MN FF - Behind my Eyes (Suspended)

Beet

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Kanks 🤗

Another FF? Wow! I am quite glad. You write the most different type of FFs. 😳

An amazing start Kanky. The story is qute different and unique. And the first part was very well written. I know I am going to enjoy this one a lot.

Wonderfully written and quite interesting.

Do continue soon.

Loads of love

Daania

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mayur_bigfan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

hey.. nyc story.. do pm me..

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

Nope, I haven't. 😛 And the guy in this story doesn't hate her, he likes her in fact! 😆

Oooooooooh!!!!! 😉 Friend wala 'like' ki LIKE wala 'like' ??????????!!!!!!!!!!

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Kankshita

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: aishluvsmayur

Oooooooooh!!!!! 😉 Friend wala 'like' ki LIKE wala 'like' ??????????!!!!!!!!!!

Ye toh story likhungi tabhi pata chalega! 😆

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

Ye toh story likhungi tabhi pata chalega! 😆

You could tell na... I won't tell a soul...!! PAKKA!

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

hey kanky..nice concept..

so nupur lives with her step sister who is basically a hag..n duh she's very annoying too..n nupur peeped into her room out of curiousity n saw mayank there..woah..he was gunjan's twin n he was a nerd?..so it was obv she was shocked..but she fled from there..

mayank was embarassed at being caught that way..ayesha had called him home n she started seducing him..cheap..but he was a guy afterall..n i guess he fell into it..but too bad he got caught by nupur..now that was bad..he was even scared to face her?..lol..

he sat next to her in college..n told her he felt bad about it...but she understood that ayesha would have done smtn..knowing her too well!..n ugh, how can she like phy?..

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

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shweta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Wow Kanky...i loved the way u made the start...n the concept is totally different...u've tried out a differrent writing style for this unlike ur other ffs which i loved the most....

But the start itself gave me a shock...well, waiting eagerly for the story to unfold further...thanks for the pm😃

Love,

Shweta

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

GOd.... why is everyone in the forum obsessed with Physics...but, the update was nice.. different...

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Mariyam Ghaffar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

woowww....!!!
Loved it....
seeems so interesting n different...
eagerly waiting for da next update...

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Kankshita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Thanks a million people!! I am elated by the response! 😳

My net is not working and I have the copy of the update on my system. I would be able to update only after it gets fixed.

PS: This goes for both my FFs. 😊

TC xx

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