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amrutha,akhila

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Posted: 15 years ago

#231

superb start mahak.... i would definitely love to read more...😃😃 do continue soooooooooon...........

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hazra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#232

nice beginning...

aussum update..

and continue soon...

love u..

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jasmeet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#233

Wow..mahek.

Nice beginning....I can't wait till the nxt update.👍🏼

BTW can u update..."kaise woh pyaar tha"..

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490362

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Posted: 15 years ago

#234

Lovely Mahak...
Liked it very much..
Gr88 job..
Thnx for the PM..

😊

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kirti123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#235

wow mahak just loved it
thanks for updating it
and do update ur other ffs to
atleast we can enjoy mayur together through ffs na
thanks for the pm 😊 😊

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Deepali Seta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#236

Wow dear...........
Grr888888 start..............
Seems u r quite creative..........
Luvd it very much..............
continue soon.............😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Asmara.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#237

Lovely start.....

And awesome part.................

Continue soon..................................

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#238

awesome start dear!!......lovely first chapter!!.....just loved it!!.....so nupur is going to be her PA???......anyways......love u for updating it!!!!!!........plzzzzz update the next part soon!!!!

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mjht_admirer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#239

hey my dear jaanuable mahak.

1st thanks to ur frnd who challenged u to write a romantic story and m sure u will win this challenge with very high flying colours. 😉

@Daksha: - Awesome VM dear. ekdam extra super special awesome. Mahak is riight, no other VM can be better than this.

hey mahak back to u. actually i have not read the chapter but it sounds really really super exciting. U r already a gr8 writer n tht also on mayur and romantic FF matlab super sweets ki jelebi jaisa treat. 😆😆

i will the chapter and then edit my part.

*reserved for chapter 1.
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yaar meri pyaari si nanhi si jaan. what an intro chapter yaar!!! ekdam awesome. the starting lines itself gave me butterflies in my stomach n chudail Suzzane !! Abhi uthana tha kya??? how ridiculous. hehe. 😆😆 n look look whoz looking hot in red and blue. hmmmm.

awesome update yaar. plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon. thanks for the pm too.

loads of love
vinu

Edited by mjht_admirer - 15 years ago