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Natasha

@OddiYulle

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Posted: 14 years ago

#781

Ruchi ! Gr8 Update! I liked this Part! Awwie Finally we had a small Father - Son Moment. A Party ?!? and Nupur is in the perfect place , where she fits perfectly. Mayanks Arms😳 Update soon and Thanks For the Pm.

Natasha<3

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Beet

@Beet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#782

Amazing part Ruchi!

Very well written! And well this is just becoming more and more difficult to decide with each update! but I'm dying to see the way ypu take it! You are a seriously amazing writer Ruch! The updates are brilliant!

Awesome job! All the best!

Love

Daania

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#783

Ruchi amazing part loved it last part of mayur thanks 4 d pm hun

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supercool3

@supercool3

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#784

awesome update...👍🏼

i love the moment between Mayank and his son... sooo cute😆😳

and i also love that Mayank is determined to keep his family together.. and the fact that he wants Nupur in his life...😳

but am just sooo curious to know if he'll achieve it or not... cuz Nupur can't just forgive him like that😲🤔

update soon 😊

Edited by supercool3 - 14 years ago

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#785

another touching update..ruchs its ur story and i dont have any say in which u wanna take the story forward...but 4 some reason i really want mayur to be together at the end..i know he shouldnt be forgiven 4 his deeds..but his intention behind the rape was something else...not physical attraction..he wasnt in a proper frame of mind neither in his senses..though it doesnt reduce his punishment...but he has already got it...i find the rape was rather the frustration of not getting nupur's love in return...where as somehow i feel he always had loved her...4m the very begining of their college life..i dont think i m making any sense so better i stop it right here.. continue whenever u can🤗

Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 14 years ago

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#786

Finally u commented Palluuuuu... I am so happy :D :D

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Marium

@maloo19

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#787

beautifully written

i just love dis ff of urz

Marium

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#788

ruchi ...........the update was amazing as always ........nd i really am confused whethe nupur should forgive mayank or not .......yeah its true dat i want MN to be together in the end but at the same tim e i cant forget the crime commited by mayank nd nupur's sufferings .. but it is also true dat mayank repented for the sins he committed nd now he has become a good person....he has realised his mistake nd now wants his wife nd son bak in his life but this still doesnt lessen his sins ........i am actually confused ............. but after all you are the writer nd watever descion you take reagarding the story i am with you in it ..............really eager to know nupur's reaction after she falls in his arms ........... loved the update lots .........do continue soon ...........