Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

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Posted: 14 years ago

#342

Achcha bacchu--- u were talking abt fitness!! Pretty soon u too ll be singing a different tune-- oops running for a different tune.. Fitness in a different way 😆😆😆...

Learn after marriage.. My lips are sealed 🤬..........

Nups - Tu badi tez nikli.. U will overtake Abs in the fitness game or what 😆😆...

Ok ,me logging off. Har raat aisi baiti rahi, I dont knw about bedroom games but I wll defo be running around the house so hubby does not catch me and my lappie and throw us out 😕🤢🤢

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Posted: 14 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD
Achcha bacchu--- u were talking abt fitness!! Pretty soon u too ll be singing a different tune-- oops running for a different tune.. Fitness in a different way 😆😆😆...
*rasiyaa aaja...hole hole ras barsa ja..*

Learn after marriage.. My lips are sealed 🤬..........

Nups - Tu badi tez nikli.. U will overtake Abs in the fitness game or what 😆😆... maine kya kia vai.....😕 main to abs ki kartute bata rahi thi.....

Ok ,me logging off. Har raat aisi baiti rahi, I dont knw about bedroom games but I wll defo be running around the house so hubby does not catch me and my lappie and throw us out 🤢🤢

ek abla nari pe attyachar.....very bad jiju.....😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: -sann-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#347

hamara update kab aayega...

Aaaya re dil ko churaana...aaya re mera update!!!🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

#348

bengali lessons 4 u...😎 dedicated to maabs, narky, arpur, fazadi, ....means the cast & crew of take my breath away(amar sash niye jao😆😆)

Ekta gopon kotha chilo bolbar, (i have a secret to share)

Bondhu shomoy hobe ki tomar,(do u have time..?)

Ekbar shune bhule jeyo barbar,(just listen once thn u may frget wht i said..)

Bhuleo kalke bolona abar. (dont dare to tell anyone..)

Mukhe bhalobashina bole
monete prem niye chole aj onekei,

(there r some people who say tht they dont love bt they do secretly love..)[fazadi]

Etodin chilo shadharon
taar majhe ekjon
Jake aaj boro alada lage.

(past days were normal..bt today i feel someone special😳)[arpur]

Mon adharer nilimay,
Tomakei aaj khujte chay,
(my heart wants to find u in the darkness of moonlight)

Janina kothay pabo tomay,
(i dont know where to find u)

Ekbar eshe dekho amay.
(come & see me just once)

Bhebechi tai ebar, ja kichu hobe hobar, Bhul tobu kore shikar,

porajoy mene niye, Shobkichu bole diye, Chaibo amar odhikar,

(i've decided, may wht happens, i will to accept my mistakes, i will accept defeat bt will tell u everything & ask for my rights...)[maan]

Kopale ja ache lekha, mone jodi pai o betha, dekhe nibo ami er shesh,
Mitthe obhinoy, ar noy ar noy, Ei bhalo achi ei besh..
(dont know wht is in my fate, i wont fear if i get pain...bt i will see its ending.....

there will b no false acting..this is right..this is clean)[narky]

Protidin e goli o golite ghuroghuri kete jay shomoy , ashe raat,(time passes roaming on street to another...the day becomes night..)

Meyeta baka kore chul badhe prem kore dekho, cheletao pore full hata shirt,(the girl ties her hair in a different style...loves...even the boy wears full sleeve shirt..[maabs])

Ei dekhe hashahashi, Gaantake bhalobashi , ei bhalo achi ei shopno amar,

(seeing this everyone laughs...bt loves them...i'm fine this way & thts my dream)
Kokhono bujhini jeta, eta chilo shuchona achhe baki shopner uposhonghar.

(i never understood this was the beggining...the ending of my dream is on its way..)

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@jamoshi2507

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Posted: 14 years ago

#349

omg Vru ... how do u manage it .... 8 characters and all of them are so different from each other.... I am really liking the Nups Arjun story .... it is so straight forward and passionate .... Nups what are u doing .... sochti kucch ho aur bolti kucch aur ho😉

Faz ser toh Adi toh sawa ser nikla.... by God .... but why do I feel u are planning tragedy for them 😭 kucch bhi karna par end mein saare pairs happy hone chahiye ... I don't like sad stories

so many spoilers .... hmmm liked the ideas and thanks for giving a glimpse of the childhood prank of Maan - Vicky and Faz... I loved it ..... Maan the leader was awesome

@nups is ur fever okay now?

@nags tum toh itni active rehti thi ... kahan gayab ho gayi...

@abs kya irada hai chhat par 😉 hmmm dekhte hain vru kya likhti hai... I would love to see how Maan reacts to ur feelings.... hey I am a Taurus too ... I also do not like changes... but I think kucch toh change hai tumhare posts mein after the trip .... phir se jaao trip pe 😆 kucch aur change ho jayega

waise main late hoon par Nags and Nups tum dono ko Ramadan Mubarak ho ..... aur kisi ka naam chhod diya toh muaaf karna

accha main abhi dinner banane ja rahi hoon .... would love to chat with you gals ... I miss u a lot 🤗