Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87! - Page 68

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
I am new to read ur FF,
believe me, i thoroughly enjoyed reading them,
it was awesome.................
you took care to describe bot each n everyone deeply,
loved your effort a lot,
Hmm, i felt Vicky as most interesting,
very emotional............nice...........
I was bit confused of Vicky,s mom towards his love life,
Well coming to the point, please incluse me in your PM list,
i would love to read ur updates and comment on them...........
(i shall send you buddy request to make your work easy.....
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Vru!!!
Diwali ko gaye ek mahina hone ko aa raha hai!!!
Pls continue!!! Really luved this FF of urs!!

-Kads

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Posted: 14 years ago
Diwali gayi, ab aayi Christmas ki baari....
Edited by Hot_Indo_Chilly - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Diwali gayi, ab aayi Christmas ki baari....

wait until next diwali...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Vrush...kuch toh socho Abs or Maan ke baare mein...............kitni beqarari ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ hogayi hogi....waiting for their SR...jaldi karna....ek update toh banta hain!!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Vrush...kuch toh socho Abs or Maan ke baare mein...............kitni beqarari ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ hogayi hogi....waiting for their SR...jaldi karna....ek update toh banta hain!!!😛



M wid u on this Nargis!!
@ Vru... u knw my fav here.... So pls... I wanna c hw he gets the luv of his life!!!
Psst: I thot I convinced u enuf to start writing this FF again... 😔

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Vrush...kuch toh socho Abs or Maan ke baare mein...............kitni beqarari ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ hogayi hogi....waiting for their SR...jaldi karna....ek update toh banta hain!!!😛



Chalo atleast Nargis devrani ji ne meri taraf se muh khola...Bechari main kya kehti ab lekhikha ji ko!

BTW, did you guys read: http://sanah05.wordpress.com/2010/12/10/nissar-parvez-to-gc-and-dd-sr-scene/

I read it and totally loved it as well!

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Posted: 14 years ago
i Know finally the sun did rise and i did update..i guess wonders will never cease...i hope you all like it...
This is for Abs and Nagz especially ...sorry for the long hiatus..and yes i did lose the grip on the story..i hope i get it back.



Chapter 62
Maan knew in his guts that Vicky and Faz would definitely be planning not so nice pranks for them and he could lay a bet that would put his company at stake knowing that he would win it. He would have enjoyed outsmarting them but did not want to waste time dealing with it. He had already gone through a year's worth of cold showers waiting for his bride.
He had kept a firm control on himself and knew he would have to be patient for sometime more to initiate his shy bride to the pleasures that they were going to derive with their union.
He had left trails that would lead the two pranksters to either orchestrate their ideas at Khurana Mansion or the suite he had booked at Oberoi but he had no plans to go to either of the places. But he was not going to give himself the satisfaction of diverting them till he had reached the destination he had planned safely.
Abolee had asked where they were headed when she saw that they were not headed to the Oberoi but were on the highway towards the outskirts of Delhi. Soon she realized that Maan had taken the road to his house where she had been only once.
He stopped the car, and when Abs tried to get down he asked her to be seated and he went around and opened her side of the door and lifted her out of the car. As he walked over the threshold after opening the door he whispered, "Welcome to your home, well this is your home to and this will be our get away place whenever we need to take time off from rest of the family especially Vicky."
"What are we doing here?" Abs asked even though she seemed to be having a fair idea of what was the reason.
Maan laughed and explained, "You know that Vicky and his gang have things planned and that is why I went along with the plan to divert them. I know my kid bro, he is way to devious but he should remember I was the mastermind in most of the pranks he played in school. Of course I shall be grateful to him for playing one prank on me." He had then squeezed her closer.
He went up the stairs with her in his arms, entered the bedroom and smiled at her as he slid her down.
Abs turned and stood with her back against Maan and surveyed the room. It was her gasp as she turned and looked at Maan who stood smiling at her that gave her feelings away.
"You did all this? Maan this is tremendous." Blood rushed up her face and she blushed at the thought of what Maan had done.
The room was like a dream with red and gold flowy drapes that were strewn on the canopy of the four-poster bed.
The bedsheets were satin red with gold pillows and white rose petals on the bed.
A couple of candlebra were set up on the far side of the room on the floor that gave a red and gold halo and a quaint feel to the whole setting. The antique look made her feel like she had slipped into a time warp, a place where may be the Kings had their lavish and elaborate wedding night dcor.
She was mesmerized by the way the room was illuminated and the way the halo created around the bed as if it was calling out to her.
Maan had pulled her into his body and whispered, "what do you think? I wanted to do this for my love and I wanted it to be special for her. Have I succeeded?"
Abs turned around and planted a kiss on his lips lightly and then bent her head in shyness that suddenly assailed her.
He lifted her chin and said, "Now that is an answer for which I would do this anytime again."
He then put his arms around her and brought her so close that she could feel every inch of his body. He then put his hands on the sides of her face and kissed her gently and slowly it deepened into one that let all the restrictions he had imposed on himself cut themselves away and the dam that had tied his emotions flowed freely with every nerve end calling out to her.
Abs wound her arms around his neck as he lifted her off her feet and held her closer. He crushed her body to him and let her know in no uncertain terms what she made him feel and what he wanted at that very moment.
He was hot for her and she felt the heat radiat off of him and engulf her in its warmth. She felt herself melting and immersing herself into him. Just then he put his arm under her knee and lifted her in his arms and walked upto the bed to gently to sat her down on it.
He sat next to her and then slowly ran his hand down her leg to reach her foot. He then caressed her ankle and softly removed her payal, first one then the other. He came upto her waist and removed her waist chain. Abs' eyes closed in reaction to his light yet scorching touch that lit a fire in her that she knew would burn brighter and bigger as his ministrations continued.
He then ran his fingers up her torso and on the shoulder to trace the length of her am and then remove the bangles and kangan and paunchas with slow deliberate movements that sent shivers down her spine.
She could not help but mutter, "Maan, what are you doing?"
He had then looked at her with smoldering eyes and said, "learning each and every part of you, I want to devour you my sweet love, tonight, I am going to show you what you do to me."
She had then shyly looked down but he had cupped her face and told her, "Let me look at you and I want you to look at me while I learn you, I want to you to see what you do to me."
He had then continued in his journey of learning his bride removing her necklace, her earring, her tikka. He had then leisurely started to work on the clothes, removing the endless pins and tucks that went in creating the ensemble for a bride. He had removed the saree and discarded it on a chair after he had gotten her to stand up for it and then he had gone and stood behind her when it came to removing the strings at the back of the blouse. He had removed the pins in the hair and now he had moved her hair, and untied the string that was tied at her neck. She had closed her eyes and her head was slightly bent forward when she suddenly felt warm lips on her nape and her eyes had flown open and she had gasped.
He had whispered, "Liked that?" against her nape and the breath had been like a lick of fire on her.
All she could do was utter something gibberish which was an affirmation. He had traced his fingers down the spine and settled his hand on the curve of her waist while his other hand removed the other string of her blouse. She had felt a sense of freedom when he had untied that, a liberation. She had straightened with the intention of turning around when his hand at the waist had stilled her.
"Not yet" he had ordered lovingly and he had tilted her back in his arms as he had cradled her given her a kiss that shook her to the very core. He had kissed her deeply and told her how affected he was and unhurriedly he had removed the blouse and let it join the saree. He had then let her go as he had removed his sherwani and the shirt and seen her watch him as he had unbuttoned them. He has seen the desire rise on her face from neck upwards and knew that with shyness she felt a yearning as strong as him to be one with him. He had then given up all the pretense of patience and deliberation and swiftly devested himself of all clothes as he stood before her a man offering his love to him woman. Abs' had boldly looked at him reveling in the way her man was standing before her in all his glory and she had moved forward towards him.
Maan had then lifted her in his arms and laid her on the bed following her and then removed all her clothes and started a journey of passion that threatened to overwhelm them.
He had made slow and sweet love to her knowing how she was new to this. It was her reactions and her boldness in reciprocating his touches with equal passion that filled his heart and he felt completeness as he filled her and felt the oneness fill his soul.
He had been gentle the first time around and let her sleep soon after their culmination into a peak that had them panting and joyous. He had been pleasantly surprised to find her seeking him out in few hours and this time he had expressed his need for her with eagerness and swiftness that had left them gasping.
They had slept and when he opened his eyes next the rays of the sun were streaming through the break in the curtain and casting a halo in the room. He turned on his side to watch his bride sleep with a slight smile on her face and he knew he had found his home in her.
Vicky had come to know the minute they had come to the Oberoi that Big bro had done a number on them and knew where he must have gone. But he refrained from telling the rest of them what he thought and asked them all to disperse.
Nargis had been wondering if she should have gone with Adi and Faz or Nupur and Arjun when his hand on her had asking what he was thinking.
"I know where Maan Bhaisaab must be, but me thinks, if we already have the room, why waste it and use it ourselves," he had winked at her and had swiftly taken her up to the room.
Nargis had wanted to talk to him about the test but Vicky it seemed was in too much of a romantic mood and he had talked of nothing but how he would get their wedding night and had shown her how he would make each and every thing special for her not with just words but with actions.
He had lifted her as soon as they had stepped out of the lift and told her to behave like this was their wedding night. He had taken her over the threshold.
He had then asked to sit on the couch as he went to the bathroom. He had then run a bath for them which had a jaccuzzi in there. Once ready, he had undressed Nargis and taken her to the bathroom. He had then asked her to get in there as he removed his clothes and joined her in the tub. He had thrown some bath salts and started the jaccuzzi which was having a soothing effect. He had gotten Nargis to sit with her back against his chest and had massaged her shoulders and nape of her neck so that all the kinks were disentangled.
Nargis had gone pliant and limp against Vicky when she had felt his foot rub against the shin of her right leg. She had turned her head and asked a question with her eyes. He had in response kissed her on her ear and said, "Just go with the flow. Relax and enjoy."
He had then taken a sponge and ran it along her arms and breasts to run rivulets of water out of the sponge on her body and watch it join the rest of the water in the tub. He had then thrown the sponge away and given the job to his hands and had run havoc with her senses. She had moaned her wanton ness and he had uttered words of magic that heightened her need.
She had felt him stir beneath her and knew that he was as ready for her as she was for him. She had then turned in the water and sat astride him as he had yet again taken her to heights of satiation that left her speechless. She had held on to his shoulders as her body was raked with spasms that bespoke of her assuagement. She knew only Vicky could take her to the heights and she fell with the surety and confidence in the knowledge that he would be there to catch her.
Afterwards, he had gently put her to bed and held her in spoon fashion as they fell into a dreamless sleep.
Adi had dropped Faz to her home and kissed her with a longing that wanted more from her but knew he would not want to pressurize her for it would have to be her decision. He got her to promise him that she would meet him the next as they were all to meet at Khurana Mansion anyway.
Faz had agreed and gone inside but as she had reached the door she could not resist one last look at the man who made her feel so alive.
Arjun had dropped Nupur at Nargis's place as it had been a long day with wedding and wanted her to rest. They still had other rasams to take care of before they flew off the day after.
Maan had woken up and gone to the bathroom, when he returned, he found Abs sitting on the bed with a sheet around her and after smiling at him a little wanly and a hurried good morning she asked,
"Where is the painting you had on the wall above the head?"
Maan froze just outside the bathroom, with his hand on the towel he had been tying and looked at Abs with a narrowed eyes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my god!!! vrushali at last u updated.......i dont know u gave me a big big surprise......i cant thank u enough.....oh my gosh!! maan and abs suhaag raat was so perfect☺️.....loved vicky he is just to not waste time and moment.......at last there was the hot scene expected between vicky and nargis.......anyways update soon.......want to know what happens next😊......love u sweety🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow vrush.... this is awesome.... 😛😃

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