Maan knows ab't Geets pregnancy FF-Update17 Pg 47 - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago



OMG........... 🤗

u know wat whitepearl???
i finished my exams today,
and my system got hanged up
for last three days so i cud not
visit my LIFE....
INDIA FORUMS>...
the first thing i did
toda is reading ur update.... 😳

I loved it...... meri jaan ur awesome
and hope u get well soon with ur infection
aaww... 🤗 inspite of ur infection
itnaaaa badaaaaaaa update????
ur outstanding....

love love loved reading it..... 🤗

and Thanks lotttttt for saying...

@ Winnie I promised you so here is the update from swollen red eyed white pearl.

___ love u for this great update....
Get well soon dear...😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet opened the door slightly and said, "suniye..." Mann turned around," Boliye.."
"sham ko jaldi aa jana.." Geet said slowly.
"Hummm" Maan grinned and blinked his eyes in assurance and left.


these lines were very nice
i loved them... i read again
just now... awesome infectious update
dear 😆 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi friends...I am deeply touched with your responses and encouragement that kept on increasing with every update....God bless U all Maaneet lovers....

Here is my last update.....This a just a prelude to the loving peaceful life that Maaneet are going to have in future.....I am sure many of you wonderful writers would carry on with that. But my topic was if Maan knows about Geet's Pregnancy. should end here.......Anyways he is going to know it today...whether he knew it beforehand.....only CV will tell....

So enjoy this last update....I know Dev - Naintara issue is still not settle...actually I am in conflict with myself over this issue. Personally I want him to be put behind bars but though out my life I have been taught.....'Forgive others so that you be forgiven.." What I would say '....forgive but let the course of the law prevail.."
Update 17

Next fortnight went by uneventfully...Geet regained her health and so does the baby. She had now entered into her fourth month and it began to show.

Geet was wearing a saari in front of a life size mirror, when for very first time she realized a noticeable change in her waist line. She pushed the pallu of her saari aside and began to examine her waist. "Nahin Geet toh zayada mooti nahin hui hai....woh itne din se tu na toh office gayi aur na hi kuch kaam kiya hai isliye tu thodi bas thodi si moti dikh rahi hai....'

Just then Maan entered in the bedroom and saw her twisting side to side with her hand placed on her waist.

He could help himself smiling at the most amusing site.

"Measuring tape doo kya...? Maan teased her from behind.

Geet was startled; she turned back and saw him looking at her in amusement.

"Aap? Haan haan udaiye udaiye aur mazaak udaiye...aapko to baada maza aa raha hai na"

"Hummm maza toh bahut aa raha hai....." Maan flutter his hand in air as to visualize a panorama. "....just imagine, Ms Geet Handa ..6th month main itni moti aur phir 8th month main itni moti aur phir 9th month main itni..."Maan went on and on to describe her future countenance.

Geet was listening to him with wide eyes. She was so engrossed in imagining herself that she forgot to react. Maan smiled at her and whispered slowly in her ears, "Kya moti Geet dikhi?"

Geet without bating an eyelid kept on staring at the empty space. She made a crying face and nodded her head, "Haan dikhi...."

Maan was really enjoying teasing her...he always had. So he continued...

"Ibtaday ishq hai roota hai kya, aage aage dekh huta hai kya...."

Geet started to crib like a child, "Nahin mujhe moti nahin hona hai... " and Maanbegan to laugh....

"Please, Maan ab aur mazzak mat banaiye mera..."

"Okay...tum kaho toh is scene ko thoda sa change kar dete hai...."

"Woh kaise?"

"Aise..." Maan hugged her from behind. His hand slid on to her waist and thousands of tantalizing sensation seeped into her skin deep down to every nerve of her body. He gently but persuasively slid his fingers down to her arms and took his fingers into his. Geet closed her eyes to overcome the sensation. Clasping her hands into his, Maan positioned them in air in front of her belly.

"Now imagine...Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana, itni moti...phir itni moti aur phir itni."

Geet gleamed but her eyes began to moist. Maan held her tightly in his arms and rest his head on her shoulders, "Geet shaadi kar le?"

Geet was overwhelmed with joy...she turned around slowly and nodded in aacceptance. Maan inclined his head and placed his lips over hers. At last Geet found solace in his arms and his soul filled with a new song......It was just a prelude to their loving placid life to come.

"Kabhi Kabhi pyaar ki kahaani ko ek khoobsurat sa morh de kar chood dena achha hota hai...."

Edited by whitepearl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice one. update the next soon. hope next is there wedding

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part!!!
Dont tell me that you are ending it here...
Continue soon or else I am coming with ma belan to Hit you!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
liked it yaaaar.. beautiful ending.. and I loved when he asked " Geet shaadi kar Le"... sweet 😊😊😊..
Please start another FF sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
such a sweet update!!! looking forward to the next one!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zoya-

<font color="#9933ff">Awesome part!!!
Dont tell me that you are ending it here...
Continue soon or else I am coming with ma belan to Hit you!!!
</font>



Hhahahahahahahh 🤣


OMG..... seriously even i wanna post this
same comment.... im glad u already posted.....
hahahhah LOLzzzz cant stop laughing.....

WHITEPEARL.... ur such an awesome writer
i know what u said .... i mean
ur title say's it all
but please i expect u to finish
with the delivery thing and MANEET
bring baby to their dream house....
i wud love to read such ending
in ur wonderful vision darling...
plzzz try to do it... and i know

U ROCK 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wiinie_pooh



Hhahahahahahahh 🤣


OMG..... seriously even i wanna post this
same comment.... im glad u already posted.....
hahahhah LOLzzzz cant stop laughing.....

WHITEPEARL.... ur such an awesome writer
i know what u said .... i mean
ur title say's it all
but please i expect u to finish
with the delivery thing and MANEET
bring baby to their dream house....
i wud love to read such ending
in ur wonderful vision darling...
plzzz try to do it... and i know

U ROCK 👍🏼

koi please mujhe mujhe inke belanon se bachao....
Thanks Zoya and Winnie for loving me so much...
My mind is toggling with so many ideas...
and CV is really torturing me with every episode...
right now I am so tensed with the whole revelation and confession theory...can't think straight.
But if or when I'll come to my senses, I 'll definately continue and deliver you Maaneet's baby....😆😆😆 meanwhile I'll read and enjoy your FFs.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part.loved the way maan tease geet.
miss ur ff.
hope u will write a epilogue of this ff.

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