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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Lovely update.
Atleast dadi understands her.
Continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.



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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Amazing update!! Dadi is so sweet...hope she will still support geet even after knowing that it was his grandson who ruined geet's life...can't wait for the next part. Do cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Thanks for the FF, very cool. please add me to your pm list.

Thanks,
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
There has been a slight change made to the sequence. In the Teaser, I had mentioned that Part 3 would be Din Dhal Gaye, but it has been changed to Na Sahi. The new Part 3 (Na Sahi) will also be a multi-part post. Thanks for all the responses.
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Part 3: Na Sahi

"Dadiji, unka naam Dev Khurana aur Naintara tha". Hearing these words pierces Dadimaa's heart, a painfull squeeze that stops all her breath and movement. Her all thoughts stopped and for a moment it seemed as if her zindaggi had come crashing down. But, just as suddenly as the pain and heartbreak had come to her face so was it gone. She knew she could not ask anymore questions, not at this moment, not when this wounded angel was looking at her with such trust. Quickly schooling her features, she gives a small painfull smile meeting Geet's eye and quickly turns around. "Beta hum bas doctor aye tab unko leke aate hain, tab tak app rest kijiye aur kuch chahiye toh bed ke pas phone hai usmein 453 dial karke staff ko batadijiye ga" Saying this she quickly walks out of the room and with rapidly falling tears quickly walks to her room.
"Oh Goh, yeh kya hogaya" Entering her room, she quickly shuts the door, leans back on it for a moment, and walks towards the family portrait which showed her family at one of its happiest moments, Vicky's Graduation. She thought that she has seen all the bad she was destined to see in her life, especially after the events which had occurred in the lives of her grandsons in the past 2 years, but it seemed she was still left to see this day. She knew, absolutely knew, that this girl was not lying nor was she a scheming type like Sameera had been. She could not, did not, want to believe that her grandson had done something like this, and that too with the help of his wife, mother, and sister but she knew he had always been his mother's weakness. It was too much coincidence that a husband and wife with the names Dev and Naintara, living in Canada, had stolen everything from this girl; not with the money problems which they had been having and definitely not the sudden way in which they had solved that problem. She has also seen the problems going on between Dev and Naintara, she had never seen Naintara act so possessive and slightly insecure before, and she had thought that maybe they were regular marriage problems. Looking back on the events and having the knowledge she now did, she sees the that there was on odd quality to Dev and naintara's interactions. How she wished that things were back to the way they had been on Vicky's Graduation.
Ek Ped Milkar Pyar Ka, Humne Lagaya Tha Kabhi.
Aate Jo Phal To Thik Tha, Woh Na Phale Toh Na Sahi .
Kuch Na Hue To Na Sahi, Na Bane To Na Sahi,
Na Mile Na Sahi, Kuch Na Rahe To Na Sahi.
Aye Zindagi....
She knew she had promised to pay retribuition to the monsters that had commited such an heinous act and no matter how much her grandmother's heart would wish otherwise she had to show her grandson the consequences of his actions. Suddenly unable to bear all this and very much feeling her age, she sinks to the floor. Rocking back and forth she cries out her pain. 'Shayad mera beta aur bahu jo zimmedari mujh pe chod kar gaye the, meri usme kuch kammi reh gayi'. Feeling swamped with guilt that maybe she had not done enough in the past to prevent the need for such actions to occur, she feels her spirit breaking.
Aye Zindagi.... Har Ek Raaste Se,
Humne Pukaara Tumhe, Socha Savara Tunhe,
Par Tumko Accha Na Laga, Koi Wada Saccha Na Laga,
Tum Roothe Ho Yeh Socha Kar, Tum Ko Manayege Magar.
Ab Humse Roothi Teri Yeh Nazar.
Agar Na Hase To Na Sahi, Na Bane To Na Sahi,
Na Mile Na Sahi, Kuch Na Rahe To Na Sahi .
Suddenly she hears a knock on the door, "Ma"am, Doctor ka phone aaya tha, pooch rahe the ki Geet ko hos aaya ke nahi. Maine unhe hold pe rekha hain, kya reply dein?" "Unhe keh dijiye ke use hos aa gaya hai aur woh jaldi se aa gayen". "Ji, Ma'am" Breaking out of her pains, she gathers herself slowly and stands up "Nahi, nahi, I cant think this way, Geet ko, Maan ko, aur mere hone wale greatgrandson/granddaughter ko meri zaroorat hai". "Bahgvan meri madat karna ke mein apne aap ko aur sab ko sambhal saku, Maan already Vicky aur Sammera ke vajeh se itne toot chuke hain, aur ab yeh baat. Geet ke pas jo himat hai woh uss mein nahi hai, aur Geet ko bhi iss baat se kitni taklif hogi" She has seen so many dreams about her family and they had only gotten more beautiful since she had meet Geet. So many efforts she made to hold together everyone, but she knew she had to still hold hope, she had still so many people to bring together, and though she would lose something in the process, she could only follow her heart and hope it lead to the right path. Wiping the tears, she decides to first freshen up, hoping to think more clearly after having a bath, and then come up with a plan and a course to action to solve these tangled lives.



Edited by blueangel13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Amazing update!! Wonder what is she going to do now?? Can't wait for the next part. Do cont.soon
Edited by kooliio - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Superb! That was just great! I really love Dadi! Can't wait to read the next part......how she handles things.......do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
awesome..Please add me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Hey nice update.... gud tht she believed Geet.. whts she goin to do now?? do continue soon..
Edited by swetha10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
awesome part.loved it.
waiting to see dadi's next move.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
very nice update dea... loved it.. hey continue soon..........

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