Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87!

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#681

@Viji - y isnt anyone at 3I thread.... am alone posting there every hr to check if someone is there

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#682

Great update Vrush............but not as intense as usual. Its been so long since the last update, maybe that's why you may feel disconnected with the characters!!

But overall....good chapter....would have liked to have the much needed convo between Nargis and Vicky...but now I guess I will have something to look forward to in the next update!!!😉

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Kads

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Posted: 14 years ago

#683

Phew!! Finally u did it!
Thanks sweets .. It was awesome as usual

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Great update Vrush............but not as intense as usual. Its been so long since the last update, maybe that's why you may feel disconnected with the characters!!

But overall....good chapter....would have liked to have the much needed convo between Nargis and Vicky...but now I guess I will have something to look forward to in the next update!!!😉

Vrush - actually I agree with Nags...... Nags n Vicky parts used to be far more hot n sizzling..... long sleep from writing is making u a bit more sober..... 😆😆😆😆.... i want the old Vrush back.... Haay haay i still go back n read the old Wishful thinking posts sometimes.....

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#685

Ah gouri and nags

mere maala phirane ke din aa gaye lagta... hai!

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topsyturvy23

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Posted: 14 years ago

#686

hey thanks for the pm

loved the update

well written n beautifully represented

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@Jenny..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#687

i loved it it is amazing...mind blowing plzz pm me next time

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#688

Thanks tops

Thanks arti

will update in a few days.. will let you know when i do!!

thanks for liking mywork..!!

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#689

OMG...........................Vrushali you did an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛
Amazing night for the couples huh!

Maan....what do I say about him now.....the less the better *Abs coughing!!!* 😆

I think you missed Narky trying to do some naughty bedroom tricks on each other...that's why probably ppl were like that Narky chemistry appears to have changed. But it was a nice update after such a long hiatus...Welcome back Lekhika Madam! 😃