Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

I read the story again.. Vru.. pls update...
U know how much I love Vicky.. I miss him sooo much 😭... He still haunts me

-Kads

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--Nargis--

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Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

Vrush...perhaps this will be incentive for you to complete this story...

" Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away..."

Please give LIFE back to Vicky and Nargis!!!😉

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#703

OMG

Kadds..

nagz..aise dialogue marogi..toh mujhe complete karni hi padegi na!!

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-sann-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#704

By God ki kasam !!😲 Yeh lo main toh iss kahani ki agle parao ( my hindi is bad, kya kare 😛 ) dhundte dhundte SG se USA aa gayi...phir bhi kuch haasil nehi hua...😭😭 lekhika sahiba, aab toh daya kardo...!!! tumhe meri technical joke ki kasam !! 😛😆

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@rickks

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#705

Yeh Lo ab toh Nupsie bhi aa gayi...aur Gizarish bhi kar di...Ab toh Kardo Vrushu...

@Nups...where are you??? Miss you 😭

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-sann-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#706

naaanu...🤗

Main hu tumhare paas haan... I miss u more mio amore...😭😭😭

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@rickks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#707

Originally posted by: -sann-
naaanu...🤗
Main hu tumhare paas haan... I miss u more mio amore...😭😭😭

Haan Haan Nanu Ki Bachi...Ab yaad aayi Nanu tujhe...Miss you loads sweetheart 🤗

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Fammakhan1

@Fammakhan1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#708

Ok sooo i just now finish readin it...

I started readin' this ff of urs...yesterday and finally done readin' it.. :D

I must say u know my taste better than i know mine.. As u have.. Told me to read it... :)

And now i m thinkin y did'n i red it beforeee... Damnn

Koi baat naee.. :) now i wont miss anythin'

Ah and let me tell u about this FF...It is AAmazIn' ... Fab. ... Wonderfull.. Reallyy well written as if it is ur proffession... And obv. PASSION...

Totally speachless.. U have explained each and everythin sooo welll that there is no room for any confusion in my mind...

And the ... Best part is u have not missed explainin' any character at ALL..
as in just like a writter do...
And just d way we watch on Tv..

Like when u explain about vicky and nag.. U always shift the scene to explain abot maan and abs .. And same wiv others..

Now u have to tell me othere stories u think i must read... :D
Btw u knw i alwys crave to read somthin from
Ur side..
So u better write soon..
Yup i know u r bizi these days.. Buh wheneva u get time.. do write..
I wonder y aren't u writtin' any FF! ?
Ahh i can guess coz of... crazy IF rules?

Anyway :) tc
Write soon x

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#709

hey famma

this is so sweet...

i am bowled over!!

u so know my need for long comments

thanks so much yaar...

i shall write soon... an ff perhaps...lets see..

but what you should read... ah... now... i am going to be greedy and say..everything... :-P

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Fammakhan1

@Fammakhan1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#710

Hahaha :)
U should write one... soon..

Aww i will try to read all ur maan and geet workk .. :)

Actually i was writtin the comment from my phone soo i ddn knew it will turn out to b that long... Buh i tried to express... All my feelin's after readin this .. :)

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