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-Deepshikhaa-

@-Deepshikhaa-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: TheMelody.

Awww, your comment is like heaven! Haha! No, on serious note, thanks a lot for the appreciating my efforts!

Thanks for considering the part perfect. It makes me feel contended with what I've presented to you guys. I feel ecstatic! I agree..this part was huge and pretty much the main part so it is the highlight for sure!! Wow, I feel so honoured that you chose my FF out of the other great ones out there. I agree Sahar & Rabia's OS's are awesome! I am reader of their work too. Love their work!

Trust me, I would have continued if I had the time. But now I feel this is the perfect way to end it. There could not have been a better way of ending this FF in my POV. Awww whenever you re-read this FF leave a comment by to let me know you've read it! I would feel really happy to know that. :)

LMFAO, you liked that susu dialogue? I was laughing whilst writing it too..but I was hoping you all don't find it lame. :$

Oho, I liked you suggestion of the hot scenes. Mhhhmm..will work on that in my other FF's. 😉 This has been more of cute/light hearted FF so hot romance wouldn't really fit in. Nevertheless, I will def look into your suggestion! Awwwwww, new year's gift? From me? Yep, you can consider the part as yours, haha! I am so so so glad to know you loved it to such an extent. I seriously can't tell you how you made my day!:D

Epilogue? Hmmm..I would have loved to give you guys that but, I don't think it will be able to match up to this part. For me, this is the end to the FF. I hope you'll understand..But I'll definitely write a few OS' related to this FF! So you can surely read them..

Thank you so much for the touching comment! I am so pleased to know you liked it so much! It made my day! =)

You are most welcome Mel :)

Yep Dude , Who won't consider ,Your FF the best Hun ? Koi Hai kya ?

Pakad ke maarenge !!😆

Ok Ok ! Those "HOT" Scenes was just a Joke , But If you want you can add More HOT scenes in your other FF & OS I don't mind actualy No one would !! 😳

Yep Dude It was a New Year Gift for me . Definitely. LOL! Thanks ..I am Consedering this part as mine LMFAOO!! *JOKE JOKE *

Ok ya I understand , This is surely the PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT ENDING , No doubt :) Yep yep I understand :) ... Its Ok ..

And Ya I will Leave comment wheneva I read this FF again 😃

Welcome Again! :)

U know acctualy , I am gald that I found this FF... And Read it 😃

Truly Heaven !

Thanks A ton for quoating ! :)

Devi_Bulbul KSGian! 😉

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ambryn

@ambryn

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#402

Very very nice... loved the whole concept

Write more and please pm me...

Love,

Ambryn

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perfectsmile

@perfectsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#403

Hie,
wow!!! another beautiful journey of AR. I read everything in a go and so I m here for commenting.

Its simple yet amazing. The story is so cute and pleasantly serene. Works like these make everyone miss AR so much *sigh*

Reading the first part, I thought its going to be a tragic plot followed by patch up, but you caught me off guard completely. That was so unexpected, yet welcomed. and the most amazing period, their steps towards parenthood. Beautifully described!! Kudos to you.

Sad that it ended. I know how difficult it gets to manage the updates due to lack of time. But glad that we got a beautiful piece of work.

Keep writing!

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#404

hey! I just read this all in one go!!! it was amazing!! 😊

keep writing more! 👍🏼

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Tina

@Tina_moonchild

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#405

a very beautifully written ff.....and very well presented👏
i loved the salaam namaste part a lot as its 1 of my fav movie😃
really cute ff !!😊

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SoniKudi_KASH

@SoniKudi_KASH

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#406

Really nice story loved Ar they are soooo cute

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Laizu Khan

@smiley_lizi

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#407

Too good FF yaar. I love it so much.

I loved how you described 9 months of Riddhima's pregnancy. Loved to see AR as parents. I loved one dialogue so much when Riddhima thinks about Armaan that how much more sides of Armaan is remaining to see by her(when Armaan cries hearing news about Riddhima's pregnancy).

I knew about this FF from the link you have posted in your another FF His Perfect Obsession.

I loved the scene where Rhea said to Armaan that now Mom will win in the game and Armaan says see how I bring her to this room again.

Another scene I loved when Riddhima misunderstands Armaan but Armaan comes back to sort out with her.

Edited by laizu - 14 years ago

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Pooja

@ObodroKargosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#408

Hey mel,

had this FF on my bookmark list since such a long time, finally read it all 😳

this was amazing!!! I love how you wrote those 9 months, those were amazingly portrayed :)

I always wanted to read an FF where Ridz is pregnant and Armaan is handling all her tantrums and pampering her 😆😳

I wish there was more to this FF, but it's okay :) I understand that it's difficult to manage two FFs together 😳

Rhea is just a darling 😳 I love all the scenes with her :) I wish there more at the end 😳