Maneet FF: You are always on my mind. AN on P 150 - Page 19

Originally posted by: pickle6586

awww.... thanks ...!!!!!! now fulfil another request too ... 😉.... keep them together forever..... 😆

hey, i'm proactive in my work... not in predicting FF's okay........🤣

why strain
my poor little brain
when i know u're going to clear the confusion anyway...... 😆..... laziness at its peak , dont u think???????? 😆

keep writing and i'll keep commenting...!!! wriitng is difficult, how much time does it take to critique a piece of work and that too urs...... i dont even read the update but i hit the like button first and then read it... cos it has to be good....!!!!!

waiting for ur update...!!!!!

Dear Soumya,

If anyone wants to learn how to be lazy they should come to you for lessons. 🤣 I will let you be lazy with my spoiler as long as you keep on updating your FF regularly, I went crazy yesterday checking if you had updated or not. And this morning when I saw that you had updated I was so happy.

I can't just keep on fulfilling all your requests, now you are just getting greedy. Shame! Shame! 😆

Aww, I am so flattered, that you put quality time into critiquing my work. I really appreciate it. Like I saw, I will keep on writing and you keep on commenting. 😉

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: Nanthini9

is geet asking maan to sign some sort of contract?

Dear Nanthini,

Sorry love, your guess about the spoiler was wrong. It's okay though, I actually like seeing where readers think the story is going and then to totally surprise them with the actual story. So please keep on guessing what the spoiler means.

Please enjoy part 14 which will be posted in a bit, the spoiler will be revealed.

Keep on reading and commenting.

Polki

Originally posted by: hazraluvarjun

finally completed reading all parts...

loved it totally..

ur ff is aussum..

its very nice..

pls pm me next part very soon...

Dear Hazra,

So happy that you liked my FF. This is my first ever FF and it means a lot when readers compliment, specially since I decided to go a totally different route with Maneet's story.

You have been added to the PM list so you will receive a PM as soon as I update. I update once a day.

Please keep on reading and commenting.

Polki

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Thats Simply Superb

Loved it

pls continue soon

Dear Sireesha,

Thanks for the compliment. Keep on reading and commenting.

Polki

Originally posted by: uzmam1

Chandni ...

why do you sound a bit sad and tired today?? everything ok??

thanks for another great update .. i so want them to be together and for geet to finally accept that she is also allowed to have some happiness in her life!!

take care, and looking forward to your next update ....

uz xx

Dear Uzma,

I wasn't sad, just exhausted, I hurt my shoulder last week and yesterday the pain was horrible. Its still bad but not as bad as yesterday. So nothing to worry, hopefully it will get better soon.

Yes, they both deserve happiness, but them getting together permanently is still a far ways away.

Hope you like the new update.

Keep reading and commenting.

Chandni

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

<font color="#ff0033">Once again, a wondeful part! ⭐️
I really want Geeta to figure out that Maan was with Geet, so she can be their cupid 😉 😆
Thanks for the P.M. and please continue asap 😃</font>

Dear Ayesha,

Glad you liked the update. Lets see what happens in the future. Will Geeta bring her parents back together? You just have to continue reading the FF to find out.

Keep reading and commenting.

Polki

Originally posted by: maanmeet8

awww.....u going through the right track...shayed i can follow ur brain ...see hav started playing brain games...its abt who will play cupid..!!!! hinted ;-)...

lets see my assumptions are right or not ...:D

what should i say more.....!!

its really a tough thing being maan ...

geet had her kidin her life.....

maan was all alone ...

ur concept is so different yaar ...fantastic..!!

u know i had a fren who had wrtten something like this ....pretty diff though ...u write like her.....m getting nostalgic ...!!!!

neway ...another subtle play of emotions ...another nice exp wid d update

plz d update soon and make it longer ...

Dear Reet,

Its a lot of work writing an FF is, specially if you update regularly. I work hard and giving my readers an entertaining update everyday so I need to get some joy too and I get that by playing mind games 😆

Life has been tough for both Geet and Maan. Geet struggled to raise Geeta as a single mother, to provide for her in every way possible. Maan on the other hand lived with the pain of being away from the two most important ladies in his life.

Thanks for liking my writing style. As for making my posts longer, its not good to be greedy, 😉 I think I have been really good with the length of my posts.

Keep on reading and commenting.

Polki

Originally posted by: maanmeet8

<div></div>ahem ..i din notice this post ...lolls.

Will she, wont she- who knows? 😈

Keep on reading to find out. 😃

Originally posted by: Maan_Mahi4Ever

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<div align="center">Sooooo Sorry Polki for not posting comments earlier ... I got caught up with some friends and we decided to go out and eat ... but I'm back and ready with comments!!</div>
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<div align="center">Part 12:</div>
<div align="center">It's a good thing Geet is so professional .. </div>
<div align="center">Aww Maan bought diamond earrings!</div>
<div align="center">And I'm not even going to start on the sizzling last scene .. MaanEet together after 18 years!</div>
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<div align="center">Part 13:</div>
<div align="center">Geet for the first time in her life lied to Geeta!</div>
<div align="center">All the pain MaanEet went through in the last 18 years .. and just to be seperated again!</div>
<div align="center">Nooo Polki ... please don't do this to our MaanEet!</div>
<div align="center">Guess Geeta is going to play cupid for MaanEet huh?</div>
<div align="center">Because after she learns the truth ... she'll want them to live together!!</div>
<div align="center">Aur phirse? </a></div>
<div align="center">Yaar .. MaanEet really enjoying love life</div>
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<div align="center">And the spoiler is driving me crazy!!!</div>
<div align="center">Who's going to sign what? </div>
<div align="center">Is it between MaanEet?</div>
<div align="center">Cant wait!!</div>
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<div align="center">Loooooove all these updates soooo muuuuchhh Polki! Actually .. all of your updates are fabulous!</div>
<div align="center">Cant wait for the next one .. and it BETTER be looonnngggg!! </div>
<div align="center">As you said it yourself .. we are greedy people!</div>
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<div align="center"><strong>-Mahi</div>


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Dear Mahi,

Its okay, even you are allowed a chutti from commenting, but you only get one and since you already had one, now I expect a comment from you everyday. 😃

Glad you liked professional Geet. I think our Geet deserves a lot more than diamond earrings, but it seems that she has everything money can buy. I am glad Maan put some thought into his gift for Geet. Funny I made you blush by finally bringing them together.

Yes, Geet lied to Geeta, shame! shame!

Sorry baby, I had to separate them. There is no point in hiding your love from the world. When they come together permanently the whole world will know. Khulam Khulam pyaar karenge. 😃

I am so glad that the spoiler is driving you crazy. 😈 Torturing is so much fun.

Keep on reading and commenting.

Polki