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TheMelody.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: nowee10
I just wanna say.. BEAUTIFUL update! It was the perfect ending! I love this FF and thank you for writing it! In every part you described AR perfectly! ❤️ One of my fave FFs ❤️ Do continue writing more FFs/Oneshots too!

-Noru ❤️

Hi Noru!

Thanks a lot for liking it! Makes me really happy. :) Aww, I can't believe it's one of your fave FF's :$ That touches my heart, honestly! <3

I will surely continue writing. 😳

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: AR_LOVER
awesome ending

Thanks a lot!

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: Armaan1234
Hey Mel !!! I just loved this one !!! Wish there was more !!! Its awesome !!!!
- Rhea

Hey Rhea!

It's ironic how your name and AR's daughter's name is the same. :P

Thanks for liking it! Muahh!

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: saniashzadi_10
hey Mel....
its simply lovely nd cutest update...reallly u hve put each feeling nd emotions soooo perfectly ....hearty👏 fr u...
🤗happy new year...
love
sania

Hi Sania!

Thank you so much! Pleased to know that you liked the last part..

Happy New yr to you too! Hope it's filled with happiness and success!

Much love!

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: KaJenYaianSanju
hey Mel!
the last update was so amazing...It's a happy as well as sad feeling...happy that it had a PERFECT ending and sad that the FF has ended...anyway this FF as a whole was too too too amazing...everything was so sweet and perfect...even the sad parts were so perfect...and honestly, I see no area of improvement...you describe the characters' feelings and emotions so well!!
I loved every single thing about this FF so there is no specific scene albeit I loved the salaam-namastey sequence a lot too!!

Thank you so much for this awesome FF...hope to get to read more from you🤗

P.S. Eben though I'm late, Happy New Year

Hey Sanju (right?)

Thank you so much for the comment! I feel touched..

Awww..nice to know that you thought it was the perfect ending. Happy that you adored the Salaam Namastey scenes! hehe!

Thanks for the comment and Happy new yr to you. Hope you have a joyous year ahead!😳

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: anamika2010
hey...kahani khatm ho gayi?....thora aur pregnancy stage ko dikhati toh achcha lagta....anyways...liked this ff...loved ar's blue eyes daughter......luv u....

punam

Hi Punam!

Yes, the FF is over. 😳 Pregancy stage is over..Nine months is more than enought. 😆 Thanks for liking the FF and Rhea!

Much love!

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu
omg i'm soo sad it endeddd

and as for improvement - you should not end it! or start a new onee!

honestly i dont even remeber how i came across this ff lol but i'm glad i did!

Awwww! I have already started a new one. LOL. So hoping to hear more from you on that one too! :)

Thanks for reading and liking the FF. <3

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: shonagudia
Awww Can't believe that it ended. But as everybody said "Every good thing has to end one day" . A Perfect ending to a Perfect story.

I got to know about this story from Fan Fiction Forum. I keep on checking for any AR FF and jump on it as soon as find 😆
You Write really well. Very well described emotions. The most memorable journey i guess the pregnancy period(Salam Namste sequence, The moments you described in this last part. ) And the best one is when Rhea was born. 👏Loved the way Arman said "She is Beautiful" And of course all of his frnd. These frnds are very important in AR 's love story.

Keep on writing . Wish you a very happy new year.

Hiya!

Glad you liked it! Yes, everything has to come to an end one day! :) Thanks for liking the way I write..I would really love to see a scene where Armaan holds his daughter and says 'She's Beautiful'. I would be so happy on that day. But I doubt that would happen now.

Nevertheless, thanks a lot! Have a happy yr ahead!<3

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: soniaraheja
.superb ending.........🤗 loved it..... their memories..this ff will always will be close to my heart.............

and HAPPY NEW YEAR....sorry for late........

Awwwww! Thank you so much! This FF will be close to my heart too! No problem about being late! :)

Take care! x

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TheMelody.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN
hiiii
awesome update
loved it
AR r so cute
the perfect couple
perfect ending
1. What is your favourite scene from this whole FF (something you can't forget)?
when armaan wore ridzys night dress
it was hilerious
2. Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?
loved armaans dialogue ( Suno suno suno! Aaj ki tazaa khabar!! Armaan Mallik ne Ridhima Mallik ke liye ek 'Not-To-Do' list prepare ki hai! )

3. How did you come across this FF?
from my sis she is also IF member
4. Is there anything I should improve? (PLEASE don't say 'nothing'! I won't be offended, I'm welcome to criticism.)
no
it was a perfect ff
loved it

thank u 4 all ur hard work
thanks 4 da pm
plz do pm me when ever u plan 2 write more