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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#251

saw all your three posts

how many times do i have to tell you

that you should not be nervous abt posting your updates

your updates are always amazing

and this update was rocking

nupur's dream...... by god........ mar jawan

and her hindi....... that's the best

mayank needs a p.a

hope it's nupur

waiting for their unexpected meeting

and the reply to my comment

continue soon

loads of love

mahima

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Aqsa

@awsumgirl

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#252

Beautiful beginning Mahak...

It seems intresting but it was really very short...

Plzzzzzzz do continue soon..........

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#253

like the whole part😃

con soon

rumki

Edited by .rumki. - 15 years ago

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Varsha

@-krazyriya-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#254

Hey.... hi mahak....😊

yaar tu kaha gayab rehti hai... aajkal tujhse baat hi ho pati.....

anyways....yeh sab baatein baad mein karungi..... first of all I'm really sorry for commenting so so late.....😭😭

but i told u the reason nah.......so i know my sweetheart will forgive me in a second....... right 😆...??

Now.......

what an unexpected beginning yaar !! 😲😲

It was totally rocking !! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

the update was awesome... mindblowing..... cute... funny...cool...rocking.. but the most beautiful !! 😳😳😳 (for this ff, i have given different tags if u have noticed...😉)

yaar.... i have fallen for it.....totally fida on this !! 😍😍

oh my gosh.... the dream.... ab uske baare mein kya kahu yaar.......😳😳

it was super duper romanticccc....😳....... i'm just drooling over it.... 🤪. still lost in mayur dreamland.....😍

but aww.... it was just a dream.... as usual... totally unexpected....😆😆

i just loved this Nupur yaar.... total bindaas types....😉😉😉

bechari suzanne.... she wasn't getting anything..😆😆... that Nupur was saying about her..😆

nupur saying her... ''chudail friend''..... n '' mann toh karta hai ki tumhara khoon kar doon.... bewakoof kahi ki !'' ... wowww.......lol.. 🤣

it was super duper rocking funny scene yaar..... itna has has ke toh ab mera stomach bhi pain hone laga hai yaar.....😆😆

so Nupur going to orphanage..... n Mayank to going to orphanage for donations.... great..😉😉... but i will not expect anything now.... bcoz its an unexpected FF nah.... 😆😆

omg.... Mayank ka attitude.... haye allah.... 😍😍

He is super cool..😎.....handsome hunk..😛..... n he possesses too much attitude yaar...(atleast what i feel from this part) ..... still loved him....😳

i'm fida on his style...... but i'm more fida on this bubbly bindaas Nupur.... 😉😉

stunning... marvellous.....just outstanding update dear.....👏👏👏

but dont u think.... it was quite small..... hai na... 😆😆

now... i just can't wait for the next part.......😔😔

just update it as soon as possible.......OK !!

yaar... i have tried to comment in an unexpected way this time..... hope u liked it !! 😕

yeh tera ''unexpected'' ka bhoot .... i guess mujh par bhi chad gaya hai....😆😆

love u forever my sweetest bubblypie....🤗
your varshu😳

Edited by -krazyriya- - 15 years ago

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#255

Awesum Update Mahi...👏
wonderful Beginnin... thou it ws a dream...
luvd Nupur's convos wid her chudail frnd...
ahh.. Mayu ws so rude.. but her smart secretary... gave him nice chakma..
wow .. d precap sounds interestin...
cant wait 4 d next update
pls update soon.. & next tym... i need a long update...
thnx 4 d pm...
luv u loads...

-supriya

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: ak12
res😳

*edited*

Ohk mahak... You are a sweetheart...🤗

And here i go about how i like the update..

Well, the beggining was nice..*wink* I think i can easily catch up with your hint!

Loved it all!

Nupur's awesome..

Mayank's money minded, eh?

expecting the unexpected!

Love,
Akansha

p.s. Sorry for troubling you thru the P.m.s yaara!

Thanks a lot.....

Akansha i don't think one can judge mayank in the first meeting itself.....

Mayank is money minded but not mean....

He is someone who can have two faces.....

Thanks for loving the update....

Glad u enjoyed it....

And u never troubled me through your pms....

They told me better......

I love Nupur too....

And the hint is gonna be used soon.....

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: ..Aisho..
Edited:

Momo im missing MN alot, and ur update made my day!

It was perfect one=)

Keep rocking, Aisho :((

Thanks a lot aisho....

Yup, even i am missing MN a LOT!

Thanks.....

Glad that u think that its perfect.......

I will try to do that.......

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: fanofmjht
awesome update
loved it
do cont soon

Thanks a lot.......

Glad that u loved it.......

Will hope that u will love the next part too.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: gopi06
lovely start
thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot......

Glad that u liked the start......

Thank u.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: myownarea
beautiful beginning Mahak :)

that was a dream LOL :) I thot it was real and those lyrics are so apt for MN :)

Very nice but short 😡 no short updates allowed ok? :)

he he write more n more :)

Thanks a lot divya di......

I am so glad that u loved the beginning.....

I am always afraid of the first part.....

Yup, that was a dream.......but ream become reality too....

Those lyrics would be used in the future updates....

Ohk....samajh gayi main.........no short updates!

I will write as much as i can......

Thank u.....

love,
Mahak

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: amritaluvarti
res
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its an awesum update mahak darling...👏

wowie..!! nupz dream😳..mayu mayu mayu jaldi milo nupz se so dat she wud c u in ur dreams😉

n nupz CUDHAIL type of frnd.😆..lolllzzz.....ROFL🤣..it was hilarious..lovely

hmm...nxt part mayur meeting..!!😆haye kaisi hogi unki meeting..😍...waitin 4 dat only...jaldi update kijiye janaab..!!

tnx 4 da pm....⭐️

Thanks a lot amrita....

I am so happy that u loved this part.....

Don't worry......mayank agle part mein usse milne waala hai.......

I am so happy that u found in hilarious.....

Unki meeting ekdum unexpected way mein hogi.....

Sure.....me updating today only.....

Thanks a lot.......

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar
wow
part 1 was like awesome
so really amazing
i totally loved Nupur
poor Suzi
u must really learn some hindi

thanks for the pm

pooja

Thanks a lot yaar.......

Glad that u loved the first part.....

Even i love Nupur......

Yup, but u don't know suzanne still.......

She won't learn it......warna kya maza aayega.......

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: nikki028
awesome start mahi.....i lovd tht nups interpretation of "chudail frnd" to Suzanne....😆😉......n so is nups gonna be mayu's new secratary???????????nywz...plzzzz continue soon...plzzzzzzz

Thanks a lot nikki.....

Glad that u loved that interpretation......

I think yeh prrofit toh har kisi ko milta hoga......

Umm......well yes........

But let's see which type of secretary.......

Sure, i am going to update today!

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: princess_52
lovely part

Thanks a lot......

Glad u loved it......

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: amritaluvarti

edited dear😊

Yup, i saw that!

Thanks for the wonderful review....

Love,
Mahak

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hazra

@hazra66

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#258

wow wow

aussum update..

so nice..

i loved reading it..

and dont forget to pm me..love ya..

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: stuti123
amazing update mahek ......... the first part was awesome ........... now rlly cant wait fo the next part plz do update soon ..............this FF is superb ..........loving it lots .........

Thanks a lot.....

I am so happy that u loved the first part.......

I am going to update today only.....

Thank u for thinking that this ff is superb......

Thanks.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: preitygal99
Hey mahak,

Such a nice begining.

The lyrics were awesuummm.

By making such a romantic start u hav just raised my expectations n me eagerly waiting for ur next part.

Loved every bit of this update.

Do continue soon.

Love

-Prachi

Thanks a lot.....

I am glad that u liked the beginning.......

Thanks for liking the lyrics......they are going to be used soon.....

I know that i have raised expectations.......

And i will try my level best to fulfil them......

I will continue soon.......

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983
mind blowing update loved it plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

Thanks a lot.....

I am happy that u loved it......

Thanks for thinking that it was mind blowing.....

i am updating today.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva
res

waiting......

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: ght_sajan
Loved it

Thanks a lot.....

Thanks for loving it....

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: SHINKI
wow
superb

conti.soon

Thanks a lot.....

Glad that u loved it.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: achoose
adorable beginning dear...loved it..............

Thanks a lot.....

Happy that u loved the beginning......

Abhi picture baaki hai........

thanks.......

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
nice, lovely update.
continue soon.

Thanks a lot.....

Glad u liked it.......

Love,
Mahak

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: hazraluvroka
wow wow
aussum update..

so nice..

i loved reading it..

and dont forget to pm me..love ya..

tc

Thanks a lot.....

I am so happy that u loved reading the update......

I won't forget to pm u ever.....

Thanks.....

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: kasufan4ever
Beautiful Upd.
Loved It Yaar....

Nupur Was Soo Cute..

Bt U Wrote Really Short Bt No Prob Atleast I Got Ur PM..!!

Do Cont.As Always Lovelyy n Long Part Soon

Thanks For The PM..!!

-Mehek-

Thanks a lot......

Thanks for loving it....

Nupur is very sweet.....

I know that it was short.....but next update would be big.....

You will always receive my pm......

Thanks a lot......

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces
awesome.........
do continue soon.......
the beginning was just too dreamy....
continue soon
pari

Thanks a lot....

the beginning is dreamy but not at at all unreal.......

I will surely continue soon.....

Thanks......

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva
oh mahak di!
its was so... mast!

A_M_Z_I_N_G!!! u know why? coz u astound me that u write sizzles and romance and tears and love all so greatly that now i have to go to dictionary to find more words and praise u.

i m sure ur friend who said u can't write intimatacy will now be satisfied that u always can!!!

cheers

thats was fab....

now only one thing,...............

please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks a lot deepika......

Thanks for loving it so much......

Aww.....thank u sooooooooo much......

I am so happy that i can portray all the emotions by my writing.......

Yup, anchal was jumping!

Thanks a lot........

I am updating today only.........

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: ..pebo..
Mahak before i begin my comment as usual a small line
i thank god for making me
i thank god fo making my hands
i thank god for making my fingers
i thank my techer for teaching me ABCD
WITHOUT these you wouldnt get my coment😆😆😆

ok whatwver lol.....
mahak im glad that u unexpectedly remembered an unexpected ff callef unexpected . wow! thank you so much for updating thiss ff soo soon its only been 18 day .. only rite . so fast !!! and your update is soooo long . 918 words( i actually counted) . so long . mahak next time i want ouble parts . i will pm everyone . but i want two . the introduction of nupur...... well nupur is nupur.how cool is it to give absuses 2 ppl on the face when they cant comprehend what o you mean . and mayan....typicall buisness man. money minded type.

Precap well hnmmmmm ver intresting but as you said it going yo br totally unexpected i better dont xpect anything so i am waiting for my two updates. all i can say short updates are illegal😡. sorry.

kay, love ya
update soon
pebbzz a.k.a priyal
ps:(my comment is actually half your update)

Awwle......priyal.......yeh lines kitni pyaari hain!

How sweet!

Hey mujhe hamesha hi yaad rrehta hai about my ffs!

Tum din gin rahi thi? baap re! u always shock me behen!

U counted the words even?

Yaar tum poori pagal ho!

meri pagal behen!

Lol.......acha baba......is baar bada update.....happy?

Tum un dono ko tab tak samajh nahi sakti ho jab tak tum unhe jaan na lo......

Yup, it is unexpected!

Lol.....short update illegal kab se ho gaye?

Tum toh hamesha is rule to tod deti ho!

Love u too sis.....

And i think ur update is half of my update!

How sweet!

Take care sis....

love u.....

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav
awesome yaar

Thanks a lot....

Glad u liked it,..

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: bhavana92
res

*edit*

yippee! u finally remembered 2 update this! *does a jig*
awesome start!👍🏼
but it was short yaar....
i know abt ur busy schedule...but also know that u love 2 write!😃
back 2 the update, marvellous one Mahi!👏
lol! Nupur does know how 2 'utilise' the fact that Suzanne doesn't know Hindi!😆
so it seems like Mayank n Nupur's 1st encounter is gonna happen at the orphanage n Nupur's gonna step into Mayank's life soon, possibly as his 'P.A'!😉
[of course, this is an assumption of mine unless u plan something else!😆]
waiting eagerly 2 read the next update....

Yup i did remembered this one.....

thanks a lot.....

Glad that u liked the start!

I know it was short.......

i will try to fill it up by the next update!

Yup i loveee to write.....

Yup, nupur knows that bhavana!

Yup.....u guessed that right......but not the way......

Let's see if u are right or not.....

I am updating today only!

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: sariska_mjht
Mahak as usual fabulous loved it jaana do cont soon

Thanks a lot.....

Glad that u loved it.....

I am updating today......

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Nice strt sweetie
Nups dream was lik Haaye😳

Mayu is too rude

Money can buy anythg so is it kya Mayu will buy Nups as PA

Mayur are gonna meet in next update haina

Plz update soon

Thanks a lot yaar.......

Nupur dreams a lot......

Mayu is not rude......first know him....

dekhti jaao na.....

Yup, they are gonna meet in the next update....

I am updating today....

Love,
Mahak