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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#821

Very emotional n nice update..

waiting for next part

do continue soon

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#822

very touchingg updatee....
feelingg sooo sad For Mayuuu...
plzzz jaldiii mila dooo inko...aur kitna Intazaaarrr.....?

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#823

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!wonderful update

u write vey well....hats off to u

u describe mayank feelings vry well

emotional n heart wrenching part

waiting eagerly fr nxt update n tnx fr pm

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#824

part 15-

wow

ending was best

nupur in mayank's arms

wow

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#825

Awwie Poor Mayu , But as Usual a fantastic Part

Natasha <3

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#826

its reaalllly awesum

for the first time ....u know how much i hate mayank.....but my eyes were moist whn i was reading the letter part....lovely update....really loved it

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#827

Edited:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1431823&PID=34794631&#34794631

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#828

Ruchiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

i m katti with u
u made me cry
my eyes became teary after reading this update
plzzzzzzz yaar mere mayank ko maaf kar do
i cant c my mayur in this way
i want my to c my happy mayur
bass aur kuch nehi chati
mujhe meri mayur lauta do ruchi
plzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#829

One more thing- i forgot to add.
plz apart my mayur
if u r really planning to apart then just let me know in which part u gonna to do it
i wont read read this update.

because i cant c them alag alag

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#830

ruchi ........the update made me cry ..........you have expressed mayank's feelings soo well through the letter .......i wont deny dat i am feeling bad for mayank ............but i really doubt nupur ll forgive him so easily ......... cantwait to read the next part .............do update soon .........nd is this FF nearing its end ??....... loved the update lots .........