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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_shona

hii Rajita... 😊

wow one more RN ff...
nice prologue...seems interesting... pls continue soon.....
waiting for the 1st part.....

Thank you shona...uum is that ur name....i am assuming it to be...hehehe...plzz tell me if i am wrong...
I'll continue soon....and it feels wonderful to have u here...😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: prerna1

prolouge seems interesting
update the first part soon

Thank you prerna...i'll update soon...great to see you here...!!!!😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina.patel

seems interestin! good job and im looking forward to the next update! :)

Thanx Naina....😃😃...i'll update today evening....b/w if Naina happens to be ur name, then u seem to have quite some similarities wid the characters out here....😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: sania_58

hii Rajita,

interesting prologue

plz continue soon

Hiii Sania...thanx and yes, i'll continue soon.....nice to have you around.....😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiii Rajita,
Nice prologue.. U have written so beautifully 👏 👏 👏 👏 .so happy to see another RN fic 😃 😃 😃
wo ladhki naina hi haina...stupid question right...aur kaun ho saktha hain...jaldi se first part post karo...so eager to know about nainas love marriage
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiii Rajita,

Nice prologue.. U have written so beautifully 👏 👏 👏 👏 .so happy to see another RN fic 😃 😃 😃
wo ladhki naina hi haina...stupid question right...aur kaun ho saktha hain...jaldi se first part post karo...so eager to know about nainas love marriage

Thank u so much Yogitha.....
Waise tumhara question stupid nahi hai.....just that seems like ur sense of obviousness is pretty strong....hehehehehe....😆😆😆😆.........yup, i am just abt to post the next part....and i love to have u here....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
PART-1
Naina Singh Ahluwalia....that was me....a simple girl....in fact too simple...hehe......i was 17 when I met my dear husband.....at Pooja's place.....serious, he was....very serious....in fact sadu types.....and later on I had known the reason.....trust me I can't blame him....that's what I had always expected out of an IITian....but my husband comes later.....First my dear Pooja....she was...argh....is my best friend.... fine she did end up as my so called Nanad...but she still remains my best friend...... During school days, we would plan to skip school together...if she wasn't coming...trust me the teachers would automatically put an absent mark for me too...and vice-versa......we would mostly do things together....assignments, homeworks, projects.....my parents knew a day before a final submission of a project that I wasn't going to be home so soon....and vice-versa....ok, fine only we knew exactly how much be studied in a combined study hour...haha.....😉😉😉😆😆😆😆😆

Now before my husband feels neglected....though I wouldn't mind it at all as he is the reason for my sleepless nights.....but then only I know a wife's heart....Rajveer Singh Shekhawat.....my Rajveer....and I suddenly realize I am missing him too much.....i had met him at Pooja's place the first time....and I had known that he was her first cousin.... studying in IIT Delhi...Pooja's parents were his local guardians.....anyways all that is really not important......What is important is he would occasionally come to Pooja's place during holidays....and I generally used to be in Pooja's place only.....and a guest coming at her place did not change it a bit....i would still be there....and her guest would be my guest too.....haha.....😆😆😆

In the starting it just remained formal exchange of pleasantries but soon it developed in what u can say acquaintance... Obviously when he would always find me at her house....he considered me like a part of Pooja's family only.....thanks to him he did not take me as his younger sister just as he did to Pooja....😳😳😳😳😳

He would guide us in maths.....i think that did the work....i was in awe.... i...pooja also.... weren't all that good in maths...and goodness....he was a genious....he could literally speak in maths.....and obviously no one lets go of an opportunity to study maths from an IITian when u know u have a stupid board exam in not less than a year.....🤢🤢🤢

So it began like this....he would teach us maths....and we would study....ok, he could teach for hours..... and in the middle Pooja would make all sorts of excuses to stop him from teaching....sometimes she supposed we were hungry and would run off to make maggi exclusively for us....... or at other times she would keep on coming up with funny remarks on each formula of definite integration...but surprisingly....with him I could study for hours....considering the fact I was no better than Pooja in prolonged concentration...... at that time I really did not realize this....but it didn't take Pooja long to figure this out......and what then!!!.....😲😲😛😛😛😛

Like all friends she was behind our lives....her teasings had no end....though she wouldn't embarrass us in front of each other....yet she would tease us when we were not together....i knew she teased me till I was red...but I had not known that she teased him too....i got to know that after we started going around.....ok...ok...not breaking the flow....where were we....oh yes.....he would help us in maths and I would willingly be seeking his help.....then came days when we became friends....as in we would discuss our future....our individual future..... not having the least idea that we would end up sharing our future.....😊😊😊😊

Actually he would tell me what he aimed to do next...as for me.....in 12th....trust me I had no aims....it was only clearing 12th with good scores....i had not thought further....i did discuss my insecurities...and he would listen patiently....i never wanted to do B.Com...CA...etc etc....though I was in commerce....i felt I was not cut for all this.....i didn't like doing things in one way....i was too creative.... I liked to do things my ways....something after which I could say I made this....it was mine......

It was on one such day he had asked me whether I was interested in anyone......i had denied....but somewhere deep down.....something had twitched......i now know what that something was....i don't like lying....but that day I had lied...i definitely was interested in someone..... That someone was the one sitting right next to me while Pooja was again busy making Maggi....How I love Maggi....!!!!!!!😉😉😉😉😆😆😆

He did not broach the subject further and I remained silent.....how I hated that silence!!.😡😡😡😡....obviously any girl would hate it if she would have to it bear it for six long months ....he had his final exams at IIT and I had my boards.....though we did meet a couple of times in between there was nothing which could suggest he felt something for me...actually at that time he was too pressurized to be having a thing for any girl as a matter of fact...somewhere deep down this reassured me......but then it was toooo deep down to creep up each time I felt he could have initiated.....i decided after that I would concentrate on my boards....maybe because.... the anticipation of what to expect next would frustrate me....... never mind...all that happens definitely happens for good...... it helped me secure a good percentage in 12th.....else I would have been day- dreaming about him on my actual maths board exam also.....haha.....😆😆😆😆😆

It was after 6 long months..... by then my paagal stupid mann had actually given up hopes....instead it was trying to focus on what to do next....

On our last board exams....our meaning pooja and mine....what did you think.... just because rajveer and I had limited interactions......i wouldn't be meeting her as well!!!!....haha..... Pooja is too dear to lose.....infact she was the one who kept whatever little spark that remain alive......with her teasings acting as oil......argh I again got carried away....uum...yes there we were.....on the last day after the exams we had planned to celebrate and party hard.....to fly away etc etc.....parents knew we weren't going to home so soon.....as soon as we stepped out of the exam hall....there was a surprise awaiting me....matlab not just for me, Pooja also......

Rajveer stood there rotating the keys of Pooja's car in his index finger....waiting for me....uum not just me....Pooja also!!!......ok, why the hell am I blushing...😳😳😳😳😳..never mind..... I questioned Pooja why was he there??...and she answered mischievously " Obviously to pick you up and elope...but sorry dear, you'll have to manage with me..".😉😉😉......and then she had said something more which is.....well, uum censored....and thus can't be told..☺️.....smacking her arm with a glare and trying not to blush hard....we walked towards the gate....i had seen him noticing me while I was doing my whisperings to Pooja.....obviously he couldn't hear but I did notice a smile hovering on his lips...and damn, I knew!!!....he had noticed me blushing while Pooja gave me her typical wicked smile......

I...we met him at the gate and I tried my best to keep my lips curled in a straight smile.....uum straight smile!!!....smile is a curve,isn't it???.....damn, why are we getting into the mechanism of smile.....gotta do something with my flickering mind.....yup, and so from the exam centre itself we were off to Baskin Robbins....that ice-cream parlour........ I had expected him to come around and open the door of the car to let me out like a gentleman....you know like my Shah rukh would have done for his Simran, Anjali, Zaara...etc... especially when I sat next to him on the Front seat.... and before you think it was me who was desperate to get in besides him let me clear it....it was Pooja....who jumped on the back seat before I could get in...and as I was about to sit next to her, she commented on Rajveer for being our personal driver and commanded him jokingly to wear his uniform from tomorrow onwards....Cummon, it would have been inappropriate for me to let him seem so....Gosh, an IITian being a driver.... and so I sat next to him on the front seat.....

I can't forget the look he gave me..... he was amused initially because of Pooja....but as I sat next to him....his face turned in a reflex towards me.....close.....his eyes meeting mine....deep brown eyes..... he acknowledged my gesture and spoke an inaudible thank you for being next to him.....i was too lost to reply back..... it was the closest I had ever been to him....my heart had unknowingly did a bungee jump.... and then we had driven off after an exaggerated cough by Pooja....i may have forgotten her presence for a moment but all her attention was directed towards our actions and reactions.....but I really haven't been able to comprehend the look she gave us.......What had she expected us to do???...she had shut her eyes so tightly as if we were...aa...never mind......😲😲😲

And yes, since he hadn't been like what I had expected my dream guy to do for me....remember, he did not open the door.....and since I had been dreaming of him last I had dreamt of a guy.....i was disappointed....rather annoyed and the worst....i couldn't show it.....what reason was I supposed to give for my annoyance..😕😕😕.....but definitely my mood wasn't in its best swing..😡😡😡😡..... I had chosen my ice-cream.....Black current....while Pooja took a Fruit punch with ice-cream....but guess what I was irritated further with his choice of ice-cream....he took a butter-scotch....yuck....I mean a butter scotch...i couldn't help commenting " Rajveer, you know what you could have got that thing on a Quality walls ka thela also....you came all this way to Baskin's to have a Rs 70 ki butter scotch when you could have got it for 10 bucks there!!!! ...." I had expected him to argue back....and that would have been better.....instead Rajveer and Pooja looked at each other while controlling their smiles.....but as soon as they saw each other they broke in a fit of laughter......hey, tell me did I say something illogical!!!....

"Relax Naina, its my treat ....u can have as many ice-creams as you want....and it doesn't need to exotic ones you know....Thele waali bhi chalengi...you never know you may start liking the ones you don't like at your Quality walls thela"...Rajveer said sincerely....

"Aur kis khushi mein treat de rahe ho.....Getting married or what???"...i taunted

"Maybe if the girl agrees!!!"....he said taking a bite from where it might have melted on the cone....My eyes shot up at once...shocked!!....😲😲😲

"what...??...Do you want a bite??"....he asked me offering his cone....and that too so sweetly that for a moment I forgot my ice-cream.....

Cursing the makers of butter-scotch more severely this time I said a soft "No thanks".....while I still continued considering if I should try it once....but nah.... I so hate butter-scotch!!!!.....Luck wasn't on my side....Rajveer offered me his ice-cream....that too from his own cone....and yet I couldn't make myself have it....Damn the butter-scotch!!!😡😡😡😡😡

I looked down and concentrated on my black- current...which unknowingly had started tasting like butter-scotch...it was all silent...and as its said silence is an indicator of a storm at hand...

"And what if I had asked you to share my life instead of this butter-scotch...???"

It seemed like Rajveer's voice and it seemed that he spoke to me.....but I was not ready to believe it!!!!.....i was not ready to believe if the words meant what they convey....if he actually said it....or was it an illusion of my imagination...... I continued looking down unaware of all that around me...and my eyes looked up only when his fingers brushed my knuckles....he saw the confusion....the dilemma....and at once cleared it for me....." I am asking you to be a part of my life.....if its any better than the butter-scotch you dislike.....which I am not sure of???".....

"you mean it???...."

"Do I look like as if I am joking???"....he said softly....his lips curled in a small understanding smile....while his eyes held all the sincerity I had ever seen in anyone...for me!!!...

After what seemed like hours I spoke hesitantly.....

"I don't know if it will work...."

"Say yes, and we'll make it work....together"

I did not answer.... I again stared at the wooden table....slightly numb....god knows why I was staring at it when I had better things to look at....

"take your time....i have all the time in this world for you"....that was ironical considering the fact I had seen him in a hurry all the time....meeting dead ends....constructing schedules....and working non stop for long stretches....i was the opposite....taking time....doing things as and when I liked....working leisurely....working on the same thing for days which seemed useless......and coming up with one master-piece when I knew the world would have developed so much in that time-span..... I was unsure....of myself....this was what I had wanted for so long....and when it was there I was hesitant....

Maybe because I had remembered what my bhabhi told me long ago....she said nothing comes so easy....and when it does come easy we lose its value.....she was true....but maybe at that time I had underestimated our relationship....i had thought it to be easy......but it was not less than a world war-III.....😛😛😛

And then that was it........ I had decided to ponder over his proposal...... though somewhere deep down I had known the answer..... My heart knew the answer.... it just needed time to convince my mind..... Meanwhile there was surely one thing which I was forgetting..... POOJA!!!!.... but then she was just there to remind me of her presence..... all through our conversation....i vaguely remember her sitting silently....listening attentively and yes I remember....her eyes held hope the one time they met mine....... but then now the heavy mind boggling conversation was at its end.... the conclusion being that I had promised Rajveer to answer at the earliest......

Then what.....Pooja had all the time to express her laughter, excitement and teasing for the rest of the afternoon.......though I have told her numerous times how I hated her for that afternoon yet I would never tell her that I was grateful to her at the same time for being there and silently sail me through with her mere presence.....and I am sure Rajveer felt the same....i guess without her both of us would have freaked out of nervousness and awkwardness.....and might have broken up before being actually committed .....haha...😃😃😛😛😆😆😆... However, she is not all that sweet.... this time she did not spare either of us....she teased us together and somewhere in between I had known it was their combined plan....the brother-sister had ganged up to surprise me.......and surely I was shocked!!!!....😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😳😳😳😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok. Guys here goes the first part....phew...i hope u guys like it....do leave a comment....i am waiting eagerrrrrrlllllllllllyyyyyyyyyy.....hehehehe
Secondly, i need to know something....yaar, exactly how does one edit the title of the fic.....as i said its my first fic....help me out....how do i mention the page no. where i have recently updated????
Thirdly, uum abt the PM list thing....i mean tell me how do we create it....i think we would need to add each other to our buddy list...rite???...if that soo, tell me....either you add me or i add you....hehehehe...
Fourthly....tell me if the update has gone way tooo long and it is kinda getting boring to read....yaar the problem is i don't know how to write less.....i always would end up leaving my question paper...hehehe.....if its getting too long, i'll try my level best to finding breaking points in the middle...
Fifth, i think if i keep on updating like this then this would turn out to be a micro mini fic....hahahaha....nevertheless i don't know yet....wid my bad habit of writing long, it may turn out quite large....hehehe
Bye and wid loads of love...
Rajita....
PS: plzzz mention ur names beneath your posts....else i don't know wat to call you...oopps....manage wid this dumb head....hehehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb
damn cool
i loved it
continue soon
and plz pm me

rituka
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Rajita

How r u????
Update was brilliant..👏👏👏
U know I really love this story..😉 Its different n very sweet..
Raj being an IITian must b the coolest guy in his college..
So he is guiding his cousin n her friend in Maths which he loves n they hate..😆😆
But gradually he falls for Naina ..i mean its says that opposite attracts..
Both r falling hard for each other but they dont have the courage to express their feelins..😊
Pooja knew dat something is brewing between her brother n friend n she can't help teasing dem both..
The proposins scene was quie gud..😉 even I hate butter-scotch ..How can any1 like dat..But again its because of that ice-cream Raj is able to express his feelings for Naina..😃
Naina was shell shocked..She didn't knew how to react at his proposal..

Your love is so strong and bright
it leaves me with a smile when i fall asleep at night,
when im dreaming hours seem as minutes
because i cherish every moment with you in it,

Waking up to your voice "good morning"
sends my heart and soul high a soaring,
love is said to last only till death
but our love will prove stronger than our final breath,
what i am saying is i love you for heavens sake
and when we die our love begins again at heavens gate.

I hope Naina accept his proposal soon..
Continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago

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