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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
heya gunsi & naz
sorry 4 late comment
its awesme guys really love the first chapter & intro
thnxxxxx pm me do pm me next tym
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
awesum work guys...it was so touchin

very beautifully written.....update soon ...luved dis part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
@antara- lol...hmm... m glad u liked it and shaan's chracter dear.....

@mehek- aww.. thanks a bunck honeykinns.....yup we'll do it very soon

@alishe- thanks sweety we'll soon update

@chandz- thanks sweety.....yup indeed...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
@sneh di- thanks a lot dii..... for appreciating.......

@deepi- ummm....thanks...glad u likd it!!!

@samratrocks- u'r welcome sweety!!....and dont be sorry u 'r not late......thanks a bunch

@krithika di- thanks a bunch dii....glad u liked the different tinge of shaan............❤️

@deepali di- thankss a lot

@gk_fan- thanks a lot....okey we'll add u up!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
@sonyo di- thanks a bunch we'll continue and update and pm u very soon.....😆

@jhanvi di- hey dii dont be sorry u r not late rather we r in updating.....😆 nehow.... thanksss

@preeths- thankss a lot preethi......glad u lovd it!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: hira_123

Hey my SaVni-licious babes.......OMG what a pleasant suprise......

Ok so Gunzii and Naz firstly I loved the title of ur FF that is what made me visit ur thread and read.........

The father-son bonding is fabbb but poor Shaan he is sooo lonely I am awaiting for someone (you know who...)....to enter his life........

Flashback was really cute...him and his mum...aaww......

Lovely part 1...plz do continue this FF and also PM me love u guys oodles..u r doing ur di proud.....mwahz xx



omg finally u replied dii
aww... thanks for liking the title.... m glad it forced u to read it....😆
yeah yeah read next part and u'll cum to know bout who.......😆
thanks a bunch diii.......😊
awww.... we r blessed!!!😃😊
we'll pm u for sure
😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Introduction part -2



She opened her eyes, sun was kissing her cheeks. She got up, out of the bed and went to the open window.........Slow morning bliss blew her tresses away and revealed a sweet face, smiling at the beauty of the morning.

she freshened up and reached for her bag.......But stopped as her phone rang!

Her friend spoke from the other end

friend: Hello Ria!

Ria: yup am ready! Just coming in few minutes...

Friend: Ria! where are you coming?

Ria: college!

Friend: college is over! You forgot right!

Ria: oh no! Yaar not again..........Acha waise why did u call?

Friend: oh I wanted to ask whether you got the pictures or not!

Ria gazes at the new arrival on her table........

Ria: Umm........ yeah I got it!

Friend: I've to go for now will talk to you later.

Ria: Bye!

She opens the folder and finds a lot of pictures from the farewell party. She sorts them out in order and starts residing them into an album.

Suddenly, someone knocks on the door.

Ria: Mumma! You know you don't need permission to enter your daughter's room.

Mum: No dear par puchne mein kya jaata hai! You know when kids grow up they want to spend time alone and have their own interests.

Ria: Mumma! Aap bhi na hadh karte ho!

Come here naa! (she lovingly lies back in her lap)

Mum: how was your farewell party dear.......????

Ria: oh mum it was great we had a lot of fun.......... it was the best ever......just superb......we just cherished every second of it.......she suddenly got up and grabbed the album and started

Ria's mother kept gazing at her while Ria went on talking and explaining each event of last night's party......!!! she was quite; smile was on her face but inside something was pinching her.

Look mum that's priyanka....she was jus dancing like a monkey and there is suparna she is an awesome person but very naughty Ria pointed at the picture, then she turned to next one and so on.......but suddenly she realized her mum's eyes. They were having that basic motherly sadness symbol.....tears....

she knew her mum would not tell her straightway what was bothering her...so she decided to change the topic....

Ria: So how was your day today?

Mum: it was lengthy as always.

Ria: But I know my mum managed everything really well, Right!

Mum: oh yes....absolutely

Ria: mum! (her eyes gazing into her mother's and trying to find what's wrong...)

mum: Ria! I wanted to tell u something.

Ria: hmm....

Mum: today my boss gave me promotion but.......

Ria: wow!! mum congratulations...... (she hugged her tightly).....

Mum: but it requires us to shift to another city........they have transferred me.

Ria: so! It's decided!

Mum: I'm afraid. But yes it is.

Ria: so when r we moving? (Ria reacted totally opposite of what her mum was expecting... rather than being sad about leaving her birth place she seemed to be excited to explore the new place)

Mum: tomorrow. (she was happy to hear that Ria acted so maturely and was rather happy about the whole thing)

Ria: bas itni choti si baat pe itna tension...Mumma budhe ho jayoge...wrinkles aa jayenge...chill karo! mazey karo! (she giggled) we are moving to a new place.... different things to explore naa!!... but of course we will miss this place... specially this house and dad's memories. teardrop fell from her eyes....But Mumma we aren't leaving this place... just moving on with good memories....Like dad always said "happiness and sadness are a part of life and we need both to survive and spend a lovely life time"

so just cheer up Mumma....

Mum: love you my sweetheart

Ria: love you too Mumma


Edited by Gunseerat - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
this part was totally rocking😊
the ria n mom part was juss too gud👏👏👏
very well done guns n naz👍🏼
cont. soon😃
thanx for the pm😳

Edited by juhi_karneet - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
luv it!!!!!.......add me ttoooo in the pm list!!!:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
dat was very well written di.....luvd it !!!!
waiting for updates!!!!

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