Maan knows ab't Geets pregnancy FF-Update17 Pg 47

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Hi! All Maneet Fans. This is just a desire that Maan should know the truth about Geet's pregnancy before Dev and Geet encounter. I personally feel that Maan's character is of a strong willed and balanced person. Although his ways are very aggressive but he is compassionate and loving at the same time ( see how his feelings fro his Dadimaa). I just could not help imagining a caring and understanding Maan when the truth comes out about pregnancy.

Just an attempt'.

It is still dawn'..after two chaotic days, this morning Geet just couldn't raise herself up from the bed. She is emotionally and physically drained. Thanks to all the frantic running up and down the stairs and upto the dargah. ''today I'll get ready early for the office so that Maan Sir will have no complaints about me'' thinking she tries and walk up to the bathroom. Somehow she drags herself but has no energy to carry on. She was feeling nauseating and feeble. ''Don't know what's happing to me'.kal raat to theek thi!'' Geet just could not take it anymore she comes back and falls on the bed. ''Thori der aur soo jaati hun' 9 baje tak sab office may aa jaayege tab tak to main ready ho jayougi". Geet slept off...'.

All the staff has come on time. Maan enters and deliberately did not look for Geet. .. As usual he is adopting avoiding tactics to counter his own feelings'.. "Aaj main bi Geet ko kisi kam se nain boolayunga' let her do her own thing"'''about an hour pass by Maan is busy on his computer, Pinky comes and whispers slowly, "Sir' whoh aaj Geet abhi tak nahin aaye.. kain gaye hai kya".. Maan gets a jolt ' " she hasn't come'." looking at his wristwatch.. "it's 10 O'clock' how can she be so careless' jaao aur us Miss late- lateef ko boola ke laao." he says this firmly but slowly so that no other staff should listen. Pinky goes up stairs.

"But Geet usually does not do like this! Is she OK'. I hope she is alright"' thinking at the possibility of any untoward happening, now man could not stop himself so he also follows Pinky.

"Kya hua Pinky?"'. seeing that Pinky is trying to wake Geet up, Maan walks up to the bed side and looks at Geet anxiously. Geet is still sleeping'. "Oh! She is looking so pale." "Geet utho! '.. Geet" pinky says softly. Geet is still very sleepy and keeping her eyes close she says with a week voice, "Sone de Pinky' Aaj naihn'.. I am exhausted'..I cannot'.." and she dozed off again. Maan who is watching all this while looks really worried. Pinky sighs.

''Pinky what's happen to her'.. why is still sleeping' is she has fever'.. call the doctor'" panic Maan. "Nahin Maan Sir, Don't call the doctor"'.. Maan is loosing his patience again " what do you mean '.. She is looking so sick'..Call the doctor now." Commands Maan.

"Sir lagata hai Geet ko ab Is baat ka asar uski health par padane laga hai"

Maan is getting tense'"kis baat ka asar.

Pinky starts fumbling "Sir woh''".

Maan gets restless and shouts "Bolo Pinky"

" Sir Geet is pregnant''.. Yeh Baat sirf Main hur Papa janete hai'.Agar Doctor Aya toh''.."

Maan got the shock of his life. Pinky's words is piercing into his heart hard. He couldn't move, couldn't blink couldn't feel anything....anymore...

"Sir.....Sir..." Pinky jerked him.

"Hain!.... Main....trying to regain his composure Maan says, " Pinky tum jaao.... and tell every body is off for the day.... nobody should know that Geet is ......... that Geet is not well"

Pinky and everybody left.

Maan doent know how to react. "Geet Pregnant hai... lakin ye baat usne mujahe kyon nahin batayi..... Main to use itna kareb se..... his thoughts wondered to the first time he met her......then how her brother and all were trying to kill Geet... all that has happed to he that he knows off.....

"Toh is leeye geet ke family use maarna chahti thi...... lekin jitna main Geet ko jaanata huin who kaise koi kam hain karegi jo......."kya uske life mein koi aur hai?...Kya who ladka....First time he feels jealousy and pain in his heart. Then he remembers that she told her that that boy was her friend's husband....... Maan is confused......recollecting all he knows about Geet and trying to connect all the missing links...... "Something is missing......yes that land she wanted to know who sold me that land......but who land to Munshi ji ne....... yes I have to inquire Munshi ji..". Maan Calls up Munshi ji.

"Munshi ji I want to know about that land....I mean about the girld rom whom we purchased that land."

Munshi ji " Are Sir! Who ladki to badi pyaari thi... par bechari ke saath bada bura hua.......and he goes on all that had happed with Geet how an Canadian family cheated her into marriage and abandoned her the next day...... Pata naih kahan gayi but she is a very brave girl....."

Maan could not listen any more..... Tears rolling down his eyes, he is feeling terrible....... He walks into the room where Geet is sleeping. Loving he sat near her bedside. She is still sleeping...... calmly... in serenity........so innocent and away from all the evils of this world. Time passed by slowly.

Maan gently pushed the stand of her hair off her face and marveled at the purity of her face.....he is feeling so proud that he loves a girl who knows how to smile at the storm.....( remembering her smiling faces)

"Itne dukho ke bad bhi itna kaise muskura leti ho Geet! Please mujhe bhi sikha do."....murmured Maan.

Sensing that somebody is near her Geet opens her eyes and sees Maan right on her side caressing her hair. She felt little uncomfortable but does not want to stop Maan from doing that. she could feel the tender touch of Maan finger and could not resist to want for more.

"How are you feeling now?.. Maan's voice was so soft it made Geet speechless.

Geet trying to get up......."Main kya...... kya time hua hai sir..... mughe pat nahi....

"Its evening Geet...... and don't get up ....say in bed if you feel like... you must be hungry I'll get something for you to eat...." Maan

Geet was flabbergasted...... she has never seen this soft, gentle and caring side of Maan.

Hey all you Maaneet fans....... You may want that Geet should reveal her truth herself. But this is just an expression that Maan knows the truth and still loves her and when the tire truth comes out he will handle it in a matured manner rather than being judgmental.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very beautiful post...but I doubt CV's are going to use it this way...I am sure they will use all the pragenancy things against Geet.
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Thanks bhart, I have just heard that Mauli is coming as Sameera. I do not want to spoil the Geet and Maan's exclusiveness for each other... I also think CV will not let the truth come out so early. Lets see all I want is nobody should be judgemental towards Geet and Maan not at all. He is a mature and sensible guy. Cannot show him jumping up to conclusions just like that.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yeah sameera - Mouni roy to enter next week............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it sweet heart... Even if the truth is not revealed in this way I want Maan to confirm with Munshiji before coming to any conclusion
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it sweety. You really did a fab job explaining Maan compassionate side and his maturity.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fabinyusuff and Meetpremeer. Thanks a lot for the encouragement.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx Angel I 'll write a second part soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey....
i really liked it.....
pls continue soon....
i want to know wt happens next... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice attempt 🤗
................but these tv ppl are always into making the life of the patragonist more complicated........................

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