Maaneet FF: A Twisted Fate #1: Link Pg. 148

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#351

well.
of course you update after i go to bed.
thank you.

idk if i shud comment or not, i mean, dont even bother to tell me...

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#352

Loveeeeeee the update.

Poor maan.Lolzzzz

Continue soon.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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-Urvi-

@-Urvi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#353

I would say this was worth the wait, but the wait was too long. 😆 Even then though, I loved it!! The romance 😉 and ofc the fights. CUTE!

Looking forward to the next update 😃

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#354

i decided to comment

haha

"Suniye JI?" he questioned, a look of surprise on his face.

"Kya, should...should I call you something else?" Geet questioned sweetly, biting her lip to control her laughter.

"Well...you usually call me Kha-...Oh wait, nope, Suniye JI is just fine" Maan answered. Ha! He was not going to announce to his friends that his wife called him Mr. Khadoos. How utterly embarrassing!

that was one the best parts, mr. khadoos....
poor maan doesnt know whats wrong with his wifey....
that handsome devil.....

loved the end lol
ooooooooo nainz i cant wait for moreeeeeeeee

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#355

OMG how freakin awesome is this ff?

Naina.. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease add me to ur PM list!! Plz plz plzzzzzzz! 😳 😆

I was just browsing through the ff section tryina find a Maneet ff that might interest me.. when I stumbled across this one.. I was intrigued instantly, which just got me reading til the last update..
omg.. its different, fresh, the concept and everything! It got me cracking up god knows how many times!! It's written mega-fantastically!!!

I don't even know where to begin... the beginning maybe?? 😆 Maneet's first meeting was fab + getting rid of Dev + bringing forward Armaan, Angad, Ridhimma and Kripa - its my fav 3 jodi's so I was all smiles at the arrival of the other 2!! I quite like their little role as Maneet's friends they're lotsa fun to have around, but very honestly I get the most fun picturing Maneet behave as though they're at war with one another! Simply outstanding ff!! i love this like sooo much already and am pretty annoyed at not discovering it earlier..!! Blergh.. oh well i'm here now and super happy!!

You've got an amazing style of writing, I just didnt wanna stop reading! As soon as i read the last part I was like ohhh mannn! No more parts???! Pleeeeeeease update soon!! I genuinely cannotttt wait!! (which reminds me, I'm glad u opted for more frequent updates, than once in 2 weeks!!)

Also, I love the characters of Geet and Maan, they're a little hatke from their characters in the show, just slightly. Well... Maan's not as cold and Geet a lot more confident which is just great! The parts have been cute, super steamin hot! and a right laugh! Fabbbbb-uuuu-lous ff!! You've put together something I have fallen in love with so fast so i'm really looking forward to ur next update so pleeease do add me to ur pm list - would love to read lotttttts more of this and see where u take it !!

I'm just thinking of all the potential maneet moments coming up.. aaaaaah! cant wait!!!!!

Huge hugs for writing something Oh-So-Aaaa-may-singggg-ly..... Minnnnnnd-blowwwwing!

Saz

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