tere - Final Update on Pg 69-70 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: angelina285

okay..i read both the parts..
gud one..eager to knw wht past she is hiding.
loved whn maan said I shd be hapi m getting engaged its nt my lyf getting ruined its her..
i love thr fights.
add me too.



Their fight is the strength of their relationship.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Tressa

hey wow.... Loved both the parts... looking forward to ur ff... please pm me when u update nex... & ya please update asap.... "Tere Liye"... nice title given... & i guess the story will be different & gripping... so please continue asap...



Tere Liye indeed is a good title because it suits the characters and their life.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
I didn't know that I would get this much support of encouragement... Thank you to everyone for loving me and my story.

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Part Three

Geet come out of the washroom wearing the ghagra choli only have to put on the duppata and her accessories....

Pinky came into Geet's room & looked at her...

Pinky: You look so adorable....

Geet doesn't say anything, but stare at her own reflection....

Pinky: Sit down Geet.... today I wanna dress you up and take away every single pain of yours....

Geet closed her eyes....

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Dadi walked into Maan's room and asked him to wear his Dad's wedding sharvani....

Maan nods his head....

Maan throw his towel aside and look at his father''s dress before putting it on...



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Pinky whispered into Geet's ear: Open your eyes and look at yourself.

Geet slowly open her eyes.... stares at her reflection before asking Pinky to get ready....



Pinky leaves Geet alone....

Geet looked outside her window towards the sky "please Babaji.... please don't make things more difficult for me than they are.... Why did he have to come back? Everything is going fine and now everything feels so complicated with him around me" she held back her tears.

(Sorry guys don't know Pinky's father's name so I decided to call him Rajveer)

Rajveer came into Geet's room....

Rajveer: Today you look so beautiful that I am afraid of people's evil eye on you.

Geet closed her eyes "how can people evil eyes can affect me when I am already cursed by it" she told herself before opening her eyes.

Rajveer: Beta lets go

Geet nods her head....

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Sasha arrives at Khurana Mansion with Tasha by her side...

Tasha: Wow! I never knew this place would look like a mansion...

Sasha: Its already a mansion

Tasha: Silly Me

Dadi invites them inside....

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Geet wave her hands at Pinky and her father.... after there car disappear.... Geet walk down the street and catches taxi...

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Maan come out of his room dressed up.... when he made it down the stairs everyone looked at him... he made his way towards Dadi who was talking to some of her friends.

Naina (Dadi's friend): Maan beta you are looking mashing tonight.... if you weren't token by Geet than I would have been lucky.

Dadi smiled at her friends who were trying to flirt with him....

Maan: Thank you Naina Dadi.... I know I am looking handsome, but I am already booked.... thinking about her....

Maan looked at his Dadi

Maan: Where is she? Has she arrived yet?

Dadi: I think they are here....

Maan followed Dadi toward the entrance to greet Pinky and her father....

Dadi look here and there....

Dadi: Geet

Pinky bit her lower lip...

Rajveer: Woh she'll come.... She said she needs to go somewhere before coming here...

Maan doesn't look please.... he feels something fishy, but ignores it.

Dadi: Hope she'll come before the good time period ends....

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Geet gets down the taxi "Bhaiyya please wait here.... i'll be back" Geet walks inside Hotel Pushkar....

Geet enters the elevator.... gets down at fifth floor....

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Adi and Pinky are talking away....

Tasha: Sasha.... where is Ms. Hoshiyarpur? Why do I feel like she ran away from her own engagement?

Sasha smiles....

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Geet: Don't do this? You know you love him than why are you marrying someone for your father's wish?

Person: There is no other way.... I have to do this.... for him.

Geet: What about the person you love? You don't love the guy you are marrying.

Person: Its too late.... I can't do anything now...

Geet: No its not too late... You are lucky that the person you love came back from the death....

Geet turns to leave... but stop...

Geet: Not everyone are lucky to have their love back.... and you are lucky

Geet leaves...

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Rajveer and Dadi began to worry for Geet... its been two hours since they came and Geet hasn't come yet....

Maan: Dadi, don't worry

Dadi: What do you mean? Not to worry. Maan she's alone and doesn't know this place well enough..

Maan to himself: Why are you telling me this? Dadi... I know problems are her best friend

Dadi: Maan do something

Maan: huh

Dadi: I said do something....

Maan: Fine!

Maan turns to leave when Geet come inside...

Everyone ran towards her except for Maan who looked angry...

Dadi: Geet where were you? What took so long?

Geet: Dadi clam down.... actually I needed to go somewhere before coming down here... I am sorry for the delay, bur if I didn't than something bad would have happen. Anyways am I late

Dadi: Just on time... Lets begin

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Maan came and stood beside Geet....

Dadi gave Maan a ring....

Rajveer gave Geet the ring she bought....

Pinky bit her finger and looked confused...

Adi notice "what's the matter?"

Pinky: Who slips in the ring first? Geet or Maan Sir?

Rajveer: Good question

Dadi: Simple! Maan first or else he'll change his mind at the end. You can never trust him...

Maan glared at Dadi...

Adi give his mini laugh....

Pinky smiles....

Geet lift up her hand but stops mid way when she heard on of those ladies saying "yeh kya? This girl already have a ring in her finger... its huge bad omen"

Maan looked at Geet with anger....

Geet looks at her finger.... tries taking it out while pain showed in her eyes.... she closed her eyes and recalling some good moments but she couldn't take out the ring.

Maan tried of waiting... most likely feeling like a fool... Maan gives his ring to Adi....

Adi about to say something but Maan glared at him...

Maan took Geet's hand in his hand and started twisting her ring out...

Geet grip tightly onto Pinky's arm...

After some time Maan got the ring out and threw it away.... which roll down the corridor and stops at someone's feet. Geet looked shock of fear.

Maan slip his ring in Geet's finger afterwards Geet slipped her ring into Maan's finger without looking at him. Everyone clapped while Geet looked scared.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
wonderful!!! The way you are building up the suspense is fabulous. I love the premise of this FF.

Please add me to your pm list and do update soon! Can't wait to find out what happens next.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
nice update!!! so she has sum1's ring ........hmmm wonder who this is n whose feet it has fallen
awaiying for next pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
wow..its really amazing..wow..ur serisously keeping the suspense..i relaly like ..please keep on updating..and thank you very much for the pm('',)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
amazing update!! loved it!!!!
cant wait for the next part!!
pls cont.soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
wonderful update.. whoz this mystery person???? plzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79

woooww amzing ud...

whose that person yaar....suspense.........

thnx for the pm.........

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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Fab update!!
I like the way you have built up some suspense .. who was Geet talking to at the hotel and who has turned up at the party??
Really looking forward to your next update .............
Uzma xx

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