os:gang back together updt prt 67 on pg 166

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now guys this has a bit different storyline
now the os begins with a phone conversation betveen mayank and dia
mayank:hello
dia:hello mayank how are you?
mayank:main to theek hoon tum batao 3 saal baad mujhe yaad kia shadi bhi karli aur aik baar bhi mumbai nahi aayi waise main aur gunjan bhi tumhare aur benji ke yahan lonavala ane hi wale the aur phir aj tak preeti(dia's two year old daughter) koh sirf tasveeron main hi dekha hai aur sunao preeti kaisi hai
dia:bilkul theek hai bas peechle dino isse thoda sa bukhar tha magar(mayank cuts)
mayank:kya...........bukhar ab theek toh hai na woh doctor ko dikhaya dawai li(dia cuts)
dia:mayank relax ab woh theek hai
mayank:phewwwwwwww
dia suddenly seees nupur
dia:nupurrrrrrrrrrr
uus ke haath se phone gir jaata hai
jab tak dia wahan pohonchti hai nupur ja chuki hoti hai
(she shouts)nupurrrrrrrrrrrrrr
benji comes rushingly and nupur too comes back
benji:kya hua dia
benji:nupurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr(he is shocked)
nupur:ya exactly thats my name but apki yeh biwi itni zor se mera nam chilayi please its embarassing
benji:oh i am sorry actually humari aik dost thi nupur oos shakal aur awaz bilkul apse milti thi
leikin ab woh iss duniya mein nahi iss liye dia itni sentimental ho gayi
nupur:oh sorry
nupur leaves
dia:benji dekho woh hamari nupur
thi
benji:nahi woh hamari nupur nahi thi nahi thi woh hamari nupur hamari nupur humein dekhte hi un dekha nahi kar sakti
benji :ab ghar chalo
preeti:papa mama ko kya hua
benji:kuch nahi beta woh uun ko ap ki masi ki yaad a gayi dekhna woh ghar ja kar bilkul theek ho jaye gi
now cut to nupur's house
nupur's pov : aj main bohot khush hun benji aur dia ki shaadi ho gayi iss ka matlab hai gunjan aur samrat ki bhi................aur uday bhaiya................mayank kaisa hoga...................woh mujhe bohot miss karta hoga na.........kahin oos ne shadi...........nahi nahi yeh kaise ho sakta hai.....................nupur...nupur yeh sab tu kyun soch rahi hai maine 3 saal pehle ye socha tha na keh main iss bare mein nahi sochoon gi..........................kaash main oon sab se mil sakti.

guys that was my koshish on os
please rate and comment and if u like it please comment i know it is small but if u will like it then i will update it tommorow inshaAllah
part1 on pg 1
part 2 on pg 3
part 3 on pg 4
part 4 on pg 6
part 5 on pg 8
part 6 on pg 9
part7 on pg 10

part 8 on pg 11
part 9 on pg 12
part 10 on pg 13
part10 on pg 14
part11 on pg 15
part 12 on pg 17
part 13 on pg 19
part 14 on pg 21
part 15 on pg 21
part 16 on pg 24
part 17 on pg 25
part 18 on pg 27
part 19 on pg 29
part 20 on pg 30
part 21 on pg 31
part 22 on pg 34
part 23 on pg 36
part 24 on pg 38
part 25 on pg 39
part 26 on pg 41
part 27 on pg 43
part 28 on pg 45
part 29 on pg 47
part 30 on pg 49
part 31 on pg 53
part 32 on pg 55
part 33 on pg 57
part 34 on pg 60
part 35 on pg 64
part 36 on pg 66
part 37 on pg 71
part 38 on pg 75
part 39on pg 78
part 40 on pg 81
part 41 on pg 83
part 42 on pg 85
part 43 on pg 89
part 44 on pg 91
part 45 on pg 93
part 46 on pg 96
part 47 on pg 101
part 48 on pg 103
part 49 on pg 106
part 50 on pg 109
part 51 on pg 119
part 52 on pg 122
part 53 on pg 125
part 54 on pg 128
part 55 on pg 132(sajan special)
part 56 on pg 136(mayur special)
part 57 on pg 139(benia special)
part 58 on pg 141
part 59 on pg 143
part 60 on pg 146
part 61 on pg 149
part 62 on pg 152
part 63 on pg 154
part 64 on pg 156
part 65 on pg 159
part 66 on pg 161

Edited by annie98 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome OS dear!

do continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

precap guys please read
precap:kya hai nupur ka raaz
kyun chupa rahi hai woh apni pehchaan
kyun nahi milna chahti woh sab se
mayank's accident
mayank hospitalised