Maneet FF: You are always on my mind. AN on P 150 - Page 28

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

hey polki, my xams were going on so could not comment, sorry...........plz update soon..


Thek hain, maaf kar diya. Don't worry I won't punish you by not updating, I have other ways. 😈

Polki
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

superb!

can't believe that geeta has spend soooooo much.....poor geet!

wow!....geeta really gave valid reasons for geet to keep her mouth shut!....really impressive!....

i think itz maan's b'day!....

i wonder wat will happen wen geeta will go to india....i m sure there she will maan and all!...

continue soon!


Dear Sweet Scorpio,

Happy you liked the update.

Yes, Geeta spent that money, and remember that it wasn't all she spent. Geet had already paid for the earrings at Tiffany's and all the stuff at Bergdorf's, so the 18 grand was over that. Geeta really punished Geet for lying, big time.

Geeta is a smart girl, like Geet said to Maan, Geeta is too smart for Geet's own good.

As for what happens when Geeta goes to India, you just have to keep on reading the FF to find out.

Keep reading and commenting.

Polki




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Posted: 14 years ago
hi sweets,

okay i'm going to keep this short cos i'm in the airport and my flight got delayed and look what i'm upto???? 😆... well, i could not resist u know... 😉....PM's kept flashing ....!!!!

beautiful update yet again....!!!! 👏..... loved the conversation between geet and her daughter...!!!! geeta is a smarty..... well, i guess the genes of her father.... 😃... and geet told her abt malaria out of all things to scare her, i was laughing when i read that part... poor geet, she was desperate....

and i loved the phone convo of maneet...!!!!! update soon.....!!!!!

and btw, are u in a normal state to upload tonite or the precap has driven u crazy too???? 😆


soumya
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey polki sorry dear I couldn't comment cuz I logged in after a while and my my got so many pms regarding ur ff and other Ffs. So now I caught up all pls keep up with ur brillant work.
my my I'm excited and almost dying to read. More.
Oye jaldi update karoo naa ;)
byeee:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maan_Mahi4Ever

<p align="center">Hey Polki!</p>
<div align="center">How are you today? Okay yaar .. always remember this "Never eat by thehunger of your eyes, but eat by the hunger of your stomach" 😆.. Yaar I was fasting and just finshed eating ... made kheer and a macaroni and chicken salad for "iftar" .. it was really good and i saved you some! 😉😆</div>
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<div align="center">I loooved this update! Wah Wah! 18000 dollars in one day! That so beats my record! Last black friday, my dad gave me his credit card and I spent like $11,000! He was like "😲Is that even possible??" 🤣</div>
<div align="center">I loovd Maan's advice to Geet with the sand thing .. just mindblowing jaani! </div>
<div align="center">And Geet cursed Radha in her mind! 🤣🤣</div>
<div align="center">Cant wait for the next update!</div>
<div align="center">SPOILER ALERT! I don't think it's Geeta's .. so it might be Geet's or Maan's!</div>
<div align="center">And u kadoos boss, tu tho bari dhust danav hai .. ur going to punish people? Thank god I'm not one of them because I've always commented .. watch out people .. Mrs. Polki *something* is outraged! 🤣</div>
<div align="center">And omg! I totally forgot about the "Name Game" we were playing ... ur name's Radha right? 😉</div>
<div align="center">Anyways, looooove youuu Polki! Mwah!</div>
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<div align="center"><strong>-Mahi ❤️
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My pyari Mahi,

Your talk of food is making me hungry..(Polki's stomach grumbling and mouth watering). Thanks for saving me some of that yummy food, but you can eat the chicken salad, I am a vegetarian. But I definitely want the kheer and macaroni. I think I will eat once I am done replying to your comment.

I am so happy that you loved the update. You mentioned back to school shopping and I gave you shopping. Not bad, right? Geeta went crazy, like she told Radha she decided to take Geet to the cleaners to teach her a lesson. Also remember that the 18K didn't include the money spent at Tiffany's and Bergdorf's. I wish I were in her shoes. As for you spending 11K, I agree with your dad, how is that even possible. Okay I know that it is but come on. I am glad you aren't my kid. Ha! Ha! I don't have any kids but just thinking of the future, you know.

Yeah! Maan ke paas bohoot gyan hain. Love how he is always parting his knowledge onto Geet.

Radha has now become a person who has been on the receiving end of Geet's secret gallies. I thought it was totally Geet so I put it in.

As for the spoiler you know what you have to do, read the next part to find out. 😃

You are safe from punishment. You have been a very good baccha, but you are right people should be careful. 😈 This khadoos boss is on a mission. Tell me if I am wrong.

Yes, My name is Radha. It took you a while. Soumya guessed it when I first introduced the character of Radha, but I told her to remove her answer from her comment so that you wouldn't see it. I was waiting to see when you would remember the game.

Love,
Polki
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pickle6586

hi sweets,

okay i'm going to keep this short cos i'm in the airport and my flight got delayed and look what i'm upto???? 😆... well, i could not resist u know... 😉....PM's kept flashing ....!!!!

beautiful update yet again....!!!! 👏..... loved the conversation between geet and her daughter...!!!! geeta is a smarty..... well, i guess the genes of her father.... 😃... and geet told her abt malaria out of all things to scare her, i was laughing when i read that part... poor geet, she was desperate....

and i loved the phone convo of maneet...!!!!! update soon.....!!!!!

and btw, are u in a normal state to upload tonite or the precap has driven u crazy too???? 😆


soumya


Dear Soumya,

Was just thinking of you, was telling Mahi that you guessed my name first.

Where you going? Yes, addiction is a bad thing and we are all addicted to Maneet. So nothing to be ashamed of with your present state. 😆

I am so happy you liked the update. Geet is smart but her daughter is smarter. After all Khurana blood runs through her veins. 😃

Yes, Malaria, did you like how I included it in the part. People thought Maan would get Malaria and Geet would go to Delhi to take care of him. I am not going to make it that easy for them 😈

Lets see about my present condition. I am totally in day dreaming mode after the precap. Can't wait for tonight. I am going to do all my work early so that I can just sit and be a bum and watch Geet again and again tonight.

As for updating, I am going to update. My FF is not in a sad phase right now, so I am okay. It may take me longer but I have to give what the masses demand. Else how I threaten them they will start threatening me. 😉

Love,
Polki
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: neahakhan

Hey polki sorry dear I couldn't comment cuz I logged in after a while and my my got so many pms regarding ur ff and other Ffs. So now I caught up all pls keep up with ur brillant work.
my my I'm excited and almost dying to read. More.
Oye jaldi update karoo naa ;)
byeee:)


Dear Neaha,

It's okay atleast you are commenting now. I am glad you liked the update.

Don't worry I update everyday so you will have a new update sometime today. I will always let you guys know in advance if I am not going to be updating. I maybe a little late with my update since I will only be able to update once I stop hyperventilating after tonights episode. The pre-cap was so awesome.

Keep reading and commenting.

Polki
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Posted: 14 years ago
polki, what are the the other devilish ways??
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi dear
sorry don't know your real name mine is sumita but all on IF call me sumi
well to cut the long introduction short i am sosweetsumi.
just read your story FF: You are always on my mind.
don't know how i missed this one becoz i haven't missed a single story on maaneet even 1 shots also.
guess i am bending under work pressure isliye dyaan nahin gaya.
sorry enough of my rambling.
in reality i don't know what to write.
have i tell you i read your story in one go
well thats true dear 1 flow and now i am desperate to read more as i can't leave my maaneet and geeta
they were so wonderful
but actually felt bad for maaneet becoz that jerk dev they are separated but only through distances but not in heart
they are just so loving parents i am sure when geeta will found put what a gem of parents she had she is be sop delighted also to have a father like maan
he is wonderful dear
just maan only maan noone else can be like him.
i even cried so many times during the story for him poor guy couldn't be with his soulmate & daughter and suffering for his brothers mistake.
geeta looks like maan wow at least god did justice to him in that making his daughter like him.
lord knows what i would if geeta inherited anything from dev.
dadi will be so delighted on knowing her great granddaughter.
and geet being her daughter in law do continue dear
can't type more my hand is paining bye sumi
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Posted: 14 years ago
aussum update..
i loved reading it
continue soon

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