AR FF:Inseparable||*Completed*Replies-PG58 Onwards

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey everyone!
I've been a silent reader of FF's on this forum for quite some time now and finally decided to put a test to my writing skills too. So, here I am with an AR Fanfic, which I hope you'll all like and appreciate. :) And oh, this FF is mainly on AR but it will also have AA and RM..There will be AN too but not just yet as I've got something planned for them later on.
The reason for this name for the FF is because I truly feel AR are INSEPARABLE!
Index
Part 1 - Pg 1
Part 2 - Pg 2
Part 3 - Pg 4
Part 4 - Pg 7
Part 5 - Pg 10
Part 6 - Pg 14
Part 7 - Pg 20
Part 8 - Pg 23
Part 9 - Pg 27
Part 10 - Pg 32
Part 11 - Pg 37
Part 12 - Pg 46
Part 13 - Pg 53
.::Inseparable::.
Part 1

As he looked at his beautiful wife sleeping peacefully, slightly sobbing, he felt as if he was the one to be blamed for her pain. The last 24 hours had been the worst time of their lives. He blamed himself for it. She lay there, her head in his lap, slightly shifting from her position. He could sense that she was awake now ' Awake already? She'd only been asleep for about half an hour. Yet, this half an hour had felt like forever as the clock moved at a snail's pace. He silently wished that he could just rewind the last 24 hours, and make sure everything was right. But, it was too late now.


The corridor of one of the most famous hospitals in India, Sanjeevani, was empty. The couple sat there with no movement, hardly blinking, just fighting their bad thoughts.


Why does it always happen to him? Every time there's some sort of happiness in his life, it doesn't take long for it to get ruined. And now, he's reached a stage in his life where he didn't have a clue on what to do. Only he knew how hard it'd been to control her in the last 24 hours. Her agony and pain broke him into pieces and made him feel like he had failed in being a good husband; as well as...a good father. He was on the verge of tears as the thoughts circled around in his head, when suddenly she jerked up at once.


Woman: Ar..Armaan..R...Rh..Rhea Armaan..Rhea..


Now she had gotten up and was crying hysterically as she remembered her daughter and was rushing towards the room where her little two year old daughter lay.


Armaan: Ridhima..Listen (Trying his best to stop her)Ridhima..meri baat toh..(Ridhima is running towards the room so he grabs her hand and made her stop in her position).


Ridhima: I want..(sobs)..I want her back Armaan..I want my daughter back..Armaan do (hiccups) some..something..Please..


Ridhima fell on the floor tightly holding on to Armaan's legs as she begged for her daughter's life.


Armaan: Listen (Getting her up) Ridhima..You cannot break down like this..We need to fight for her. We NEED to get her back..Please don't break down like this..


Armaan felt helpless as he didn't understand what to do. Tears were forming in his eyes as he saw Ridhima in such a state, but he had to stop them from coming out. He had to be strong. For Ridhima.


Ridhima: I want (hiccup)..I want her back Armaan..I WANT RHEA BACKK!! (tears strolling down her face)


Armaan: Okayy Ridhima..Suno, Rhea ko KUCH nahi hoga..Main hoon yaha pe. I'll make sure the operation goes fine. But..Ridhima..Promise me you'll be strong from now on. Promise?


Ridhima: Armaan..Lekin Rhea ko agar kuch hogaya toh.. (She looked up at him, crying again at her thought)


Armaan: I promise use KUCH nahi hoga..Don't you trust me?? (Holding her shoulders)Just stop crying..We're her parents..And we need to be strong. For her. (Wipes her tears away)


Ridhima: Hmm (sniffs and whispers slightly)


Just then doctor Shubhankar comes.


Dr Shubhankar: Armaan, Can you please come to my cabin please?


Armaan nodded, and told Ridhima to wait for him outside even though she insisted to go with him.


*Dr Shubhankar's Cabin*


Dr Shubhankar: Armaan,Rhea ke reports agaya hai.


Armaan wasn't ready for what was coming next. He just couldn't bare hearing it.


Armaan: Is she..Is she okay? (he said quietly, not looking at Shubhankar's face)


Dr Shubhankar: Actually, Armaan..Tum meri baat ghaur se sunna ..Please..Rhea ko...


*****


A very short part but an important one too as it will move the story forward. I think I'll continue if I get a good response as the more people appreciate, the more encouraged and motivated I'd feel to write on. Thank you! :)

Comments/Criticism, all welcome! 😳

Edited by TheMelody. - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you for the comments guys. 🤗I will definately PM you all when I update. I'll be updating very soon.
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A heart-wrenching but interesting start I must say. Continue soon!
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*Dr Shubhankar's Cabin*

Dr Shubhankar: Armaan,Rhea ke reports agaya hai.

Armaan wasn't ready for what was coming next. He just couldn't bare hearing it.

Armaan: Is she..Is she okay? (he said quietly, not looking at Shubhankar's face)

Dr Shubhankar: Actually, Armaan..Tum meri baat ghaur se sunna ..Please..Rhea ko...Rhea is in a very critical situation. She needs blood to be donated within 24 hours but the problem is that her group is completely different from yours and Ridhima's which is quite rare. Her blood group is O Negative.. (Shubhanker sighed)

Armaan waited patiently for him to continue..

Dr Shubhankar: And tumhe toh pata hi hoga ke Sanjeevani ke paas limited stock hi hota hai. Unfortunately, we do not have enough blood supply for Rhea and now it's up to you to find a donor. Trust me, I'm trying my best to find someone with the same blood group but it's proving to be very difficult. I think you should ask all your relatives and friends if they have the same blood group or if they know someone..

Armaan cuts him in between, "Kitna waqt hai uske paas?"

Dr Shubhankar sighed as he watched the father sitting in front of him, holding back his tears. It was very difficult for him to explain the situation to Armaan as he knew him personally. He finally gathered up the courage and spoke.. " 24 hours".

Armaan looked down at the floor, not being able to speak or move. He sat there for a while, and Shubhankar decided to let him be instead of pressuring him. Finally, when Armaan couldn't hold back his tears any longer, he whispered an 'excuse me' and left the cabin as Shubhankar looked at his retreating figure.

Armaan walked out of the cabin and saw Ridhima standing there, he hands clasped together, eyes tightly closed praying to the statue of God in front of her. He didn't have the courage to tell her..Atleast not yet. He needed to gather himself up first as he knew that the next 24 hours were not going to be easy for any of them. Armaan silently crept out of the corridor and went to his car. He stood there for what seemed like hours. Just thinking.Thinking about everything that had taken place a few hours ago.

*FLASHBACK*

"RIDHIMAAAAAAAA!!"

"HAAAAN Arahi hoon baba, Armaan, please, bas 5 minute aur!"

"Jaldi karoo! Mein aur Rhea bore ho rahein yaha!!"

Ridhima just laughed as she walked out of her room, dressed up in her favourite pink churidaar and walked down the stairs. As she was reached downstairs, Rhea and Armaan were out of sight. Hearing some noises from the kitchen she walked over and saw the cutest sight ever.

Rhea was sitting on the counter as Armaan held her from her little hips ensuring that she does not fall off, drinking from her milk bottle. She always loved how protective Armaan was about Rhea and herself too. When she was around him, she always felt this sense of security and protectiveness; it was an awesome feeling.

Armaan: Yeh tumhari Maa bhi na..Kitna waqt lagati hai tayar hone mein.
Rhea giggled at this, although she understood very little (owing to the fact that she was only 2 years old).

A: Kyaa?? Sachi mein..Use kya lagta hai, mere sivay use koi dekh ta hai kya? ' He laughed at this as Rhea chuckled again at her daddy.

"ARMAAAAN!"

Armaan and Rhea both turned around when they saw Ridhima standing there with her hands on her hips and mouth wide open. Armaan and Rhea looked at each other with the 'oh-oh' look on their faces.

A: Arey Ridhima, tum yaha..Hum toh bas tumhari hi baat kar rahe the
R: Mein janti hoon ' She said with an irritated look on her face
A: Uhh..woh..
R: Tumhe kya lagta hai, mujhe tumhare alawa koi dekh nahi sakta? ' Ridhima muttered smugly, with her hands folded.
A:Nahi ofcourse dekh sakta hain, lekin uski itni himat kaha jo meri Ridhima ko dekhe? ' Armaan laughed at this and Rhea joined him.
Ridhima just smiled and shook her head.
R: Acha ab chale??Der ho rahi hain..Aur wese bhi, raat ke 9 baje sirf tumhe shauk hota hai apni beti ki harr icha puri karne ka..
A: Toh isme kya hai? Agar meri beti ko park jaana hai toh jaana hai! Bas! Haina Rhea??- He questioned Rhea as she nodded excitedly.
R: Haan haan bas bigar ke rakh dena isko..bas, ab chalo.. ' Ridhima gave her usual 'fake' angry look to Armaan as he just shook his head at her 'nautanki'.
The three left the house, heading for the park nearby, not knowing what was yet to come..

****

Okaaaay, That's it for today. I'm guessing you guys were expecting something big to have happened to Rhea and initially, that is what I had planned but then I didn't want to stretch it too much so I decided to keep it simple.

So any guesses what ACTUALLY happened once they reached the park? Don't worry, I don't like to stretch things so you guys will get to know in the next part itself what happened to Rhea and all.

Hope you guys liked the part! Please do comment!😳

Mel :-)
P.S - One last thing, can you please add me as a buddy so that it is easier for me to PM everyone! Thanks! :D
Edited by TheMelody. - 14 years ago

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