AR ShortStory: One Hug [Part 4 Pg 18]

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naina.sweety

@naina.sweety

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#51

heyy sis!!!
how r u?
awesome work on both part 1and 2!!!
sorry couldn't comment earlier...connection is really bad!!! 😔..
anywayzz gr8 parts!!!
continue soon!!
thnxxx 4 the pm!!!
luv ya ❤️..tc...byeeeeeeee 🤗

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disco_diva

@disco_diva

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Awwwwww its such an adorable part countinue soon thx for the PM

_amna

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mins97

@mins97

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

that was a wonderful update do continue soon!!

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Hawtiilicious

@Hawtiilicious

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

wow,interestin and pleasin at the same time 😆 but a little fast-paced, it seemed like every other paragraph went to a new class. try and add more drama to it and it will hit the number of views in no time ;)

Everythin else ,all good *cool*

Edited by Hawtiilicious - 15 years ago

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@RKDramebaaz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

hey mary
srry even today,,,,wll leave in a min,,,but read ur parts..
omfg...muahh...i just loved them
tooooo kool..
just sad tht its not gong to be AR in dmg anymre.... :(
but i got kash...so its ok..!
anywyz...hve summerskool..so no tym for IF.....
m sooo srry...we hvnt tok since soooo long...
but wll try my best again
k byeee
love u
Prachi...oops aarzoo

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Alisha

@shininggal2008

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

awwww awesoem part mary... hmm waiting for date now :D

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Parneet

@ParneetS

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

awwww.... it was cute... i loved it... it was very simple n straight forwarded part yet very sweet and cute.. :)
thanxxx plzzzz update their romantic dinner date.. ;)