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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ksgforever10

luvd it nd d best scene was ridz wearing armaan.s boxer nd tee.........nd d bst dialog was wen riz woke up nd suddenly asked 4 d icecrm nd suggestion is...'PLZZZZ APNE FF ITNI JALDI MAT KHATAM KARA KARO'...........LOLZZZZZZZZZ:)


Haha..Thanks for liking that scene!

Awww LOL, I will try not to end my other FF's too soon! Thanks for the comment. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Amona

wooooooooow....gr8 part n beautiful ff...

lobed it 2 da core....
really loved da parts during da delivery...when armaan's presence gave riddhima strength...
loved da bond n love AR...
plzz plzz do ryt another ff on AR.....
thnx 4 da pm...n w8ng 4 da new ff....lolz
AMOON


Hey Amoon!
Thank you so much! I enjoyed writing the 'Armaan's presence' part too. I love AR's bond too. :)

New FF? Haha, I already have two running so will be concentrating on them first.

Mel.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgkaran4eva

Ok !! So this part was Like heaven !
I mean I can't belive it !! It was just so PERFECT !
You wrote each n everything so Beautifully !! I mean I just can't explain MEL !
I mean , Hats OFFFFFF man !!
AWESOME !!
FANTASTIC!!
FAB!!
JHAKAASS!!
MINDBLOWING !
AMAZING !!
This was I THINK was the HIGHLIGHT of the WHOLE FF ! TRUST ME !!
I am MAHA IMPRESSED MEL ! I have come ACROSS , SOOOO MANY FF .. But yours was TRULY Heaven ! Ya well Besides u .. Sahar & Rabia's OS & FF , They are fantastic too ! No Doubt !
Coming towards your FF!
Amazingly Written Gal ! It was just PERFECT .. All I can Say !
I seriously wish that you would have CONTINUED the FF !
But Its Ok ! .. We Have your OS + more 2 FF's Two Read !!
I am Seriously Gonna Miss this FF very Much !
Trust Me .. Whenever I am free .. I am gonna turn On my COMP And read ur FF !
I got my NEW YEAR GIFTTT !!! WOOOOHHOOOOOOOOOO! 🥳( I mean this last part)



OK NOW THE QUESTIONS YOU ASKED ...
1)
What is your favourite scene from this whole FF
Ans-
Ermm! Its quite Difficult To say ... Because you have expressed each and everything so perfectly , So FRANKLY .. Each n every part was Marvelous ! 😃

2)Are there any dialogues you remember clearly

Ans- The ONE you just Mentioned in this Part ...
"RIDHIMAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! Isse mein hi kyun milta hoon "susu" karne keliye!"
I have Never Ever Come Across such Dialouge !! So this was the best !! :P IT WAS HILLARIOUS !!


3)
How did you come across this FF?
Ans-
I often visit FF Forum .. SO I came across your FF !!

4)
Is there anything I should improve?
Ans-
More HOTTTT Scenes !! 🤣 🤣 🤣 Ok .. Kidding !! Ermm!! NOO! there were NO spelling errors n alll .. So it was Perfect !!!

OK .... WISH YOU A HAPPYYYYY NEW YEARRRRRRRR!!
WOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I think .. No acctually I don't think .. I know , This is the BEST GIFT I have ever got in my Life !! Thank YOU so Much for this Melena !! I Owe you for this !!

......
Ok Lastly ....!
PHEEWWWWW !!! 🥱
Kuch jyada hi lamba comment ho gaya !! 😆
I AM GOING TO MISS THIS FF VERYYYYYYYYYYYYYY MUCH !
I am seriously GLAD .. That you came up with this FF ! Sharing your Ideas With us!
HATSSS OFFF !! 👏

Give us a EPILOGUE if you can !! 😃
So Mel ! It was Pleasure Reading your FF !
Happy New Year ONCE AGAIN!
Hope this Year .. Brings you a lot of HAPPINESS , CRAZZINESS , SUCCESS , LOVE, LUCKK In your LIFE !!
And Most IMPORTANT !!



May Armaan and Ridhimaa the ever loving couple always remain for eachother..in our memories and also in our hearts too as the sweet loving Ridhimaa And Cool loving Armaan!!!!



Awww, your comment is like heaven! Haha! No, on serious note, thanks a lot for the appreciating my efforts!

Thanks for considering the part perfect. It makes me feel contended with what I've presented to you guys. I feel ecstatic! I agree..this part was huge and pretty much the main part so it is the highlight for sure!! Wow, I feel so honoured that you chose my FF out of the other great ones out there. I agree Sahar & Rabia's OS's are awesome! I am reader of their work too. Love their work!

Trust me, I would have continued if I had the time. But now I feel this is the perfect way to end it. There could not have been a better way of ending this FF in my POV. Awww whenever you re-read this FF leave a comment by to let me know you've read it! I would feel really happy to know that. :)

LMFAO, you liked that susu dialogue? I was laughing whilst writing it too..but I was hoping you all don't find it lame. :$

Oho, I liked you suggestion of the hot scenes. Mhhhmm..will work on that in my other FF's. 😉 This has been more of cute/light hearted FF so hot romance wouldn't really fit in. Nevertheless, I will def look into your suggestion! Awwwwww, new year's gift? From me? Yep, you can consider the part as yours, haha! I am so so so glad to know you loved it to such an extent. I seriously can't tell you how you made my day!:D

Epilogue? Hmmm..I would have loved to give you guys that but, I don't think it will be able to match up to this part. For me, this is the end to the FF. I hope you'll understand..But I'll definitely write a few OS' related to this FF! So you can surely read them..

Thank you so much for the touching comment! I am so pleased to know you liked it so much! It made my day! =)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
do write more FF
happy new year to u



love
Riddss


Thank you so much! Happy new yr to you too!

Mel.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kajen4lyf

Well wat can i say about dis part.. Dis part was

*Amazing
*Emotional
*Fabulous
*Outstanding
*Mindblowing
*Great
ETC ETC
I am gonna miss dis ff soo much.. howeva we still got other ff's from u which i will b lukin for forwrd too :)

QUESTIONS
1)What is your favourite scene from the whole ff?
well i have luved every single little bit of da ff... so i dnt have no favourite scene..

2)Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?
Riddhima:Armaan.. i want to wear my nightie pass it to me..
Armaan: Toh mein pehnadoo!
Ammy Will Neva Change <3

3)How did you come across dis ff?
Welll.. actually i was on FB one day and i fink a fwend asked me if i read dis ff n i sed no so she sent me da lynk n started readin it n i luved it<3

4)Is there anything i should improve?
Ermmm...Noo you are perfect!!

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
I AM GONNA MISS DIS FF SOOOOOO MUCH
HATS OFF MEL....
(FIRST TYM I HAVE EVA COMMENTED DIS LONG)



ARMAAN AND RIDDHIMA/KARAN SINGH GROVER AND JENNIFER WINGET... A LOVESTORY NO1 EVA FORGTS.. AND WILL ALWAYS STAY IN OUR HEART.....
AR/KAJEN HAMESHA<3


Heyy!

Thank you so much for liking the part and commenting. Yep, I still have my other FF's running so it's all good. :D

Haha, glad you liked the Nightie scene! Yep, Armaan will never change! 😉

Happy New yr to you too! I will miss writing this FF as well..

Take care hun!<3
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpI007

hey dear
awesome part
totally loved it
pls dn't end this ff
thanks for pm
cont. soon

QUESTIONS
1)What is your favourite scene from the whole ff?
when ridz told armaan abot her pregrncy that is awesome, amazing so on...................😊

2)Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?

Armaan: Okay, I promise you!


Ridhima: Pinky promise?😊😛


Armaan: Pinky promise!! (Armaan laughed at her childishness and hugged her even more tightly.

N

"RIDHIMAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! Isse mein hi kyun milta hoon susu karne keliye!" He spoke in mock anger as he handed Rhea to Ridhima.😆😆😃

3)How did you come across dis ff?
one day i saw this ff n i read prolouge, i really loved that so i read dis ff😛

4)Is there anything i should improve?
there is no need to improve but i have request lps in nxt part write some armaan n rhea scene where they annoyed ridz from their naughtiness😊 n some romencve btw ridz n armaan😛😊😉


WISH U HAPPY NEW DEAR 😛😊🥳


Awww, so sorry! But everything has to come to an end one day..I guess this is the end to this FF too! Don't worry, you still have the other FF's to read. :)

I am not writing another part..but I might be writing on OS for Armaan and Rhea in the future! Armaan and Rhea are cutiepies,ey?! <3Thanks for liking the part.

Thanks for the comment.
Lots of love,
Mel.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

HI MEL.....FIRST OF ALL WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR😃.....NOW COMING TO THE PART....JUST LOVED IT....SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN👏....AWWW I AM GOING TO MISS THIS FF VERY BADLY.....



NOW ANSWERS TO UR QUESTIONS:

1)What is your favourite scene from the whole ff?

I really love the scean where Ridzy crave for ice-cream at 2AM and poor Armman have to take her to the ice-cream parlor...that sceans is soo cute..😃

2)Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?

Well....all My Armaan's dioalogues...(so soory can't choose...)😳
3)How did you come across dis ff?

while searching for good FF on AR...😃.

4)Is there anything i should improve?

sorry dear...i don'nt know nything abt writing😕....so I ca'nt say nything....for me u r Perfect......😊


LOTS OF LOVE
GEET


Thanks a lot for liking this part! I am touched. <3

Hey, the ice cream part is my favourite too. It's been pretty much copied from Salaam Namastey but still. LOL. Thanks for liking it..

Lots of love,

Mel.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KaSh_KaJen

that was amazing!! loved how you explained all the scenes...and i liked the scenes after rhea was born too...so cute! and the ending was really really nice!!


thanks a lot for updating!!!

1. my fave scene is the ridhima's sudden ice crave late in the night..and then they both go out for it

2. fav dialogues...hmm..all armaan's witty dialogues..one i remember clearly is "mein pehnadoo" or something along those lines..lol

3.yur ff was recommended in the ff section so saw it there n read it!
4. i don't think you need to impove...just keep it up!!

will really really miss this ff! but looking forward to ur other ffs..




Thank you ever so much! Really glad to hear your views on the last part and the whole FF itself.

Lotsa love!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkss

awesummm ending Melena ...

loved dis FF....AR r truely Inseparable....
u r an Outstanding Author :))
hope u write more of such fab FF's sooonnn :))
oh n btw....eagerly waiting 4 da next update of HPO....
do PM me next tym u update ur FF's tc...
lotsa love
JIA<3


Hi Jia!

Thank you so much...I agree :) AR are truly inseparable! No wonder they united in DMG too! Pshht! :D
Your comment makes me happy :) Nice to know that you liked the part/the whole FF.
Will be updating HPO asap! Exams were really bothering me so couldn't update.

Much love!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Armaan-KSG

RES RES RES

cantt wait to read this last update...but i gutta go out so when i get back, imma read with peace and give you a HUGE COMMENT..:)
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WOW, that was just beautiful!
Youve descrbied their journey so nicely, that i feel like re-reading this ff all over again and i shall do that :P loll
But loved the entire 9th month, it surely was speciall..going from the waxing to the birth of Rhea.
And i loved how to described AR's emotions and feelings in the entire FF. youre just awesome Mel. and I hope to always read your ff and dont forget to pm me :)
and oh yeah, i also loved how riddhima went through a normal pregnancy just with armaan being with her and his touch.....their love just leaves us speechless doesnt it?
Ill surely miss this ff alot!
And please do continue your other ffs soonn :)
and also, HAPPY NEW YEAR!


Hi Devu :)

Thank you so much for appreciating the part/FF! You were one of those people who always motivated me to write on...so thank you so much for that!

Ninth Month..I'm glad you liked it. I hope it met your expectations. Haha, the waxing thing..seems like the majority enjoyed that part. 😆 AR's emotions is something I've always observed deeply in DMG. That's probably why I believe in describing them clearly...

I will cont my other FF's as soon as I can! Thanks for all the love and appreciation throughout. 🤗

Happy new yr to you too!

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