os:gang back together updt prt 67 on pg 166

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Posted: 14 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: mehak03
awwww...annie!!...why are so sad!😭..dont worry honey WE ALL LOVE UR FF and U ALSO!..😛

aur main tu jab b parhti hon comment karti hon, bcz i know who they boost confidence!...

ok so the last two updates were AMAZING...especially sam.."ascending order main dantey hain"...LOL..

and loved dia's last dialogue.."have fun"..LOL..

and loved how anjali made three cards..awww...i just love these kids...😳😳

ok i have a suggestion if u dont mind...u can also make up a scene where mayank and gunjan get really hurt seeing that children were lying to them and not studying and then they dont scold, they get really hurt and children say sorry to them..that would be adorable..include if u can...and waiting for ur couple specials...😃

awsum se bhi awsum idea yaar

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Jessie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#722

Awesome update Annie!!!!!👏
Anjali is so sweet....
Loved MAYUR, SAJAN , BENIA scenes.....

Don't get sad Annie....everyone loves your os/ff...mera kal exam hai....but then too i took time to read coz i really like it.....😊

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#723

awesome update.

very sweet n simple.............n also mindblowing.

waiting 4 nxt part.

continue soon.

thks 4 pm.

congrts tht ur bro's getn married.

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503046

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Posted: 14 years ago

#724

hey guys here the update goes
so as u know
mayank was ill and on the bed ri8 now
nupur and samrat are in one room
samrat lost in his thoughts
and nupur is thinking wat to do now
nupur:pata nahi ab kya kare
samrat comes out of his thoughts
samrat:kya hua nupur
nupur:kya bataaoo samrat.......tumhe pata hai na......doh dino se mayank koh bukhar hai aur......mayank ka bukhar kam hone ki bajaye badhta jaa raha hai
samrat:kya matlab.......tumne uska temperature last time kab check kia tha
nupur:aaj subah jab dawai dene gai thi
samrat:toh kya hua
nupur:temperature kam hone ki bajaye badha hua tha
samrat:kya.........tum mayank koh dawaiyan toh de rahi ho na saari
nupur:han........magar kuch farak nahi padh raha samrat.....
samrat:acha......pehle tum relax karo han..........aise koi masla solve nahi hota
nupur:kaise relax karoo samrat
samrat:nupur.....meri baat suno........tumhare relax karne se bhi kaafi problems solve ho jayegi
nupur:ab kya karoo samrat main
samrat:dekho........tum tension mat lo
nupur:kaise na loon samrat
samrat:acha.......ham kisi aur doctor koh chek karwa lein ge yaar.......u relax
nupur:sab theek ho jayega na
samrat:han
nupur:paka na
samrat:han baba paka
nupur leaves
now cut to mayank's room
mayu and shilpa
mayank:maa main sach keh raha hoon.......maine dawai khai thi
shilpa:jhoot......
mayank:main sach keh raha hoon maa.......waise aap koh kaise pata
shilpa:bohot simple hai
mayank:woh kaise
shilpa:jab pranam ya anjali koi jhoot bolte hain........toh tu jhat se kaise pakarta hai
mayank:uun keh chehre keh expressions dekh kar
shilpa:theek ussi tarah mujhe bhi tere expressions se pata chal jata hai
mayank:waise maa
shilpa:han bol
mayank:maine sach much mein kal dawai nahi khai thi
shilpa holds mayank's ear
shilpa:tu ne phir se mujhse jhoot bola mayu
mayank:ahhh........maa chodo dard ho raha hai
shilpa:arre wah......kya baat hai.......main konsa tujhe maza de rahi hoon......main bhi toh tujhe saza hi deh rahi hoon
now cut to kids
preeti:sab kuch tayar hai na
neha:han
pranam:toh jaa kar apne apne paa koh bulaye
anjali:han chalo
neha:chalo
now cut to mayank's room
anjali and pranam enter
mayank:hmmm.......toh poore din mein papa ki yaad ab jaa kar ayi hai....
pranam:papa..........ab kaise ho ap
mayank:main theek hoon........tum dono ki exam preperation kaisi jaa rahi hai
anjali:bravo
mayank:very good.........aur pranam tumhari
pranam:han meri bhi achi jaa rahi hai
mayank:acha woh sab chodo....(pranam interupts)
pranam:main abhi samrat uncle koh doctor oh bulane keh liye kehta hoon
mayank:kyun kya hua
pranam:papa.......pehli baar apne.......parhai ka issue mora.....kyun
mayank:arre main toh pooch raha tha keh tum dono yahan kaise
anjali:woh ham apko lene aye the
mayank:kahan jaana hai
anjali:aap chalo toh sahi
now they cover mayank's eyes
and take him
now cut to sammy
neha comes running
neha:dad......dad..........dad.......
samrat:kya hua neha..........ab kisse dant kha kar aa rahi ho
neha:uff ho dad.......bas aap mere saath chalo
samrat:kyun kya hua
neha:uff dad chalo toh sahi
samrat:magar kahan
neha:ghabrao mat main apko kidnap nahi kar rahi😆
neha holds samrat's hand
and then blindfolds him..
neha:ab chalo......aur theek se chalna warna main stairs seh girra doo gi
samrat:yeh achi beti hai yaar......baap koh dhamki deh rahi hai😆
now cut to benji
benji lost in his thoughts
preeti comes from backside and screams in benji's ears
preeti:papa!!!!!!
benji is shocked and scared unable to speak
benji gets stable and speaks
benji:preeti beta.....maine abhi na hi apni wasiat banayi hai ......issi liye mera heart fail karane ki nakam koshish na karo samjhi😆.......
preeti:oh so sad na papa
benji:kis baat par sad ho.......heart fail nahi hua iss baat par ya phir maine wasihat nahi banayi iss baat par😆
preeti:kuch nahi papa....ap bas chalo....
benji:magar kahan
preeti:chalo toh sahi
now cut to the kids room
mayank sammy and benji three of them are blind folded
wen they open their fabrics
they see a beautiful collage of their and kids pix
mayank:guys yeh sab....
four of them:happy fathers day!!!!!!!!!!

ok guys that was enuf for today
hope u liked it
precap:sajan special(get ready sajanians....fasten ur seat belts......get ready to go under the deepness of romance....)😉
thanks for reading
love,
annie

Edited by annie98 - 14 years ago

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Shruti_0505

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Posted: 14 years ago

#725

resssssssss

shollee for the late edit

bahut hi mazedar part tha

is part ke dialogues need a spl mention

neha:ghabrao mat main apko kidnap nahi kar rahi

neha:ab chalo......aur theek se chalna warna main stairs seh girra doo gi

samrat:yeh achi beti hai yaar......baap koh dhamki deh rahi hai

main bhi aise hi dhamki deti hun😆😆😆😆

benji:preeti beta.....maine abhi na hi apni wasiat banayi hai ......issi liye mera heart fail karane ki nakam koshish na karo samjhi😆.......
preeti:oh so sad na papa
benji:kis baat par sad ho.......heart fail nahi hua iss baat par ya phir maine wasihat nahi banayi iss baat par

wah wah wah wah

i love the parent child relation that u have portrayed

hats off

am waiting for the mayur spl part

luv

shruti

Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 14 years ago

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#726

heyyyy annie
super update
lovely..
n precap seems mre of a super duper hitt..
so cont soooooon
n
thnx 4 d pm

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Gul

@DhanakZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#727

Der aye durust aye good update dear .Waiting for mayur special.Thanks for PM

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#728

tht was really super duper awesome update i like it how kids give there dads a surprise

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Mystery

@desiresoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#729

aweosmeeeee updt loved it cnt wait for nxt update contineu soon

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#730

Wow annie just loved the part its really beautiful I loved it completely Ok I will divide it in 2 sections

Best Hilarious parts according to ranks:🤣🤣

1. Neha saying she will not kidnap samrat and was threatening to push him Samrat was like acchi beti hai baap ko dhamka rahi (mind blowing part made me rofl 🤣)🤣🤣🤣🤣

2. Mayank said parahi choro and pranam was like call a doctor as pa is not well🤣🤣

3. Benji preety discussion🤣

Best emotional part

1. Kids took all of them to their room and decorated with pictures for fathers day

2.samrat and Nupur concern for mayank ill health and shilpa scolding Mayank like kid loved them

I just loved it brilliant job keep it up