The Perfect Painting l AR OS - Page 2

heyyy dear,
nice shot
do write more



love
Riddss

Originally posted by: seert

Lol you dedicated it to urself since ur bday is coming up??? And ya it is quite short. haha yep. i've dedicated it to myself 😛

It's not exactly sad but it just makes you ponder. Hmm and well there are no lines and it's pretty much a narration hence it's a bit different.
Okay Armaan's a quiet painter who has been admiring her from afar and keeps obsessing over her? Seems very different from the DMG Armaan but nonetheless its a good characterization. Altho to me he seems a bit like a loser. 😆 i won't put it so crudely, but yes he is a loser 😆

All in all though it was a very different yet good OS :)
And its not trashy.

wow that was really nice... please write more...

Originally posted by: chahat_j

wow that was really nice... please write more...

Originally posted by: missypatel

hmm...something it was...none of it felt like it came from you :D but it was a decent read!

It was AR allrite, now lets see you write AS/KaSh ...(they are not the same for me anymore and many others i would think)

nij

Ermm.. Double Yayyy!!! First you updated Tum Mile and now a OSHOT Happy Hannah :)

*reserved* I just read Tum Mile and commentedhehe!!

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I loved this Neetz👏. I loved how Armaan was an artist, and his thoughts and feelings were all emoted through his art. My fave bit was when you delineated the scene in which he decides to sketch it in pencil, because colour cannot suffice her being as in personality. It was all too beautiful... It was like she was a beautiful dream which he had woven, and as the reality hit him she faded away, the same way the pencil lines faded in the water.

ONE WORD B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.

Looooooooads of Love
Hannahxx

@Neetz: I guess calling him a loser was a bit crude but nonetheless he seems like one in the OS.

@missypatel: I agree that AR are just not the same anymore. Like it feels weird reading their FFs and I always have to think about old times to get into that mindset. I guess I ought to thank the CVs for ruining that.

Originally posted by: Zaynoo2320

Wow Neetz. my heart beats are fast after reading these. Heartbreaking but so...wonderful. Loved it Neetz, amazing job.