os:gang back together updt prt 67 on pg 166

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Ritu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#701

superb annie.....day by day ur grtting better👏

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Posted: 15 years ago

#702

really lovely update!!!👏 keep it up!! sorry 4 late!!😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#703

hey guys here the update goes
but first of all
mujhe bohot zyada complains hain sab se
guys mera aik itna bada hectic schedule hota hai.........aur main uss mein se updates ka tym nikalti hoon...........do u know mere bro ki wedding aa rahi hai..........aur shaadi keh ghar mein hazaar kaam hote hain..........aur main uun kamo mein se inn updates keh liye time nikalti hoon........but........many of u even dont bother to come and comment here.......so why am i updatin???..........sorry main rude nahi hona chahti thi.......but no option is left.......i was just thinking keh why am i updating if readers are not interested..........if i am not lazy for updates.........so why are u all lazy for ur comments........yeh kya baat hui..........is it really fair guys.....why do i waste my mind......i am really disapointed.......and feeling like crying.......so agar aisa hi chalta raha........toh phir forget this os.....main aur nahi likhoo gi😭..........i mean main kyun likhoo yaar.........agar viewers koh feedback dena bhi pasand nahi hai.........shayad yahi acha hai keh main updates hi naa doo😭..........i am literally crying over my mehnat.....thank u soo much non feedbackers..........thank u for disapointing me.........😭.....as usual.........
ok so here the update goes
only for them who read and comment
my friends
here is the update just for u
or otherwise i was soo disapointed keh mera likhne ka bhi dil nahi kar raha tha.......par main feedback dene walo koh nirash nahi karoo gi....love u😳
ok so lets come to my os
so as u know
fathers day!!!!!!!
so now kids in their room
everyone is making card
neha is making for sam
preeti for benji
pranam for mayank
but anjali is making three cards
pranam:oye anjali..........yeh kya kar rahi ho.......tum teen cards bana rahi ho....par kyun
anjali:tumhe kya..........tum apna kam karo
pranam:batao na........please
anjali:woh........actually.......yeh dono cards samrat uncle aur benji uncle keh liye hain
preeti:kyun
anjali:kyunke samrat uncle aur benji uncle bhi mujhe bilkul dad ki tarah hi pyar karte hain
three of them:awwww
then a grup hug of the kids
now cut to mayur
nupur waking mayank
nupur:mayank....utho utho na.........jaldi karo
mayank:kya hua nupur.........meri neend na disturb karo
nupur:lagta hai keh tumhara bukhar uter gaya hai..........tabhi aisa behave kar rahe ho.......mayank utho na please
mayank sits
mayank:kya hua
nupur:nahi pehle tum batao tabyet kaisi hai ab
mayank:sir mein ab bhi dard hai
nupur:kya..........
she feels his forehead
nupur:matha abhi bhi utna hi garam hai........aik minute ruko main tumhari dawai le kar ayi
nupur brings a syrup
mayank:ummhumm.....mein yeh syrup nahi piyun ga
nupur:kyun
mayank:bohot karwa hai
nupur:BY God............agar pranam neh dekh liya na toh phir ho gayi tumhari bisti......chalo ab jaldi seh yeh pee lo
mayank:nahi nupur.........please
nupur:peena toh pade ga......warna bukhar kaise utre ga......
mayank:kaise bhi...........par iss syrup se nahi..........
nupur:mayank...........ab mujhe gussa aa raha hai.......bacho ki tarah zid mat karo aur yeh syrup pee lo
mayank puts a hand on his mouth
nupur:theek hai bachoo.........main abhi bacho koh jaa kar tumhari woh exam wali baat bata doo gi
mayank:magar kyun
nupur:agar tum yeh dawai nahi piyo ge toh
mayank:acha....ab toh peene pade gi
nupur pours it into a spoon and feeds it to mayank
mayank:ummmmm.............itni gandi thi
nupur:janti hoon............magar doctor neh kaha hai na.......
mayank:urghhhh...........h8 doctors
nupur:love u
mayank:love u too
now cut to sajan
samrat:pata nahi yeh bache kya plan kar rahe hain
gunjan:kis liye
samrat:tumhe nahi pata
gunjan:nahi toh
samrat:mazak mat karo chashmish
gunjan:main mazak nahi kar rahi
samrat:acha tum ne aaj bauji koh phone kia tha
gunjan:han.....kia tha .....toh
samrat:kya kaha
gunjan:yeh kaisa sawal hai.......aam batein ki thi........tum kitne ajeeb sawal poch rahe ho samrat
samrat:kya........tumne unhe wish nahi kia
gunjan:kis cheez par wish karna tha
samrat:chashmish....tum bhool gayi kya
gunjan:main kya bhooli hoon
samrat:kuch nahi main jaa raha hoon
gunjan:kahan?
samrat:bhadh mein
in a frustrated way he leaves
gunjan:awww samrat phir naraaz ho gaya........par yeh gaya kahan
now cut to benia
benji:dia tumhe kuch yaad hai
dia:han
benji in a excited way:kya
dia:aaj kam wali bayi koh paghaar deni hai
benji:nahi yaar...........uske ilawa
dia:nahi toh..........tumhe kya yaad hai
benji:uff ho...........aaj ravi uncle ka phone aya tha kya
dia:han
benji:kya keh rahe the
dia:sab ka hal chal pooch rahe the...........kyun
benji:tumne unhe wish nahi kia
dia:kyun...........wish kyun karna tha
benji:tum kuch bhool toh nahi rahi na
dia:no
benji:aik baar phir soch lo
dia:kya sochoo kuch bhi nahi bholi main
benji:ufff............bye main jaa raha hoon
dia:kahan
benji:bhadh mein
dia:have fun😆

ok guys here is the schedule of the special parts
sajan special on friday
mayur special on saturady
and benia special on sunday

thanks for reading
precap:surprise khoola
do rate and comment
love,
annie

Edited by annie98 - 15 years ago

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gurpreet

@preety88

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#704

i always comment on ur update and always will...and congrats that ur bro is getting married......coming to update.....it was mindblasting....i cant wait for the next update........cont soon

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503046

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Posted: 15 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: preety88
i always comment on ur update and always will...and congrats that ur bro is getting married......coming to update.....it was mindblasting....i cant wait for the next update........cont soon

thanks alot preeti.....i know u have always commented..but some readers want me to pm them...but dont bother to comment

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#706

very cute update.....i like your os's cuz theyre so simple and sweet....keep updating!.....naina

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#707

Wow mind blowing update its really good I love anjali most intelligent from the lot making card for all of them mayank was scared for change, sammy anger was wonderful wow gunji ko jhoot bolna aa gaya, benia were cute too do continue soon

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Jennifer

@jennifer1993

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#708

waiting for the next ones

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#709

Annie yar itna gusa .naraz mat ho baby .dekho ma to hamesha comment kaRTI HO KU KA TUM LIKHTI HI ITNA ACHA ho ka kuch kha bagair rha hi nahi jata .Chalo ab aj ki Update ki bat kara its TOO GOOD👍🏼

wao baro ka bad bachoo ka group hug what an idea sir jee.

Or han ma bohat bechani sa MAYUR special ka intezar kar rhai ho so update soon An d Be Haapy.and COOl.