Socha Na Tha (FF)-update page 35 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Hey
I personally like your fanfic very very much
Can't wait to read more
Plz continue soon
And can you please add me to your PM list
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Nidhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2 - (Lehrein, cont.)

Clutching Dadima's hand she desperately pleas, "Doctor Nahi Dadi, Please mujhe doctor nahi chahiye". "Calm down beta, shant..shant, itna movement aap ke liye accha nahi hai…..hume abhi yeh nahi pata ke app ke pair se sara glass nikal chuka hai ke nahi, movement se agar woh aur andar chala gaya toh badme zyada taklif hogi". Holding onto Geets fluttering hands, she once again tries to soothe her. As the desperate struggles ceases to stop, despite her best efforts, she hangs onto the hope that Dr. Sharma would arrive soon and assures her that nothing was wrong. Soon though she feels a loosening of the hands that were clutching hers.

Geet's body finally feeling the toll of the days of hard work, emotional stress, restless nights and her bleeding foot, starts to shut itself down. As the dizziness intensifies and she feels the blackness closing out all the colors from her eyes, she makes a last plea. With one hand Clutching her head as if hold herself conscience and the other laid across her stomach protectively, she keeps open her eyes for a few precious seconds more and wishpers to Dadima, "Ma'am…mera baccha….theek.." before passing out. Shocked to hear the last statement but more worried about how limp and pale Geets body had gone, she asks her driver to carry geet to their car and lay her out on the back seat while they waited for Dr. Sharma to arrive. "Suno, ushe bohot sambhal ke pakad na main nahi chahti ke use koi aur dard ho" Relaying the orders, she holds onto Geets hand as they shift from the sidewalk to the car. After gently laying down geet and assuring her comfort, she continues to pace outside.

On seeing the Dr. arrive, she quickly apprises him of the situation and leads him to Geet. After examining her and bandaging her foot, he turns to Dadima and gravely advises her to take very good care of the girl, as she seems to displaying signs of extreme stress and fatigue. " Savitri Devi, yeh ladki ka sharir itna thaq gaya ke woh ek almost coma like state me enter kar gaya hai, apne aap ko repair karne ke liye". Receiving instructions from the doctor regarding proper care and promising to call him as soon as she awakens, Dadima has the driver take them to her home. She has Geet taken to Maan's Room and lain on the bed.

Finally relieved that Geet was going to be ok, she lets out a sigh of relief. Crossing the room, she sits on the bed and hold Geet's hand. "Beta, hume maaf karde na agar humare maan ki wajah se aap ko koi taklif hui ho….humne doctor ko toh abhi appke pregnancy ke bara mein nahi bataya kyoki shayad aap yeh nahi chahti thi, lekin aap ki aise tabyat uske liye bhi kharab ho sakti hai". She did not know the girl beyond their handful of talks and meetings and she had no knowledge of her past, but she had decided that the honesty she felt from this girl was something to be trusted. Deciding not to worry about Geet's past, she resolves the when's, why's and how's running through her mind. Because though the situation was difficult, she knew in her heart, in her soul, that this was the girl that would change her Maan and their family forever. "Tumhari ankhon mein maine jo dard aur jo pyar dekha uss ek pal, jab tumne apne bacche ko pukara, mujhe pura yakin hai tum mere maan ko samaj paogi and ushe sambhal paoge" Fondly she looks at the serene face of Geet, smiles, kisses her forehead and settles in the couch facing the bed, waiting and anticipating the moment of her awakening.

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Slight change of plan, originally there was going to be 2 posts for (Lehrein) but it has been extended to 3 parts. Should have the 3rd part of (Lehrein) posted by tomorrow. Thank You.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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try to update another the 3rd part today only
BTY Great update
Plz continue soon
Eagaerly waiting for the next update
Nidhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
That was so touching! It's beautifully written......the emotions flowed so smoothly......Dadi is a sweetheart......that was such an awesome update! Do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
amazing part.loved it.
pls pls update next part soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
hey pls update soon yaar.... really nice story....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Awesome update.. luved it.. Dadi is so understanding.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsum...loved it!!!

culdnt cmment earlier due some stupid msg error on iF!!!!

update sooN!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Awesome update!! Dadi is so sweet...can't wait for the next part. Do cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
I loveeee this part.
Mindblowinggg update.
Continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.




Fatima

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