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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#801

*Edited*

You made a beautiful update, this time. And I am really sorry for not leaving my comments on the last few chapters, I have read them all though. 😳

Subtle, emotional and remarkably penned down!

Please don't mind but there are slight errors in the update, correct them if you get time to revise.

Continue soon.

-Kanky

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#802

R
edited
awesome update
so mayank left 4 US
mayank now care 4 nupur
liked mayank's caring part
mayur moment
waiting 4 next part

Edited by .rumki. - 14 years ago

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#803

Rula diya na?

Aur woh bhi mujhe?😲

I am not in a state to say anything right now. You know of my nausea.

It was an awesome update.

Detailed comments baad mein..Remind me..

GN!

Edited by ak12 - 14 years ago

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#804

Is emotional ko aur emotional banane me sharam nahi aati????

RES

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#805

Awww...That was so sad !! :( The explanation does make sense! I havea feeling...shes gonna forgive him :)

Cont. soon!

-Mansi

(PS- Update My journey also please...I sincerly love that story :) )

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#806

Gosh, Ruchi you just killed me with this one!

Like Akki said rula diya =(((

The update was so emotional and touching. You've always a had a talent of portraying spot on emotions with your wriitng Ruchi and you've done that brilliantly today. This was so beautifully written.

I'm really not in the state to say anymore right now Ruchi.

I'll write a proper one soon.

Continue soon.

Love ya <3

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#807

nice one dear do continue soon

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#808

heyyy ruchi..

really nice update

but yahan kyu stop kiya??

will be waiting to know wat happens next

do continue soon

n thanx for pm

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#809

OMG!! 😳eyelock 😲Letter😭

The letter was really.... wow... I feel bad for Mayank... he's going away just for her hapiness.. He can't stand seeing hatred for him in her eyes he loves too much... Even though he deserves the hatred i felt bad for him... it was a really sad letter i think this must be one of the saddedst parts of the whole ff.. U left it at a cliffhanger i wonder what Nupur will do know will she stop him or not... A part if me is saying eys whiel other no... Amazing update once again... Update soon again... Can't wait too see whats happening...

"Maybe this is destiny ..broken ends cant be united again!"

I loved this line... 😳😭

Btw is the next chapter the last??... It seemed like the last one or the one before the last one....

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#810

hmm..what to say yaar..the lettee ofcourse was his heart which poured out all his feelings......but frankly speaking...i cant 4give him now also....but as am selfish...anything 4 mayur.........

Edited by achoose - 14 years ago