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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very beautiful concept do update soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Maryam,
gr8 concept!
both parts r awesome....waiting for AR date!😉
continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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buddy i edited ma comment
go check it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
niceee part yaar.....
waiting 4 their dinner oops date...hehe...
loved it....great job...
update superrrrrrrrrrr soooon...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyya sweety...nice story.....luv.it......pm me wid the update if possible.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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dang mary! great story, continue soon
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Heyyyyyyy guysssssss........ thx a lot.... i myself thought it was quiet boring...its so amazing that my simple thoughts are so loved by everyone... i am again back with the next part.😃 so read and plz give me ur preciouse comments...i really love them..it motivate me to write for ONLY FOR U ALL... so plz plz comment and press the like botton...



As the bus stops in the parking lot of the hospital. Everybody got out and went to the Reception. There senior Dr.Willam told all the doctors to got home and report to duty tomorrow at sharp 11. He also called Dr. Malik to his cabin.

Rahul and Muskaan went to the locker room and waved bye to Armaan and Riddhima.

"Umm....So i'll come to pick you up at 8?," asked Armaan😃

"sure...I'll be ready," said Riddhima😊

"hmmm..ok..then...need to go...bye," said Armaan

"Yeah...byeee...tc," said Riddhima and went to the locker room


Rahul, Muskaan and Riddhima got home by 6:30.( They all have different cars..so they all came home alone)

They ate some snacks and went to rest.

Riddhima went to her room and got fresh and changed. After that she fall on the bed. She was about to fall asleep when her hand touched something heavy and flat. When she opened her eyes, she saw that it was her laptop.

She open her laptop and log in on facebook and msn. On facebook nobody was online, so she checked msn. There she saw her best friends online, Kunal and Simran.

She almost tell them everything; but the best part about their friendship is trust. Kunal, Simran and Riddhima have never seen each other even though they live in the same state, just different cities.

They are doing a conference.

R: Hello!! How r u both?
S: Hiiiiiii..I am fine..How are u? and how was ur trip?
K:I am gud sweety..how are u?
R:I am fine too simran... trip..umm(riddhima remembers the hug and then the 'dinner') it was awesome
R:I am cool kunal so whats up?
S: hmm..madam..if i am not wrong then u went on a medical trip not a field trip... so how was it 'awesome'?
K:ohh simran..you dont understand...ARMAAAN was there on the trip😉
K:Nothings up ridz..what about u?
R:😳 well because there were lots of kids(liar liar pants on fire😆😆😆)
R:Kunal what do you mean by armaan was there?
S:lier!!Spill the beans...NOW!!!
K:Sweety you know what i mean😉
R:Acha Guys I wanna tell you something
S:what???
K:Armaan just proposed u???😆😆😆
R:nooooooooo Kunal...well I am going out for Dinner tonight with Armaan
S:hmmm..Dinner or Date?
K:Date! Date!
R:No guys its a dinner(Liar Liar pants on fire😆😆😆)
R:Acha guys..I need to go now...Armaan will come to pick me up in an hour..
S:oooo..ok go go...cya...have fun...byeee
K:i am still telling you simran its a date...bye sweety

Riddhima got offline.

After that, she went to her closet and was about to pick a white skirt when Muskaan came.

"Yaar ridz..Why dont you wear traditional clothes today?And ya pick white color!," said Muski

"ya yaar..I know...but why traditional clothes?," asked riddhima

"Because armaan never saw you in it. It would be like a surprise for him," said Muski

"hmm..nice idea..I will go get a shower," said Riddhima and went to take a shower

"ok," said Muski and she also left


Riddhima was all ready and sitting in the Dinning Room.

The doorbell rang and riddhima got up to open the door.

As the door open, Armaan could only say one thing,"wow". He was so much in a shock that words got stuck in his mouth.





This is in her right hand thumb
This is in her right hand, ring finger

This is in her left hand, in second finger, or in other words the finger smaller then the largest.

"Hi Armaan," said Riddhima.. to break Armaan's trance and she was really shy now

"Hi Riddhima and this is for you," said Armaan, as he recover from the shock and gave her the bouquet of red and white roses her favorite (mine too😆)






"May have the pleasure?," asked Armaan showing his hand

"The pleasure is all mine," said Riddhima giving her hand in his

Like this they went to the car.





Then Armaan opened the door for Riddhima. After that he went on the other side and sat on the driving seat.

"Basket..you look really beautiful today...just like an angel😃," said Armaan

"Thanks☺️....you are also looking really handsome...i bet if any girl will see will fall in love with u😉....and thx for the roses😃," said Riddhima

"will you fall in love with me," mumbled Armaan but Riddhima heard him and just smiled

"My pleasure my lady," said Armaan😉(for the roses)

"hehehehe
😆... did you just saw some movie or what?" said riddhima

"Ummm...No...this is all MY natural talent," said Armaan

"Oh😲 I see...but i didnt know that😕," said Riddhima

"Well,you see its my hidden talent," said Armaan😊

"Hmm.." said Riddhima

"Ok..so, where are we going?" asked Riddhima

"Ummm...cant tell..its a surprise," said Armaan😛

"Acha...ok how far is it?" asked Riddhima

"Not really close or far...just ten more mins and we will be there....umm wanna hear songs?," said Armaan

"Sure," said Riddhima😊

Ok. So Dr. Armaan Malik has full planned it...he even made a CD with all romantic songs...So first one was Phele Bar Mohabbate Ki Hai...then the second one was Dil Ibaadat... and the third and the last one was Tuhi Meri Shab Hai.

Those songs were almost saying all the things Armaan wanted to say to Riddhima.

Finally, they got there. As Armaan parks the car, he told Riddhima to sit. Then he came to Riddhima's door and opened it for her.

"Shall we," asked Armaan again showing his hand

Riddhima just put her hand under his.

They walked to the door. Armaan just knock on the door twice and the key fall from up in riddhima's hands.

"Go open it," said Armaan

Riddhima use the key and unlock the door and move inside but a bit scare as it was all dark.

As Riddhima took ten steps. She asked Armaan,"why is it so dark?"

"One min," said Armaan

Armaan clapped twice and the lights switch on and there were petals of red roses falling on Riddhima. Riddhima was on a full shock but she closed her eyes and took a twirl around on that spot.

When the roses stopped falling, Riddhima opened her eyes and look around.

(guys i am not really gud in description and doing it for the first time so...plz if its not really gud then i am sorry...really sorry.. i hope u like it😳)

They were in a hall, a party hall. It was decorated by read and white roses, red and white ribbons, red and white balloons and candles. The hall was not really big or small, it was just perfect. There were two big windows, framed with red and white roses as a mix. Then there were two sofas on both corners and in front of it was a small table, glass table. On the table there were three candles; one big and two small, the small size candles were standing on the both sides of the big one, in a line. Then in a corner there was a table for two. Which was a little decorated by roses too in the end and a candle in the middle. Actually if u see around the whole hall was lighten by the candles, the candles were by the window also.

When riddhima turned around she saw armaan with his hand out," would like to have a dance with me."

"Suree.." said Riddhima as she put her hand in his.

(Hey guys here is the link of the song...if u want u can hear it Khuch Khass Hai

As the music started, they just move on the beat.

Kuch khaas hai,(armaan came and hold riddhima's hand and sang)
Kuch paas hai,(armaan a bit more close and put his both hands on her waist and made her put her put her hands on his neck and sang)
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,(armaan came close and sang that line in riddhima's ears)
Kuch du
riyan, nazdikiyan,(armaan went few steps back and twirl her and then again pull her back to him and sings the line)
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,(Riddhima smiles at armaan and sang the line)
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,(Armaan removes a thread of hair from riddhima face)(and on the other half he puts her hand on his heart and sang)
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,(Armaan sang as he is thinking)
Haan hai shayad,(Armaan sang as he nods his head)
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,( Armaan sings this line as he is asking riddhima all this, with different expressions)
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,(Armaan acts like he is thinking about it and sings the line)
Pyaar hai shayad..(Armaan came close to her and said looking straight in her eyes)

They just move on the beat of the music

Kuch khaas hai,(Riddhima keeps her right palm on Armaans face and sang)
Kuch paas hai,(Riddhima hugs him and sang the lines)
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,(said Riddima as Armaan twirl her around)
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,(Riddhima moves back and the comes close and sings the lines)
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,( Armaan just smiles seeing her happy, sang Riddhima)
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,(Riddhima looks in Armaan eyes fully drown... and then again she puts her hand on Armaan's heart and sang the rest of the line)

Shayad yeh pyaar hai,(Riddhima sang slowing nodding her head)
Haan hai shayad,(Sand Riddhima with a huge smile on her face)
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,(Riddhima sings while opening her hands out...and on the other half she acts like she is waiting for someone)
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,(Riddhima acts like she is thinking and sang)
Pyaar hai shayad..( Riddhima sang the lines and Armaan twirl her and pull her back to him)

They just keeping moving on the rhythm of the song

Kuch saaz hai jaage se jo the soye,(sang Armaan as he didnt do any special movement and just let the words do all the work)
Alfaaz hai, chup se nashe mein khoye,(sang Armaan, as acting like their are words hidding around them)
Nazrein hi samjhe yeh guftagu saari,(Riddhima sang, as their eyes talk volumes..without any words)
Koi arzoo ne hai angdayi li pyaari,(Riddhima sang... just look intensely in his eyes and then ruffle armaan's hair, as she just wanted to know how soft are they, which she never wanted to do that before)
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,(Armaan just put one thread of her hair behind her hair which was blocking his view, and Armaan sang)
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,(Armaan sang...as he is realizing it is love)
Haan hai shayad,(Armaan sang as he had a confidence in his voice)
Naa inkaar hai, naa iqraar hai,(Riddhima sang as if saying i dont disagree but i dont even confess...she was doing all this by nodding her head and tell all this by her eyes)
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,(Riddhima sang as if she knew it is love..as if she has realized it)
Pyaar hai shayad,(Riddhima sang and put her head on her Armaan's heart..her arms wrap around his waist...)

They stand like that..swaying their bodies on the beat of the song

Kehna hi kya, mera dhakal naa koi,(Armaan...sang and pointed to himself and then shake his head to left and right... as saying no)
Dil ko dikha, dil ki shakal ka koi,(Armaan sang.. as he pointed to his heart and then cupped Riddhima's face..)
Dil se thi meri ek shart yeh aisi,(Riddhima.. as if saying...what was that?)
Lage jeet si mujhko, yeh haar hai kaisi,(Riddhima sang.. as if even though i won...why do i think i lost???)

Kyun Yeh Pukaar Hai, Kyun Bekaraar Hai,(Armaan sang..as saying why is it
like a pull to wards u???...why i do i always be with u???)

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, (Riddhima sang as if he knew it now that it is love)
Pyaar Hai Shaayad,(Riddhima sang...as if she knows now)

Jaadu Sawaar Hai,Na Ikhtiyaar Hai,(Armaan sang...as if he is making riddhima
understand...that
the magic is so much that m not able to control myself)
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai,(Armaan sang..as if he is sure about it now)
Pyaar Hai Shaayad,(Armaan sang..saying it is love)

Ooo..
Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Haii..
Ra ra re'na na na
Ra ra ra ra..
Na re na..
Pyaar hai shayad
Pyaar hai shayad
Yahi..

The above lines..they sang as they move with the music..lost in their own world...no wish to come out...

When the song ended...Riddhima was in Armaan's arms

Riddhima moved away from Armaan...As she leaves him...It got all dark...She called Armaan but their was no reply....


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The date has not ended nor did the night
its full of surprises
and u never know what comes next
and its not a precap
its just the warning on the coming fire



Hey guys...
sorry for the late update
its was really stuff
and long too
if u see the length
and the hardest part was the song sequence
it took me three days
so sorry
i will try and inshallah will upload next part in two or three days
tc all and plz click the like botton and do comment



and sorry for the replying to the comment indivually
sorry
i will do that for the last update
as i dont want to waste my time there
so i work on the parts but i love ur comments and thx a lot for them

tc and plz comment

luv maryam

Edited by armaankashridz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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res will comment soon.....:)
Edited by lucario - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
soo cute......hayyeeee......
loved it.....awesomeeeeee part....
update superrrr soooon....
😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
YAY mary u updated....
it was really a very cute part, i must say that.
lovely work with the song sequence part.
u already know right, how much i love them ?
HEHE it was really fab.
please update the next part soon,
its gonna be fun 😃
Love you !

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