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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaitreeluvKajen

OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod OhMYGod...I mean,I CAN'T say anything...It was,It was...It was..So...I mean,It was WOW!!!

W-O-W.
Really...I can't even say I Loved it...because I know whenever I will potray AR in my mind,this part will remain inside my heart..Its that Much WOW.
I am still in awe and shock and have already read the part 4-5 times..And Its Flawless.All the joys,excitement, memories, feelings,anticipation...Everything was So PERFECT,that I am speechless...Really Mel,What a Awesome Perfect OutStanding Fab Lovely WOWlicious gift to give me the New Year Morning!
A Perfect and touching End to a Perfectly Flawless FF.
*Updated*<3
|:Answers to your Questions:|
1. What is your favourite scene from this whole FF (something you can't forget)?
Ans: Um...Hard to choose..LUVED the whole FF,'cuz its just perfect!But still,I guess the scene where Armaan wears Ridz's nightie..That's SO unique..And Damn Hilarious..WOW WOW and ROFL ROFL!:D
2 Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?
Ans:Okay,I was laughing my heads off at this One..OMG SO DAMN Hilarious!!
It was about 3AM in the night when suddenly, the baby had decided to kick Ridhima's stomach cheekily. Armaan had jumped and shrieked "What in the name of God was that!" At this, Ridhima had burst out laughing because he had felt the kick.
Haha..So,Truly Armaan-ish.
3.How did you come across this FF?
Ans:Well,I love to browse through AR FFs.And Of course,When I saw it was written by you,I JUST knew that I somehow Have to read it!
4.Is there anything I should improve?
Ans:NNNOOO...Noo!Nothing!Loved this...Fantabulous and a Flawless FF!
Happy New Year!<3
Love,
Maitree


Hi Maitree!

Thank you so so so much for all the praises! Very glad to know it made your New Year's Day all the more special. You're appreciation touches my heart. Aww!

So good to hear your answers. It gives me an insight of what my readers actually liked in this FF. 😳 That nightie scene is one of my favourites too. :) Haha, that baby kicking scene, I remember seeing it somewhere..but I don't remember where. :S So, I just added it in LOL! Thanks for the comments!

Happy New year to you too!<3


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

tht was very nice part frnd.
I am very sad to as ths wndrful ff is now end.
Plz start anothr ff of AR
and whole ff is amazing, superb, excellent and very nice.
Thanx for the pm.
T.c.
Anuj.


Hey!

Thanks a lot for liking the FF and being an avid reader! It means a lot. I already have two AR ff's, so I don't think I will be starting any more soon. :P

You're welcome! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks, and same to you!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: salinashah

hey awsome sweety

plz update ur another FF
love u
salina


Hey Salina.
Thanks a lot! I will update the other FF asap.


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepreet

res...will edit in the mrng...:)


Waiting Preet. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: iceprincess101

Res will comment in the morning...


Edtied

hey this was a awesome part love this ff....Armaan and ridhima are so cute....


Hey! Thank a lot! I'm really pleased to know that you liked it! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow! you did a wonderful job with this fan fic! beautiful story :)



Awww..Thank you so much. I'm happy to know that you liked the story.

Mel.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HumaQuadri

WOW Damn cute.......it was the cutest ff....
I njoyed reading it.......
I really like ur writing style...amazing...im sad its ended but waiting for ur another ff....Great ending...
Thanx for pm


Hi Huma!

Thanks for liking my writing style..Thanks for liking the ending. 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chocolatefreak

heyyyy mel

first of all im really realy sorry for not replying, and yup thanku so much for the pms
and ya coming to ur ff well in one word it was perfect, a very beautiful beautiful concept, and u really beautifully penned it down, i must say ur an awesome writer, nd i really really luvd Armaan, u made me fall in luv wid him all ovr again, u brought tears of joy in my eyes, um glad i got the chance to be a part of such a beautiful piece
plz plz keep writing
nd thanku once again

with lots nd lots ov luv
Rida🤗


Hey Rida!

It's okay, and you're welcome! Thanks for appreciating my writing..although there are many other talented writers out in THE Fanfiction Forum. Armaan..You can never get tired of this man! He's a gem. I love writing on him. :) I will continue writing until AR keep inspiring and intriguing me.

Lots of Love back to you!
Mel.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: uhima

i was searching a good xciting AR ff so i chked this ff n instantly i luvd it u rock fren i luv the cute AR hjagdas n romance


Hi there! Thanks a lot! Aww, glad you liked AR's romance/jhagda's!

Take care!

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